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rabenhorst ([personal profile] rabenhorst) wrote2011-07-17 03:46 pm

[fic] Zhou Mi/Heechul – SJ(M) – Unexpected Visitor – Oneshot

Title: Unexpected Visitor
Author: [livejournal.com profile] fonulyn
Rating: NC17? (borderline R)
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Heechul
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Zhou Mi did not, under any circumstances, expect to find Heechul behind the door when he opened it. But when he got over the initial surprise, welcoming was in order.
Comments: This is for my darling little sister [livejournal.com profile] daidetre (ilu~♥), who was bugging me about writing her some Heechul-centric porn. Knowing me, I of course had to include Zhou Mimimi in it too, and then there’s only one possible pairing XD I never wrote the pairing before and this was trying to turn itself into hanchul or qmi half the time so I don’t know if I ever will again but it was kind of fun. Also I’m having such a horrible headache (for the past week) that if it has typos please excuse them (and feel free to tell me).



Zhou Mi did not, under any circumstances, expect to find Heechul behind the door when he opened it.

It wasn’t like Heechul never visited him, far from it. Heechul was a common visitor, to the point that everyone else wanted to throw him out of the room when he seemed to be too attached to Zhou Mi’s hip. Heechul was known to be demanding when it best suited him, and when he wanted attention he got attention. Regardless of the situation.

But Zhou Mi never expected to see Heechul here. Not in China. Not while they were promoting the new SJM single and Heechul was supposed to be working on his own things far away in Korea. They had spoken on the phone the previous night and hadn’t Heechul just explained about all the things he needed to get done before the release of the new duo-project?

Zhou Mi was certain he looked as dumbfounded as he felt. Especially when Heechul stepped past him and tapped his shoulder. “Shut your mouth, Seasoning. You’ll catch flies.”

Obediently Zhou Mi did, snapping his lips shut. It was pure luck that he was alone right then, everyone else out doing – well, whatever the hell it was they were doing. Right now Zhou Mi didn’t know, and he didn’t even particularly care. He simply closed the door, leaning against it for a second before following the other man deeper into the apartment.

“Who are you rooming with this time?” Heechul arched an eyebrow and Zhou Mi didn’t even manage to open his mouth to answer before he went on. “Kyuhyun of course. Have you ever shared with anyone else? I’m beginning to feel threatened here. I should be jealous.” He babbled on and they both knew that he didn’t mean a word he said. They both knew that nothing went past best-friends-forever in that room.

Heechul and Zhou Mi, though, got past that stage quite a long ago. Approximately three weeks into knowing each other, when Zhou Mi found himself on his knees in front of the couch sucking Heechul off. If that didn’t open their eyes then maybe it did when Heechul returned the favour some time later, backstage just before a show and Zhou Mi had to dance on wobbly knees. It was a game of give and take at first, as they tried to catch each other at the most inconvenient moments possible for some acts of indecency.

“Where can I put my bag?” Heechul asked, even if he had already slammed his bag down in the middle of the couch. Zhou Mi knew that Siwon would complain about it later, being the neat freak of the group even if it wasn’t public information, but right now he was too busy following Heechul to do anything about it. Following Heechul, who gave the whole apartment an inspection and kept on talking nonstop even if half of what he said was too fast for Zhou Mi to catch.

Finally, Heechul slowed down and stopped in the middle of the room, grinning at the other man. “So? Aren’t you going to welcome me?” He asked almost cockily, spreading his arms far as if expecting a hug.

The gesture had Zhou Mi laughing. “How am I supposed to say anything when you keep on talking and running away from me?” He took the offered moment to scan the other man’s appearance thoroughly, pleased to notice that Heechul had definitely dressed up for him. Only then he stepped closer, obediently sneaking his arms around the smaller man’s waist to pull him close.

“Never stopped you before,” Heechul remarked. There was a slight tilt to his smile and it turned clearly more content now that Zhou Mi’s arms were where they belonged. He was right, too. Neither of them had ever had troubles talking over the other if they had something they wanted to get heard. They were very good at speaking simultaneously and still deciphering most of what was being said.

Zhou Mi grinned. “I might’ve been a little bit surprised to see you here.” Even if that was clearly an understatement. He was still stunned, his mind trying to piece it all together. To buy time, or just because he wanted to, he cut off Heechul’s reply. With his lips.

The kiss was messy, slide of lips on lips with a little too much tongue, teeth clinking together. It was also breathtaking and enough to make them initiate another one instantly when it broke. After the third one, Heechul placed his palms on Zhou Mi’s chest to push him away. “I need a shower.” He curled his nose disgustedly as if to prove his point.

Automatically, the rational part of Zhou Mi’s mind kicked in. “You can use any of the towels. There should be some showergel and stuff in the light green box, that’s mine and you can – ”

He didn’t get any further before Heechul placed a long finger on his lips. “You need a shower too.”

Zhou Mi arched an eyebrow. Heechul looked at him pointedly. And only then something clicked in Zhou Mi’s brain. “Oh.”





Less than ten minutes later, Zhou Mi found his lips locked with Heechul’s again, but this time there was a warm spray of water spilling on them, on their faces. He couldn’t hold back a gasp, the kiss breaking when Heechul’s fingers wrapped tighter around his cock, tracing the vein on the underside in a way that made his hips buck.

Zhou Mi never quite remembered just how good Heechul was with his hands. Thankfully he was reminded of it quite effectively every now and then. It had taken him barely a minute to work Zhou Mi fully hard, and judging by the cocky smirk on his lips he knew his talents fully well. The expression was practically begging to be wiped off with a deep, ravenous kiss.

Once Zhou Mi had gotten enough of Heechul’s teasing he mewled impatiently into the kiss practically slapping his hand away to take over control instead. He didn’t have any troubles wrapping his long fingers around the both of them, their erections pressed together as he began to stroke slowly.

“Now who’s teasing,” Heechul breathed out right against the other man’s lips as soon as the kiss broke. Their faces were so close their breaths were mixing, droplets of water falling on their skin and between them, getting everywhere. He only received a smirk as a response to that. There was something absolutely wicked in the way Zhou Mi looked at him and it made Heechul’s blood boil like nothing else.

Heechul would’ve liked to take the credit for that, but he knew that Zhou Mi had always been deliciously devious underneath those sweet smiles and coy glances. Like now, how he was working them both in a slow pace, flicking his thumb over the sensitive tip of Heechul’s arousal just right but never often enough to actually push him over the edge. Heechul knew his hands would be pushed away if he tried anything and thus he only grabbed Zhou Mi’s shoulders, his fingers digging deep into soft skin by the force of it. He was trembling against the taller man’s frame, unable to hide it.

Zhou Mi licked a patch up Heechul’s neck, before easily catching his earlobe between his teeth to tug on it a bit. “Ask for it.” His voice was low and hoarse, so unlike his usual tone of chirpy sunshine and happiness. He sounded sultry, seductive, indecent promises hidden within those simple syllables. It was enough to make anyone with a vivid imagination go mad.

Heechul growled. He wasn’t pleased. At the same time another part of him was purring in contentment. “Please.” He pushed out from between gritted teeth, the look in his eyes intense enough to burn.

That was enough. Zhou Mi had no intentions dragging this on further, not right now when they hadn’t seen in days and he knew neither of them could hold out for much longer. No, this was for releasing the worst pressure, blowing off steam, and there would definitely be more to come. He could feel Heechul throbbing against him, a ragged inhale matching every single one of his own, and when their eyes met he couldn’t look away any longer.

Neither of them knew how long it took. One, two, three long strokes, a twist of Zhou Mi’s wrist, a flick of his thumb. Heechul didn’t even try to hold back when he climaxed with a loud, shameless outcry that echoed from the tiled walls. If anyone was in the whole apartment at that moment, they were bound to hear. Zhou Mi wasn’t far behind but contrarily, when he came, Heechul’s name fell from his lips in a breathless gasp, barely audible.

Only for a moment they stayed exactly like that, trying to catch their breath, leaning heavily against the cool wall. “In twenty minutes from now,” Heechul purred right into Zhou Mi’s ear, his fingers tracing up his spine until he could grab a few copper strands of hair between them. “I want you to fuck me like you mean it.” Zhou Mi could feel him smirk against his skin. “On Kyuhyun’s bed.”

Oh now there was an idea.





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1547 words

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[identity profile] rabenhorst.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
spotttt for [livejournal.com profile] daidetre since she has to comment on this or I will never speak to her again~ 8D

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
whore, i'm working. so i shall comment properly later.
but i will say this:

NOW GIVE ME THE SEQUEL I WANT THE SEX GIVE ME THE SEX GODDAMN IT WOMAN

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
excuses excuses you're just being mean.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU WANT THE SEX HANDJOBS COUNT AS SEX TOO GDI >:(

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
no. shush. i'm earning money. you should be proud.

yes but...

“In twenty minutes from now,” Heechul purred right into Zhou Mi’s ear, his fingers tracing up his spine until he could grab a few copper strands of hair between them. “I want you to fuck me like you mean it.” Zhou Mi could feel him smirk against his skin. “On Kyuhyun’s bed.”

YOU ARE TEASING ME WITH PROMISES OF HARD FUCKING WHICH I AM NOT ALLOWED TO WITNESS
.__. RUDE.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I am proud. but it doesn't mean you're any less mean.

HAR HAR HAR 8D I AM SO BAD. You can always imagine the fucking? 8D YOU ALWAYS SKIP OVER THE GOOD BITS TOO.

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm always mean, why are you surprised that i'm mean today? i have to work and you're distracting me with hot shower porn between hot men, which, granted, i asked for, but it's posted at an inconvenient time because now i want to write porn :/

IS THIS SOME KIND OF REVENGE? xD GRRR I'LL WRITE IT MYSELF >:(

lol, saranghae, unnie~ :B

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not surprised but I can still whine about it, now can I not? >:/ AND YOU SHOULD WRITE PORN.

IT IS. As soon as you write me the Gengmi porn you owe me I will write you that fuck XD

... now you sound suspicious >___> I am too used to you being mean XD

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
ahahaha no. you're not allowed. I WOULD IF I COULD BUT I CAN'T.

Okay. Fine. I will write you GengMi smut. And I will blame you if it is awful and lame.

suspicious? how dare you. i'm lovely, me ;3

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Am I not? :( MY LIFE IS SAD. AND SHUT UP YOU CAN.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! 8DDDDDD THIS IS THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE! Or at least close to it XD ...except it means I'll actually have to start planning the sequel to this.

Of course you are lovely, you are absolutely sweet and lovable~

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Your life is wonderful. You know me and I introduced you to SJ. Life couldn't get bettuuuuur.
What kind of GengMi do you want :/ And yes. Yes you do. Now chop chop xD

You're only saying that because I said I'd write you gengmi. Hmph.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Laaaaaaif cuuuldntt geeet beeetttuuuuuuuuur~ *sings*

I want I want... what do you mean what kind? XD How much demands am I allowed to have? I want porn (I first wrote prom but I'm distracted) and I want an epic lovestory and yes 8D Of course it'd be perfect if it'd have like 21289 chapters but I am letting you off the hook with a short ficlet XD I am trying to plan it! But now all I can think of is that epic foursome from the other comment XD

No. I love you even when you're evil and mean. Although I don't know why XD And what a lovely icon you have it's distracting me~

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
And what happened, your reply to my reply disappeared before I managed to reply to it? o___O

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
i dunno, lj fucked up :/ it disappeared just after i wrote it. stupid thing. lol, your icon though.

Anyway~
This was essentially my face throughout the whole thing

Yes, my perv face looks remarkably like Heechul's perv face, but I digress.
And dude, you can so totally write, so shut up and write more ficcu. Stop moaning because you're awesome :D
I love the way you write them and they're so cute together *squishes them*

And now

So I demand that sequel or I will eat all the pies you make without you even getting ANY. Kyu can even join in, if he wants. Though he can't steal the Mimi from the Chul.

Thank youuuuuuuu~ I love yououououou :D

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
OH THE COMMENT HAS APPEARED AGAIN! :O

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
:O the curious case of the re-appearing comment. hmmm.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Lj is stupid. And Wookie is amazing. Seriously, his expressions make the movie about ten times better!

Oooh it looks like a good thing then XD The gif at least made me grin and imagining you doing the same made me actually laugh out loud.
Thank you, bb, but I am not sure if I believe you XD Someone else would've made this way hotter!
But you're right though, they are cute together. Absolutely adorable~

Lol at the teukie gif XD
ahaha Kyu can join since then you'd get your Kyuchul too in the progress XD Maybe Kyuhyun walks in on them doing it on his bed and he demands compensation. Mmmh. Actually I'm kind of beginning to like the idea XD

Love you tooooo~ ♥ Even if I whine and complain about the fics you demand XD

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Wookie's acting in that film was amazing. Seriously. He was probably my favourite part of it.

Indeed it was. Oh shut up and stop being a fool of a Took.
Yes OuO so squishy and girly and fashionable. And sexy.

Teukie is constantly horny, even when singing an innocent song about being happy. Dirty old man.
YAY THAT IS A GOOD IDEA and they can film it and send it to Hannie and he'll be like :O I'M ON MY WAY OVER!!!

Teehee, you love writing the fics I demand. Deep down.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
He is my favourite part of it. I firmly believe he pulled off his role better than anyone else.

It's kind of difficult though, since they're so fashionable and squishy and adorable that it makes me want to write bff fics instead of hardcore porn XD

Oh yes, dirty old man. I bet for him happiness equals being horny, or at least what follows from being horny. Mmmh.
And then it would result in an epic foursome since of course Hannie demands his share, too. Oh maaaan~ BUT HEY IT'D MEAN I'D GET GENGMI TOO. That's the solution, smash all four of them together. The formula to happiness. Or something.

No, but I love you and that's enough ;3 and anything else I am not admitting no no no

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
8D ♥

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
O GOOD FUCK I JUST I AM GOING TO GO INCOHERENT BECAUSE SHIT ZHOU MI AND HEECHUL IN THE SHOWER

IN

THE

FUCKING

SHOWER

I CAN'T EVEN THINK STRAIGHT NOW, I AM JUST FLAILING AND NOT BREATHING AND SEEING THINGS AND WISHING THINGS LIKE THIS HAPPENED IN MY SHOWER WHERE I WOULD WATCH AND DROOL AND RECORD AND I DONT KNOW AND THIS:

“I want you to fuck me like you mean it.” Zhou Mi could feel him smirk against his skin. “On Kyuhyun’s bed."

OH MY GOD THIS.

THIS LINE RIGHT HERE OWNS ME LIKE IT IS GOD AND LET ME TELL YOU IT IS GOD THIS LINE CRIES HAPPY BLOOD TEARS

CAN I PLEASE JUST CUDDLE THIS FIC FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE or till you write something that will rival this.




Oh, did I tell you I like this fic? I didn't? I like this fic :D ♥

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Why are you so nice to me I don't deserve all this praise you're being way too nice to me ;~;♥

YOUR INCOHERENCY MAKES ME HAPPY, YES IT DOES! And I want things like this to happen in my shower too, not only in my imagination ;~; SAD LIFE IS SAD.

har har yes yes yes feel free to do whatever you want with the fic 8D I don't know when I'll finish anything else even semi-coherent buuuuuuuuuuut. I'm always open for suggestions too.

THANK YOU! ♥ I am so glad you do!

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
but please, you deserve it :') ♥

my incoherency makes no sense ;~; yes the shower yes, heechul/zhoumi in shower yes yes yes yes yes ACTIVE IMAGINATION IS WAY TOO ACTIVE

i shall cuddle this baby here and wait for you to finish whatever and come out with it whenever 8'D

YOU'RE WELCOME! ♥

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)


it doesn't need to make any sense! oh those two, I bet they hogged the bathroom for themselves for way too long~

I think the next one will be the random Qmimin fic and THAT IS PORN TOO WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME. I'm going to finish something with a plot too. I am.

:D ♥

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
incoherent me = fic is very very very very very very VERY good. They are likely to hog the bathroom, the bed etc etc etc idk everywhere ;)


sobs i love how everyone I know is writing Qmimin porn it's like Christmas/new year/thanksgiving/my birthday every festival is coming early this year :') PORN IS GOOD BB IT'S A WORK OUT >_>

Hwaiting with your work bb :D ♥

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
They're so selfish, only thinking of their own fun XD

It's because Qmimin is taking over the world! \o/ Mine is short though, just a ficlet. B-BUT TOO MUCH IS TOO MUCH.

Thank youuuuuu~♥

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
but we are not supposed to be complaining, we are supposed to be enjoying u_u


BUT QMIMIN IS QMIMIN! AND PWP IS PWP! AND FICLET IS AMAZING \^O^/

~♥~

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I am not complaining, they can hog the bathroom all they want~

haha and everything is perfect and nothing hurts XD \o/

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
..and Kyuhyun's bed ^_^

And ChulMi have more sex, yes! \o/

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
And Kyuhyun's bed! ...even if they might need to share it with Kyuhyun in the end XD

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
ah, I see you KyuMiChul, I do.

Please they can have my bed. I'll just, you know, sit innocently by the dresser and watch them, that's all.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Only if you tape it down and share the video with me.

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, my initial plan was to invite you to sit next to me through the whole, er process? But if you want a tape, that would be easier, yes? :D

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that works too! 8D I can already book the flight!

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I will make sure we video tape it as well. Just for future needs >_>;;

[identity profile] nadz144.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
did i comment on the last one? Shit, did I? OMG. /goes to cmmnt the last one.

[identity profile] nadz144.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
HEECHUL + ZHOUMI = PERFECTION ( i need a zhou mi icon)

OMG WHY THE LACK OF ROUGHSEX PORN THAT WE ALL KNOW IS IN YOUR HEAD?!!

and handjob is like 3rd base, it doesn't count XPPPPPP

but i like their dynamics. so cute. love 'em. there should be more MiChul/HeeMi in the world. /pokes insistently.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes you need a Zhou Mi icon, everyone needs Zhou Mi icons! 8D

Because I suck at writing it? XD IT'S NOT IN MY HEAD. I SWEAR IT'S NOT.

...oh damn XD I STILL THINK IT COUNTS. C'mon, they get each other off, it's gotta count XD

Thank you! I'm glad you liked ;) ...and we will see about more. No promises!

[identity profile] choiminholover.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
So what if it doesnt have a plot? It's qmi smut XD ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Plot is overrated, eh? XD haha I guess so.

[identity profile] choiminholover.livejournal.com 2011-07-18 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
In this case, yes plot has become overrated ㅅㅂㅅ

[identity profile] holly427jj.livejournal.com 2011-07-18 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
Ah what a wonderful bedtime story. Time for sleep.
I guess I'll be dreaming of ChulMi then :D
I have no regrets~

[identity profile] rabenhorst.livejournal.com 2011-07-23 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank youuuu~ :D I'm glad to hear that you approve, haha!

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2011-08-15 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah richt, I really didn't read everything, not even all the NC17 stuff. I know now x)
This was really hot and I like that Mimi can be devious. It's like the saying, right? Quiet waters run deep or something like that. At least it's how the German saying would translate. Hoshit, I should stop reading things like that at work since, even though I so can't see ZhouMi and Heechul together, it worked quite well.
Pfft and if you can write that, you surely can write something with Yesung for me, too *pouts*

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-08-15 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
hahaha I told you so XD I wrote surprisingly lot, I didn't even realize myself it was so much. Our English textbook had that saying in it! Still waters run deep ;D (It's also in the song Rose Garden, lol) I was struggling with it since I don't think they are such a compatible couple (except as best friends) but I suppose it turned out okay x)
I wrote both Heechul and Mimi a lot before, so Yesung is different *laughs*