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Jul. 11th, 2007 01:31 pmTitle: Spread Your Wings; Chapter 6: Simple Things
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seinen_no and fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Die and Kaoru
Disclaimer: We own no one, only our dirty imaginations.
Summary: Die and Toshiya are unemployed and penniless, even sharing a crappy apartment as best friends although they can barely even afford that one either. Across the street there's a luxurious whore-house, and the two have the brilliant idea that they'll try to get inside information about how things are in there to be able to write a book about it, to cure all their financial problems. Everything doesn't go as planned though, and Die is fascinated by one of the prostitutes like a moth by a flame.
Comments:
fonulyn: This goes on straight where the previous chapter left off, and moves into a bit happier things towards the end. Heh, I at least like it that this includes a lotta stuff with Die and Kao together^^ And you get to also see Toshiya's reaction to Die's little adventure… Just like always, enjoy^^
seinen_no: I personally pitty poor Toshiya in this chapter. I mean, I can feel with him, feel the worries for his best friend who was acting so stupid. I always try to imagine how I would react if my best friend had just fucked somebody for money just to be close to that guy. I think I would've been harsher than Toshi, but I can't tell. And I honestly like the conversations in this chapter. I dunno, usually I'm not satisfied with how they flow or so, but here I like it since it shows the different personalities quite well. And I like Kyo, of course. He's just a cool bastard x) Okay, enough self-praise. Have fun reading, as usual and let us know what you think. Haha, and btw., I love to imagine the last scene. Almost there and then still nothing happens^^ *hugs you all*
Previously happened: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5
( next chapter here )
Author:
seinen_no and fonulynRating: NC17
Pairing: Die and Kaoru
Disclaimer: We own no one, only our dirty imaginations.
Summary: Die and Toshiya are unemployed and penniless, even sharing a crappy apartment as best friends although they can barely even afford that one either. Across the street there's a luxurious whore-house, and the two have the brilliant idea that they'll try to get inside information about how things are in there to be able to write a book about it, to cure all their financial problems. Everything doesn't go as planned though, and Die is fascinated by one of the prostitutes like a moth by a flame.
Comments:
fonulyn: This goes on straight where the previous chapter left off, and moves into a bit happier things towards the end. Heh, I at least like it that this includes a lotta stuff with Die and Kao together^^ And you get to also see Toshiya's reaction to Die's little adventure… Just like always, enjoy^^seinen_no: I personally pitty poor Toshiya in this chapter. I mean, I can feel with him, feel the worries for his best friend who was acting so stupid. I always try to imagine how I would react if my best friend had just fucked somebody for money just to be close to that guy. I think I would've been harsher than Toshi, but I can't tell. And I honestly like the conversations in this chapter. I dunno, usually I'm not satisfied with how they flow or so, but here I like it since it shows the different personalities quite well. And I like Kyo, of course. He's just a cool bastard x) Okay, enough self-praise. Have fun reading, as usual and let us know what you think. Haha, and btw., I love to imagine the last scene. Almost there and then still nothing happens^^ *hugs you all*Previously happened: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5
( next chapter here )
