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[fic] Sungmin/Zhou Mi – SJM – The Perfect Cure – Oneshot
Title: The Perfect Cure
Author:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Sungmin/Zhou Mi (hinted Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi/Sungmin)
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Sungmin is stressed. Zhou Mi knows exactly how to fix that. A shopping trip ensues.
Comments: This is again forplastictear! I seem to write him tons of fics these days XD But he requested Mimin and …I wrote Mimin. With Qmi sneaking in so I suppose it qualifies as hinted Qmimin too *laughs* MIMI DESERVES ALL THE LOVE HE CAN GET OKAY. It’s perfectly normal he has both Sungmin and Kyuhyun wrapped around his little finger. and let’s not talk about the Qmimin p0rn I wrote and need to post one of these days, okay
Now that SJM was officially leaderless, Sungmin had taken on the work of the unassigned leader, trying to make sure everything was right. He hovered at the doorframes in the evening to make sure everyone went to bed at some point, he gently poked them during breakfast to eat more, he reminded everyone of their schedules, he volunteered for the jobs no one wanted to do, he tried to supervise everything, amongst other things.
Kyuhyun and Zhou Mi had been watching that for a while. It seemed like Sungmin was going to burn himself out soon at this rate. It wasn’t like they didn’t trust him and think he was good at what he was doing, but there simply was just so much a single person could handle and they both agreed that Sungmin was overdoing it. There were several nights when Sungmin dropped into bed so late he only got a couple of hours rest before his ruthless alarm went off again, set way too early.
It had been going on for longer, but it took only one day of a particularly tired Sungmin walking around like a zombie when Zhou Mi made a decision. “I’ll take him shopping.” He nodded resolutely. Only one look at the determined expression and Kyuhyun agreed, unreserved.
That would do Sungmin good.
That is how Sungmin found himself following the bubbly and excited Zhou Mi out one early afternoon, as they sneaked out together. They had been able to go out surprisingly much unrecognized, as long as they somehow got out of the building without attracting attention and managed to sneak further and blend into the masses of people. That was what Zhou Mi was relying on now, too, since it wasn’t like he wanted to deal with masses of fans when he was aiming to make Sungmin relax. Right now, he wanted Sungmin’s attention only on himself. Well, and the shopping, that as well.
Usually shopping trips with Zhou Mi lasted hours and he was only content when they had visited every single shop on sight. This time, he seemed oddly unfocused already halfway through the fourth shop they stepped into, and Sungmin couldn’t help but think it was somewhat peculiar. His suspicions were confirmed when he innocently tried to look at a blue button-up shirt and he was rudely interrupted by a six-foot Chinese man stepping into his view.
“C’mon,” Zhou Mi grabbed his wrist and yanked him closer, his deep eyes sparkling with mischief. “I know exactly how to make you relax.” That certain look was exactly what he got when he was up to something and distantly Sungmin thought that Kyuhyun certainly was bad influence on Zhou Mi. He had been getting that look much more often the closer he had grown to the snarky kid.
Sungmin had neither the needed energy nor the time to protest before he was pulled into one of the changing cubicles, the door carefully locked behind them. “But we didn’t even take any clothes to try on?” He protested automatically when he realized they had just walked into the store and there were only old shopping bags from the other stores piled on their arms. Zhou Mi didn’t seem to be concerned about that, though, as he simply organized the bags in one of the corners.
Before slamming Sungmin against the wall, against the full-length mirror hung on it, and kissed him thoroughly.
There weren’t many times when Zhou Mi got straightforward enough to take initiative like this, to really take without questions or reservations, and that was already enough to make Sungmin’s knees go weak and his brain stop protesting. He could do nothing but kiss back, kiss back and reach up to tangle his fingers in Zhou Mi’s silky hair. There was nothing on his mind but the way the other man’s body felt so delicious against his own, how it felt so absolutely right and how he couldn’t get enough of it.
Zhou Mi broke the kiss only to start nibbling on the soft, scented skin right below Sungmin’s left ear, almost enough to create a mark. His hands weren’t still, either, and the moan already resonated in the air before Sungmin realized it had its origin in his throat.
They would never be welcome here again after this, but how was he supposed to resist those long fingers working his fly open? He was already so hard it hurt. The way Zhou Mi was looking at him from dark, hungry eyes was making his blood boil in his veins. And if he thought that was hot, nothing prepared him for the moment when Zhou Mi dropped down on his knees in front of him.
He darted out his tongue, worked his long fingers, and it took mere seconds before Sungmin was biting on his knuckles in a desperate attempt to stifle his outcries.
It was like straight from a porn movie, Sungmin thought inwardly when Zhou Mi took him further in, his lips stretching around Sungmin’s cock. He could see tears glimmering in Zhou Mi’s eyes when he forced his head down far enough for the gag reflex to kick in, but there was nothing submissive in that. It was a challenge and the next second he could both see and feel Zhou Mi’s throat working as he swallowed around the thick head of Sungmin’s erection.
Sungmin moaned, deep in his throat, and he would’ve been a saint if he had managed to hold back instead of moving his hips in short, needy thrusts. His fingers tangled in the copper strands of Zhou Mi’s hair and he could’ve sworn he felt the other man groan when he tugged a little, used the grip to pull him closer to his crotch. Zhou Mi allowed him to fuck his mouth and that alone was such a turn on that Sungmin had no idea how he managed to not come right then and there.
At first Sungmin didn’t even notice it, but then there again was movement in the corner of his eye and suddenly he realized that Zhou Mi didn’t only let him fuck his mouth but was gagging for it, was so much into it that he was touching himself. Right there, in the changing cubicle in a clothing store, he was on his knees in front of Sungmin, sucked him off and touched himself while doing it.
That sent Sungmin’s mind into an overdrive and he had no words for the animalistic sound that released from his throat as he snapped his hips forward, making Zhou Mi whimper while forcing down the gag reflex. Sungmin knew he would apologize for that later on and that Zhou Mi would just laugh hoarsely while waving it aside. Right now though, apologizing was about as far from his mind as possible, the only coherent thoughts being more, faster, deeper, more, more, more.
There was a slight blush on Zhou Mi’s cheeks, both from arousal and from the effort and it made Sungmin want to kiss him so badly. He would have, had that mouth not been otherwise occupied and he was certainly not going to give that up as much as he was yearning for the kiss. He could have one later, when it would taste of himself, bitter on Zhou Mi’s tongue, and somehow that thought pushed him even higher within a split second.
All it took was one more swallow around his cock and Sungmin couldn’t hold back anymore. He reached his climax with a muffled outcry, biting on his knuckles so hard he was fairly certain it would leave a painful mark behind. He couldn’t have cared less, all he cared about right now was how he came in hot spurts down Zhou Mi’s throat and how the other man let him, how he greedily kept on sucking him throughout it to get every last drop. If that wasn’t hot then… well, Sungmin decided that the whole concept of Zhou Mi sucking cock was on top of his hot shit -list.
Somehow through the haze in his mind Sungmin registered how Zhou Mi let out a muffled moan, how he tensed for a second and then shuddered. He could still see the other man’s hand moving, until Zhou Mi finally stilled and pulled back, breaking the moment. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand and sent Sungmin such a dirty grin it should’ve been illegal. Especially when it was such a turn on, damnit.
“Feeling relaxed?” Zhou Mi asked in a low purr as he got up onto those incredibly long legs and leaned down to kiss the shorter man. It tasted exactly like expected, bitter and salty and underneath it all simply pure Zhou Mi. All Sungmin could do was nod dumbly and flash a bright smile that spoke books of how he felt right now. Hell, he wasn’t completely sure if he could walk right now, not without clinging on to Zhou Mi’s arm like an oversized rag doll.
When they exited the cubicle the shop assistant shot them a disapproving look, but Sungmin’s fingers were linked with Zhou Mi’s and he didn’t give a crap.
“When did you get this bold?” Sungmin asked later, when they were walking down the street with ice cream cones and matching bright smiles. “You spend too much time with Heechul. And Kyuhyun.” He tried to sound mock reproachful, but it failed spectacularly and thus he decided to focus on his icy treat. One could never go wrong with that.
Zhou Mi hummed happily, licking on the cone of chocolate chip ice cream in a way that instantly sent dirty thoughts barrelling through Sungmin’s mind. “At least I don’t suck them off in the middle of shopping!” He countered in a sing-song voice, chirpy as always after spending half of his money on things he didn’t really need.
Sungmin sent him a pointed look.
“…not Heechul at least.” Zhou Mi shrugged a bit, his trademark sunshine smile undeterred.
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1670 words.
Short but… short. Yes. Why am I posting smut again? D: Need to write something serioussssss.
Feel free to add our journal if you like the stories!
Plus, the archive. And requests.
Author:
fonulynRating: NC17
Pairing: Sungmin/Zhou Mi (hinted Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi/Sungmin)
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Sungmin is stressed. Zhou Mi knows exactly how to fix that. A shopping trip ensues.
Comments: This is again for
plastictear! I seem to write him tons of fics these days XD But he requested Mimin and …I wrote Mimin. With Qmi sneaking in so I suppose it qualifies as hinted Qmimin too *laughs* MIMI DESERVES ALL THE LOVE HE CAN GET OKAY. It’s perfectly normal he has both Sungmin and Kyuhyun wrapped around his little finger. Now that SJM was officially leaderless, Sungmin had taken on the work of the unassigned leader, trying to make sure everything was right. He hovered at the doorframes in the evening to make sure everyone went to bed at some point, he gently poked them during breakfast to eat more, he reminded everyone of their schedules, he volunteered for the jobs no one wanted to do, he tried to supervise everything, amongst other things.
Kyuhyun and Zhou Mi had been watching that for a while. It seemed like Sungmin was going to burn himself out soon at this rate. It wasn’t like they didn’t trust him and think he was good at what he was doing, but there simply was just so much a single person could handle and they both agreed that Sungmin was overdoing it. There were several nights when Sungmin dropped into bed so late he only got a couple of hours rest before his ruthless alarm went off again, set way too early.
It had been going on for longer, but it took only one day of a particularly tired Sungmin walking around like a zombie when Zhou Mi made a decision. “I’ll take him shopping.” He nodded resolutely. Only one look at the determined expression and Kyuhyun agreed, unreserved.
That would do Sungmin good.
That is how Sungmin found himself following the bubbly and excited Zhou Mi out one early afternoon, as they sneaked out together. They had been able to go out surprisingly much unrecognized, as long as they somehow got out of the building without attracting attention and managed to sneak further and blend into the masses of people. That was what Zhou Mi was relying on now, too, since it wasn’t like he wanted to deal with masses of fans when he was aiming to make Sungmin relax. Right now, he wanted Sungmin’s attention only on himself. Well, and the shopping, that as well.
Usually shopping trips with Zhou Mi lasted hours and he was only content when they had visited every single shop on sight. This time, he seemed oddly unfocused already halfway through the fourth shop they stepped into, and Sungmin couldn’t help but think it was somewhat peculiar. His suspicions were confirmed when he innocently tried to look at a blue button-up shirt and he was rudely interrupted by a six-foot Chinese man stepping into his view.
“C’mon,” Zhou Mi grabbed his wrist and yanked him closer, his deep eyes sparkling with mischief. “I know exactly how to make you relax.” That certain look was exactly what he got when he was up to something and distantly Sungmin thought that Kyuhyun certainly was bad influence on Zhou Mi. He had been getting that look much more often the closer he had grown to the snarky kid.
Sungmin had neither the needed energy nor the time to protest before he was pulled into one of the changing cubicles, the door carefully locked behind them. “But we didn’t even take any clothes to try on?” He protested automatically when he realized they had just walked into the store and there were only old shopping bags from the other stores piled on their arms. Zhou Mi didn’t seem to be concerned about that, though, as he simply organized the bags in one of the corners.
Before slamming Sungmin against the wall, against the full-length mirror hung on it, and kissed him thoroughly.
There weren’t many times when Zhou Mi got straightforward enough to take initiative like this, to really take without questions or reservations, and that was already enough to make Sungmin’s knees go weak and his brain stop protesting. He could do nothing but kiss back, kiss back and reach up to tangle his fingers in Zhou Mi’s silky hair. There was nothing on his mind but the way the other man’s body felt so delicious against his own, how it felt so absolutely right and how he couldn’t get enough of it.
Zhou Mi broke the kiss only to start nibbling on the soft, scented skin right below Sungmin’s left ear, almost enough to create a mark. His hands weren’t still, either, and the moan already resonated in the air before Sungmin realized it had its origin in his throat.
They would never be welcome here again after this, but how was he supposed to resist those long fingers working his fly open? He was already so hard it hurt. The way Zhou Mi was looking at him from dark, hungry eyes was making his blood boil in his veins. And if he thought that was hot, nothing prepared him for the moment when Zhou Mi dropped down on his knees in front of him.
He darted out his tongue, worked his long fingers, and it took mere seconds before Sungmin was biting on his knuckles in a desperate attempt to stifle his outcries.
It was like straight from a porn movie, Sungmin thought inwardly when Zhou Mi took him further in, his lips stretching around Sungmin’s cock. He could see tears glimmering in Zhou Mi’s eyes when he forced his head down far enough for the gag reflex to kick in, but there was nothing submissive in that. It was a challenge and the next second he could both see and feel Zhou Mi’s throat working as he swallowed around the thick head of Sungmin’s erection.
Sungmin moaned, deep in his throat, and he would’ve been a saint if he had managed to hold back instead of moving his hips in short, needy thrusts. His fingers tangled in the copper strands of Zhou Mi’s hair and he could’ve sworn he felt the other man groan when he tugged a little, used the grip to pull him closer to his crotch. Zhou Mi allowed him to fuck his mouth and that alone was such a turn on that Sungmin had no idea how he managed to not come right then and there.
At first Sungmin didn’t even notice it, but then there again was movement in the corner of his eye and suddenly he realized that Zhou Mi didn’t only let him fuck his mouth but was gagging for it, was so much into it that he was touching himself. Right there, in the changing cubicle in a clothing store, he was on his knees in front of Sungmin, sucked him off and touched himself while doing it.
That sent Sungmin’s mind into an overdrive and he had no words for the animalistic sound that released from his throat as he snapped his hips forward, making Zhou Mi whimper while forcing down the gag reflex. Sungmin knew he would apologize for that later on and that Zhou Mi would just laugh hoarsely while waving it aside. Right now though, apologizing was about as far from his mind as possible, the only coherent thoughts being more, faster, deeper, more, more, more.
There was a slight blush on Zhou Mi’s cheeks, both from arousal and from the effort and it made Sungmin want to kiss him so badly. He would have, had that mouth not been otherwise occupied and he was certainly not going to give that up as much as he was yearning for the kiss. He could have one later, when it would taste of himself, bitter on Zhou Mi’s tongue, and somehow that thought pushed him even higher within a split second.
All it took was one more swallow around his cock and Sungmin couldn’t hold back anymore. He reached his climax with a muffled outcry, biting on his knuckles so hard he was fairly certain it would leave a painful mark behind. He couldn’t have cared less, all he cared about right now was how he came in hot spurts down Zhou Mi’s throat and how the other man let him, how he greedily kept on sucking him throughout it to get every last drop. If that wasn’t hot then… well, Sungmin decided that the whole concept of Zhou Mi sucking cock was on top of his hot shit -list.
Somehow through the haze in his mind Sungmin registered how Zhou Mi let out a muffled moan, how he tensed for a second and then shuddered. He could still see the other man’s hand moving, until Zhou Mi finally stilled and pulled back, breaking the moment. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand and sent Sungmin such a dirty grin it should’ve been illegal. Especially when it was such a turn on, damnit.
“Feeling relaxed?” Zhou Mi asked in a low purr as he got up onto those incredibly long legs and leaned down to kiss the shorter man. It tasted exactly like expected, bitter and salty and underneath it all simply pure Zhou Mi. All Sungmin could do was nod dumbly and flash a bright smile that spoke books of how he felt right now. Hell, he wasn’t completely sure if he could walk right now, not without clinging on to Zhou Mi’s arm like an oversized rag doll.
When they exited the cubicle the shop assistant shot them a disapproving look, but Sungmin’s fingers were linked with Zhou Mi’s and he didn’t give a crap.
“When did you get this bold?” Sungmin asked later, when they were walking down the street with ice cream cones and matching bright smiles. “You spend too much time with Heechul. And Kyuhyun.” He tried to sound mock reproachful, but it failed spectacularly and thus he decided to focus on his icy treat. One could never go wrong with that.
Zhou Mi hummed happily, licking on the cone of chocolate chip ice cream in a way that instantly sent dirty thoughts barrelling through Sungmin’s mind. “At least I don’t suck them off in the middle of shopping!” He countered in a sing-song voice, chirpy as always after spending half of his money on things he didn’t really need.
Sungmin sent him a pointed look.
“…not Heechul at least.” Zhou Mi shrugged a bit, his trademark sunshine smile undeterred.
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1670 words.
Short but… short. Yes. Why am I posting smut again? D: Need to write something serioussssss.
Feel free to add our journal if you like the stories!
Plus, the archive. And requests.
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I sort of really love BJ fics, especially if there is mouthfuck and the one sucking gets off on it. So I sort of really loved this.
Also, good timing, this will probably visit my mind tomorrow while I'm shopping XD Too bad I won't be going with Sungmin or Zhou Mi :( No sexual favours for me, fml *shot*
Off to bed with me, apparently.
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I love them too. I really can't even explain it but I do and especially what you mentioned! It's essential they both get off on it x)
HAR HAR I NOTICED 8D Think of it while you're in the changing cubicle trying something on XD You can imagine Sungmin in one of the corners and Zhou Mi on his knees in front of him XD
Sleep well bb~ and thank you for still commenting ;D I'm glad you enjoyed!
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I sort of just think it's important that when doing stuff, both have to be into it x) And of course there is a big gap between someone getting off on sucking cock and idk, rape, but still. It's just nice x) I think it adds to the intimacy and the feelings between the two (or more? XD) involved.
Haha, I actually forgot to do that XD I was too excited about clothes to remember it.
I slept long \o/ I woke up at 8am first, all "wth, why am I awake" but I think I fell asleep again and didn't wake up again until 11.30am or something XD That's fine, it didn't take a lot of effort :D Of course I did!
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haha true true x) It's not good if one is forced into it or just doing it for the sake of getting it over and done with. I have to admit, I kind of love writing Zhou Mi getting off on sucking 8D And yes, more intimacy.
haha good still x) At least not too memorable to spoil shopping from you or anything x)
I woke up around 11 too and I've been lazying around the whole day. I read and then read some more and didn't get anything done and now I really really wanna write or make icons or something but I don't know what ;~; Someone needs to decide for me what to do
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This was so damn cool! and yay for MiMin~! ^ㄱ^
I dont even know what to say cuz my mind is flooded with images of Zhou Mi doing what he just did. :Q____
And i can't get these imgs outta my head.
Btw i think u totally should keep posting smut. Its already VERY SERIOUSSSSSS.
thanks for this fic <3
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haha thank you! Serioussssss smuttt~ It's good to know you like it! ;D
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tbh, I kind of hate blowjobs. but this just owns. Zhou Mi is perfect with everyone. He can whore around and be fabulous while doing it.
It's like your life's calling is to write porn because all of them are just *insert keyboard smash*
ur fluffy fics are awesome too :)
“When did you get this bold?” Sungmin asked later, when they were walking down the street with ice cream cones and matching bright smiles. “You spend too much time with Heechul. And Kyuhyun.” He tried to sound mock reproachful, but it failed spectacularly and thus he decided to focus on his icy treat. One could never go wrong with that.
Zhou Mi hummed happily, licking on the cone of chocolate chip ice cream in a way that instantly sent dirty thoughts barrelling through Sungmin’s mind. “At least I don’t suck them off in the middle of shopping!” He countered in a sing-song voice, chirpy as always after spending half of his money on things he didn’t really need.
Sungmin sent him a pointed look.
“…not Heechul at least.” Zhou Mi shrugged a bit, his trademark sunshine smile undeterred.
sobs. Mimi, y u so awesome?
(I'm gonna shut up now. Please forgive my tendency to ramble T.T I'm trying to fix it)
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To me, it always depends on the blowjob XD But sometimes I enjoy writing them way too much haha. I'm glad you liked this even though you don't like bj's in general ;) And you're right! Zhou Mi can pull that off, he is just perfect in any case.
I don't knowwww~ I have a feeling I write way too much porn these days and I should try to do something else too *laughs* buuuut it's so tempting sometimes XD
Mimi is just that good ;~;♥
Thank you for your comment and hey, no need to apologize! Rambling is good! ;D
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hey! keep writing smut. i encourage you. XDDD
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Thank you! I'm glad that you liked ;D hahaha but no encouraging me or I'll never stop XD
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FORGET KYUMIN, FORGET QMI, MIMIN IS THE FUTURE ASDFGHJKL:!!
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Even if I'm not willing to forget Qmi either XDThanks for reading! ;D
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I almost didn't catch that it was Sungmin/Zhou Mi until they went shopping and oh look there is Zhou Mi on his knees. Niiice.
i am QMi forever, but so long as`everybody is happy, its all good. And Sungmin deserves happiness too.
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Kyuhyun can share!Me too :) Qmi goes first. But sometimes it's nice to give other pairs a little thought too! haha and then go back to Qmi of course XD
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Whoa, now I stop reading and have to quickly finish work to get home. I really shouldn't do this here anymore *laughs* But it's so tempting and you got so damn good at writing these short smutty oneshots!
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