[fic] Minho/Key – SHINee – Within the Night – oneshot

[rabenhorst]

Title: Within the Night
Author: fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Warnings: pwp
Pairing: Minho/Key (brief mentions of others, but… just minkey really)
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: When Kibum wakes up from his dream hot, bothered and incredibly horny, he takes it out on Minho. Who is a willing victim.
Comments: this is a sequel to Getting Uncontrollable (everyone/Key), but you don’t need to read it first if you don’t want to! all you need to know is that Kibum had a very vivid dream and now he’s telling Minho about it… (plot? what are those? can one eat them?) I have a feeling someone might slaughter me for making it only minkey instead of everyone ganging up on Key again but oh well 8D MINKEY SMUT AHOY.

Minho doesn’t protest when he’s being dragged out of bed in the middle of the night. It’s not the first time he’s had to go along with Kibum’s sudden ideas and inspiration, so he isn’t really worried about the suddenness even when he’s pushed down onto the couch and has a lapful of Kibum sitting on him. The kiss that follows makes the last bits of sleepiness evaporate into thin air, and instinctively he brings his arms around the other man to hold him close.

“You have no idea,” Kibum gasps as he pulls back, but he doesn’t finish the thought before he steals another one of those breathtaking kisses that could make anyone’s knees weak. “You have no idea what an amazing dream I just had!” He doesn’t wait for a reply before running his lips down Minho’s neck, still utterly determined to make Minho help him with the state of arousal he’s in.

Damn, waking up with an aching hard-on would’ve sucked so much more if he didn’t have someone willing to help him with it. Not that he keeps Minho only for that, but the sex certainly doesn’t harm anyone, either.

Minho seems surprised about the straightforwardness, after all it’s not usually typical of Kibum to just throw himself at him like this. He can sympathize though, it’s not like he never had wet dreams in his life and he knows how hot and bothered they can leave anyone. “What was it you dreamed of? Did you get laid?”

“No,” Kibum answers curtly and steals another kiss. This one involves way too much teeth and tongue, it’s not really pretty, but it makes up to that with sheer passion and it makes Minho’s toes curl. “I dreamed of sucking cock.” That’s not all of the dream but it’s the only part Kibum manages to voice out loud before aiming for Minho’s mouth again.

It’s impossible to miss the way Minho is already clearly out of breath when he gets the next change to speak. “You dreamed of sucking my dick?”

Kibum makes an impatient noise when Minho dodges the next kiss, and answers with a curt shake of his head. “No, Jonghyun’s.”

That instantly makes Minho’s eyes fly wide. “Jonghyun’s!?”

“Minho! C’mon,” Kibum whines in frustration as he is denied a kiss again. Instead he opts for grinding their hips together, rolling against the other man in a way that draws a long shudder from them both. “You made me do it!”

That doesn’t lessen the confusion. “What?”

Kibum realizes he isn’t going to get out of this without explaining, so he figures he can make the most of it. He drops his voice into a low purr as he meets Minho’s gaze straight. “You were all hot and commanding, Minho,” he drawls. “You told me to get on my knees and show Jjong how good I can suck cock.”

It’s visible how Minho’s eyes darken, how his next breath is a little deeper and more shuddering than the ones before, how his hips cant upwards to meet the delicious friction Kibum’s body offers. They’re both only wearing their pyjama bottoms and the fabric barrier is so thin it’s barely even there.

“I bet you did him really good, Kibum.” Minho sounds breathy, obviously turned on, and experimentally Kibum shifts on his lap to rub against him more. He can feel the physical reactions firsthand and it’s such a turn on he can’t hold back a low sigh, especially when Minho goes on. “How did he like it? How far in your throat did you take him?”

At that, Kibum’s throat goes dry and he struggles for words. “I –”

“No. Show me.”

It’s a command if he ever heard one and Kibum doesn’t reply, not with words. They both know that despite the feisty front he puts up he has a thing for Minho bossing him around, to a certain degree, and after some trial and error they’ve got it down pretty damn well, knowing what the other likes and what not. This, Kibum certainly likes, and that’s even an understatement.

With surprisingly much grace Kibum slides down on the floor. Minho spreads his legs to accommodate him and instantly Kibum’s hands are on the waistband of Minho’s pyjama pants. He can’t resist the temptation to press his palm on the obvious bulge where the pants do a very poor job in concealing how hard Minho already is, a wet patch on the colourful fabric. It earns him a hitched gasp and that’s reward enough.

Thankfully the garment is easy to get off and Kibum works it down past Minho’s butt, far enough to free his cock. He remembers the dream, remembers how he begun the blowjob there as if it’s etched into his memory. He hasn’t had a dream that vivid ever before so it’s easy to call back the details when he wants to. So he leans in and brushes his lips against the underside of Minho’s erection, licks a stripe along the large vein and closes his lips over the head, just like he did in the dream.

Minho is already shaking lightly underneath the ministrations, but it’s no surprise. Already the first time Kibum was on his knees sucking Minho’s dick he noticed how responsive the other man was. He bobs his head slowly for a good while, before he suddenly pulls back with an audible pop. Minho groans in protest but Kibum shushes him by swirling his tongue around the crown of his cock, murmuring the barely audible words against sensitive skin. “This is when I realized Taemin was watching us.”

He can feel the way it makes Minho shudder and goes on, a little more audibly. “He was touching himself, and Jjong pulled my head closer, made me take more of his dick.” Unlike the dream-Jonghyun, Minho loves the feeling of teeth so Kibum uses that knowledge to his advantage, nibbling lightly on the underside of Minho’s achingly hard arousal.

He is rewarded with a low moan that is so loud it’s nearly echoing off the walls. It’s ridiculous and they should know it’s bound to draw too much attention but it’s like sleep still clouds their minds. They don’t stop. Or maybe they’re just too horny to care.

Idly Kibum rubs himself through his pyjama pants as he drags his tongue over Minho’s slit. “Taemin was touching himself, watching how Jjong fucked my throat so hard,” he breathes out, “and while he did that, Jinki fingered me.”

As if urged on by that Minho grabs Kibum’s hair and makes him put his mouth back to good use on his cock. Kibum stretches his lips wide and allows Minho to dictate the rhythm. Usually he hates it when his hair is tugged on so forcefully, but right now it strangely just makes him feel hotter. He only moans around the thick arousal as Minho pushes his head down far enough to ignite his gag reflex.

Kibum is still rubbing himself through his pants as he hollows his cheeks, pulls back just an inch and is instantly forced back down. Minho’s voice seems to vibrate in his bones, rumble from his chest as he speaks with an incredible amount of lust laced in his tone. “Push your pants down, Kibum. Finger yourself for me.”

It’s such a turn-on Kibum doesn’t really know where to for a few seconds. He whimpers around Minho’s cock as he takes it in even deeper, before hastily trying to push his pants down to his thighs. Then, he brings a hand behind himself to rub his index finger against his entrance. It’s dry, which makes taking even one digit more difficult but he’s been through this enough times to know how to relax.

Kibum barely manages to push the finger in to the first joint when Minho tugs on his hair, lightly but enough to gain his attention. He looks up and Minho’s eyes are black, full of sheer need that mirrors in his voice when he speaks up. “Don’t be modest, Kibum. You can take two. At least.”

At first, Kibum isn’t completely sure about that but he can’t help but shudder as he nods lightly. Obediently he works in another finger, holding his breath for a few heartbeats until his body adjusts. He reaches his free hand back to grab his ass and spreads his buttocks to make it easier, to open himself up even more.

That seems to satisfy Minho, at least if the string of profanities falling from his lips is any indication. Kibum never thought Minho would be one for dirty talk, not even remotely, but he found out his error after they started sleeping together. He doesn’t think he’s ever been this happy about being proved wrong, though, as he soon realized what a kink he had in Minho’s deep voice.

The slick sound of Kibum’s mouth sliding on Minho’s cock is obscene in the otherwise silent room. A thin line of saliva is dribbling down the corner of his mouth and he tries to catch it with his tongue, his throat constricting around the head of Minho’s erection. That seems to do the trick and snap the moment, as soon Minho’s grip on Kibum’s hair tightens to stop him.

He makes Kibum withdraw until he only has the first inch of his cock in his mouth, and that is where everything stops. “Lick it,” Minho commands and although the control in his voice is thin the tone is still enough to make something twitch in Kibum’s stomach. “You know you want to.”

Oh how he does want to. He is hungry for it, and doesn’t need to be told twice before he laves his tongue on the most sensitive spots, presses it flat against the underside before curling it just right, applying pressure where he knows it feels the best. True enough he has Minho desperate within seconds, panting harshly as he instinctively bucks upwards.

Kibum whimpers and he knows it’s clear what he wants, but Minho doesn’t allow him to deepthroat him again. Instead he keeps his face right there, enjoys the way Kibum tries to cover as much of skin as he can with those needy swipes of his tongue, the small licks and the shameless rubbing.

Finally his patience can’t take it and he groans out right against the heated flesh. “Minho, stop being such a fucking ass,” he snaps, but it lacks the needed edge and he knows it. He simply sounds so needy, so utterly horny that it’s impossible to mask that with faked anger. As much as he wants more, right now, a part of him is absolutely relishing the lack of control and the way Minho decides what happens and when it happens.

Minho knows that, too, and only smirks down at Kibum. His voice is infuriatingly collected as he speaks, even though just seconds prior he seemed to be completely losing it. “I’m just showing you whose dick you should be dreaming of,” he drawls, “do you think you’ll remember now?”

The noise Kibum makes could be interpreted in various ways but Minho takes it as agreement and finally releases the hold on his hair. As soon as he’s free to move, Kibum rewards Minho by sucking him back in his mouth, cheeks hollowing as he works to bring him closer to the edge. He knows exactly what Minho likes and keeps using extra-much tongue, until the first telltale signs of the approaching orgasm are making Minho’s thighs tremble and his body tense.

When Minho tips over the edge, Kibum pulls back and lets him come all over his face: on his flushed cheeks and his swollen mouth. Unconsciously he licks his lips and collects the beads of cum, shuddering as he coevally pushes his fingers deeper inside of himself. He’s frantically working to get himself off as well, so when Minho grabs him by his armpits and almost too easily hoists him up in his lap, he isn’t all that pleased at first.

Then Minho is kissing him, hard, and all other thoughts fly from his mind that second. Minho’s fingers are on his wrist and he makes him pull his hand back, but there is no time for protests before he replaces the retreating fingers with his own. “Did the dream end there?” Minho asks, breathless, and it takes a moment for the question to even register.

When it does, Kibum goes on willingly. “No.” He gives the tiniest of headshakes but right then, Minho’s long fingers reach the perfect spot inside of him and he arches his back, a strangled outcry spilling from his lips. It takes a few deep breaths to calm down enough again. “T-then, Jinki held me down while Taemin fucked me.” He bites his lower lip, muffling another outcry as Minho keeps rubbing his prostate mercilessly.

“Then?” Minho asks, in that infuriatingly calm tone of his. He isn’t calm though, not in the slightest, one can feel it in his erratic heartbeat and the sharp intakes of breath, in the way he mouths the words against Kibum’s neck and kisses the spot right after.

Kibum is shaking in Minho’s arms, helpless but to play by his rules. “Then you had your turn.” He moans, and the fingers inside of him still for a moment to let him catch his breath. “You were so hot, Minho,” he says and pauses to swallow. “You bent me over on the floor and held me down, fucked me so hard I could feel it in my throat. You fucked me until I came all over the floor.”

He is rewarded by a third finger and it almost makes him climax right then and there. He’s panting against Minho’s neck, his lips parted and his throat dry as he works to swallow again. “And when I felt like I couldn’t take it anymore,” he manages in a low whine, the words strung together but still surprisingly clear. “You made Jinki fuck me.”

There are no more words exchanged as Minho crushes their mouths together instead, kisses Kibum hard and possessive. In that very moment, he owns him. Kibum is grinding against Minho desperately, and at this point Minho has no intentions to prolong this any further. He grips one of Kibum’s thighs to make him spread them further and finger-fucks him until – finally – he comes hard between their bodies.

Even long after Kibum is still shaking, holding on to Minho as if his life depends on it. He can barely respond to the kiss when Minho leans in again, but the way it’s so tender, so clearly in contrast to the rough ones from before, makes him smile involuntarily.

Finally Kibum relaxes against Minho, only distantly aware of how their pants are still down, tugged out of the way, and their shirts stained with his release. He snuggles his face into Minho’s neck, ignoring the disapproving grunt he gets as it smears the half-dried come from his cheeks to Minho’s skin.

“You know what,” Minho begins lowly as he finally pulls his hand back and pats Kibum’s butt. “You should have dreams like that more often.” He lets his hands rest on Kibum’s bottom, pulling him a bit closer against himself.

Kibum enjoys the embrace, not even trying to hold back the goofy grin that spreads on his lips. “I thought you’d be jealous…”

“Oh, I am,” Minho says. “But if it results in something like this, I can afford to be.”



They focus on the closeness, on their breaths slowly evening out, completely unaware of the wide, lust-blown eyes directed right at them from all across the room.

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(2620 words)


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SO NOW YOU CAN STOP JUDGING ME I promise the next thing I post will have a plot. like, it will be long and coherent and have actual happenings instead of just banging. I have three long minkeys in progress, plus one long taekey and one qmi. so. let’s see what happens.

…who am I kidding I’ll just end up being driven to the edge of madness by Key AGAIN and write horrible pwps until the end of my days, negl.

I should be in bed but I’m waiting for a hockey match to begin so I’m trying to be productive. yay?

Comments

[neezoy.livejournal.com]

Spot! Yay! I can't believe you wrote this in one evening, so quickly O.o Will read it as soon as I can!

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

I seriously hope it's not full of mistakes and incoherency but even if it is... I can't be arsed to care right now, haha.

[mhn77.livejournal.com]

yes, MinKey, but I'm gonna go out on a limb and spot anyway :b

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

TAEMIN IS MENTIONED. ...in like one sentence. BUT STILL.

[stolenflower.livejournal.com]

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

ahaha is that a good kind of :OOOOO or the bad kind? XD

[paripassi.livejournal.com]

/Fan self.

Phew, girl that was amazing! Where can I sign up for smut writing lessons? That was just the right amount of wrong. :) I fucking love the way you write Key. <3

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

ansdkjfnh you have no idea how happy that makes meeee. Key is amazing and I hope I can do him some justice with the portrayal :D

but smut writing lessons? ahah I'm sure you can find a better teacher! but I am flattered ;D

thank you so much! ♥

[squickz.livejournal.com]

/sloshes in a puddle of fanboy on the floor

Quite enjoyed this hun. Quite.
The whole sharing of the dream thing was very different - in a really, really delicious way. The way he was so urgent and needy in expressing every sordid detail about his dream was hot in itself, but Minho's reaction to it all was just too yummy. And I love how Minho kept his cool while Key was a writhing, overaroused mess. That contrast made the whole thing even hotter.
And the ending. Yes.
This whole damn fic = YES.

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

/loves you forever ;--;♥

I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKE! :D ahaha this was quite random since I was supposed to be writing something completely different but then my mind went all MINKEY SMUT NOW and who am I to resist?

ankjdfnkhn I don't even know what to say I'm just so glad you approve ;--; thank youuuu~!

[mintyfresh1.livejournal.com]

I DEMAND A SEQUEL
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ JOJO OMFG SEQUEL CRIES
SO PERFECT THO OMFG
KEY JUST...................... <33333333333

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

UHM MAYBE? I might have had some thoughts about a sequel possibly but I am not making any promises, lmao. first gonna try to finish other projects~

THANK YOU FOR READING BB♥♥♥

[boggywuggypop.livejournal.com]

Kill me for not commenting, even once. Just so you know, you've been on my "familiar Minkey author" list since forever. I was about to just head over to the top of this page to re-read this again (without thinking of even commenting like the horrible person i am) but that "3 long minkeys in progress" made my heart stop and i was just gaping at it, fantasizing about how wonderful my day would be once you post them up.

And I just wrote the longest run-on sentence there is.

I just showered and glad that I am not dressed yet cos I'm pretty hot & bothered now and a soiled underwear would be such a waste. Heh.

<3

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

ahh but I'm really glad that you commented now ;D totally made me grin like an idiot first thing in the morning!

The three long minkeys... I hope you like au fics :D one is almost finished, one is maybe halfway done and one I have only begun, but I know what'll happen in them, I just need to find the time and energy to actually type them!

That is such a great compliment! ;D Thank you!♥♥

[nhiphuong.livejournal.com]

kyaaaa~ i miss your /minkey/ fics <3333333

I'm not usually fond of everyone-key fics but if it leads you to write this kind minkey sequel, i can always afford to be

*mimicking s.o*

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

do not worry, there are actual longer minkeys coming! :D I'm working on them almost daily, they just keep on getting longer and longer so I don't finish them, haha. plus there was the shinee big bang to focus on. BUT MORE IS ON THE WAY!

thank you, thank you ;D /bows/ ♥♥

[simneesee.livejournal.com]

This was fabulous! I love needy!Key!! And I absolutely cant wait to read your taekey fic!

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

thank you so much! :DD I'm glad you liked, and I will try to get the taekey done soonish ;)

[miawee7.livejournal.com]

(http://media.photobucket.com/image/onew shinee gif/Zlish/SHINee/Gifs/ontongue.gif?o=78)

Perv Mode Activated!

I looooveeeee thissssss. “No. Show me.” Ugggh that right there killed me!!! Omo, and this, "They focus on the closeness, on their breaths slowly evening out, completely unaware of the wide, lust-blown eyes directed right at them from all across the room. "

(http://media.photobucket.com/image/onew shinee gif/bekkiglittz/GIFs/Shinee/2a40e706.gif?o=53)

OMG YESSSS LET TAEMINNIE INNNNNNNN!!!!!!! UUUUnnnnfffffff.....

Sorry for the GIF spam, I'm excited lol

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

lmao perv mode is the best mode! XD I'm really glad to hear you liked it! ah and the gif-spam is amazing :D thank youu~♥

[meriseth.livejournal.com]

reading your smut while studying for final,what in a world. but at least i figured that i like this better than reading school books.esp for exams,they are just so ewww. :)

omg, i love the way kibum told minho his wetdream, how minho'd turned into a real dictator this time from hearing it.i can't really imagine minho bossing kibum around without him fighting back with his snarky remarks but well, we'll never know what happens behind the door. :D i love needy, slutty!key as well.you fed me so well again.bravo bb, bravo!

completely unaware of the wide, lust-blown eyes directed right at them from all across the room.
OMO SEQUEL????! i know i had that power to poke you into writing a sequel, so here /pokes infinitely/ ot3 then maybe? :D

no worries hun, we all are driven to madness by him.let's forever stanning on him like the mad fangirls we are.oh god, i sfm miss these fanfic world. QAQ

thanks for writing this amazing pwp.

/back to books/ ;___;

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

oh I do hope that you managed to study, too! finals are important, although they can be incredibly boring too XD

the way I see it is that Minho only bosses Key around because Key lets him. it's kind of an agreement between them and they both know they enjoy it 8D it's not like Key doesn't fight back when he feels like it, to spice things up~

I CAN'T MAKE ANY PROMISES but maybe. let's see, haha. I'm at least hoping that I'll get more writing done now that it's summer :D ot3 at least could be manageable, if I can decide who's the third one XD

ah he is just so perfect ;-; it's killing me but that's a good way to go!

thank you for reading and commenting, bb!♥ good luck with studying!♥

[salome620.livejournal.com]

Kibum enjoys the embrace, not even trying to hold back the goofy grin that spreads on his lips. “I thought you’d be jealous…” - just as i suspected.  aw, i love jealous and possessive Minho.  i have a fetish for making him miserable over Kibum.

i love how loving they are after sex.  i could feel their love for each other and am all giggly about it.

They focus on the closeness, on their breaths slowly evening out, completely unaware of the wide, lust-blown eyes directed right at them from all across the room. - eh?!  that last line creeps me out.  oooh, wanna hide my babies.

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

I have a thing for jealous!Minho too, and it keeps popping up at random times, haha. I bet Key has a thing for that, too x)

I'm glad you liked that! :D I love writing them cuddly and loving and I could just do it forever~♥

don't worry about it, it's just one (or two, or three) of the other members watching them and perving over them x) nothing dangerous!

thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[chocolatos.livejournal.com]

AHOY!!

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

Ahoy-ahoy! :D

[23elevens.livejournal.com]

FUCK
FUCKITY. Have I mentioned that I don't often find much dirty talk hot but bc I could imagine kibum talking like that things became smoldering?
I'm guessing that this porn has a sequel. A real threesome needs to happen bb omg ;A;
I have missed you!

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

most of the time I find dirty talk really super awkward... which was one reason I was kind of nervous about writing this, haha. I was so hoping it wouldn't end up awkward XD but I think it kind of fits Kibum, too :D

this porn... might have a sequel XD CAN'T MAKE PROMISES YET plus I don't know for sure yet who I'd include in a threesome x)

I have missed you toooo~♥♥♥

[linnhe.livejournal.com]

okay so i loved how this tied in so well with getting uncontrollable - that story was already pretty gorgeous but for me it gained even more significance through key recounting it to minho - and AAAAAAAAAAH THE ENDING ;_______________________________________; you know you have to keep writing for this verse now

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

ahh I'm so happy to hear that! I wanted it to be tied to the prequel somehow, so that it wouldn't be just random "oh let's fuck!" (though there's nothing wrong with those, on occasion, haha) but that it'd have something else to it too, kind of. plus, I bet Key knows how hot and bothered he can make Minho just by teasing him with images like that~ in my mind, the two of them have such a give-and-take relationship, you know. they know how to play each other in the best of ways ;D I BABBLE sorry.

ahhh and I am not saying no. I have to just think of it and see what the next part would be! it could be just one of their friends joining in, or them being inspired by the acts of indecency they've seen, or a full-on ot5. I CAN'T DECIDE, haha!

but yes, thank you so much! :D♥

[fantasydesire.livejournal.com]

herk. O.o

but dominating minho is hot.. only if kibum is happy with it too.. lol.. sexy minkey is sexxaayh.. ^^

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

it wouldn't happen if Kibum wasn't happy with it, haha. I believe that in the end it's Kibum who holds the reins in his hands XD

thank you for reading! ;DD

[moyama14.livejournal.com]

Oh my god! This was so fucking good! And cute! And oh my! <3 thank you so much for sharing *-*

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D am glad you like!

[legna-angels.livejournal.com]

LOVED IT! And I realllllly hope you continue and let us know who all was watching!!!! OT5 with a jealous Minho? 0_0

I need that in my life.

Great job ;)

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

thank you! :D haha I promised I'll think of it so maybe! right now I don't really know who were watching, tbh, I have to decide it still~ but you're right, if it's gonna be an ot5 Minho is going to be having jealousy-issues ;D

[g-odalisque13.livejournal.com]

kldnsgvkjdfbgvbd
this was just...elkfnkdsjngds
i really really have no words. that might be because it's the middle of the night. but it's also because this is so damn hot.
ugh i loved how controlling minho was- knowing that key liked it despite what he says.
and i was internally fist pumping when the others were watching them in the end djfgnjrnge
i was wondering about how loud they were being! lmao.
but just key rehashing the whole dream to minho and just ugh /dead
adding this to memories asap!

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

reading smut in the middle of the night is one of the best things, haha. I'm glad you enjoyed! this was such a joy to write since I could make it utterly self-indulgent and include everything I wanted 8D

haha if I was there I'd be watching too so I can't blame them! also I wanted to leave the end open for a possible sequel when I once again go on a smut-writing spree. let's see when that happens, lmao.

thank you so, so much for your comments, dear! totally made my morning :D ♥