rabenhorst: (QMi sex now)
rabenhorst ([personal profile] rabenhorst) wrote2011-02-18 10:31 am

[fic] Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi – SJM – Slippery When Wet – Oneshot

Title: Slippery When Wet
Author: [livejournal.com profile] fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: There’s a good reason why showers together are so much better than showers alone. (how do you summarize p0rn anyway?)
Comments: Oooohkay it’s been ages since I wrote smut (as in writing alone) so I have no idea how rusty I am. I just knew that I desperately needed some QMi shower!p0rn and thus I had to write some XD I’m sick again so this kinda was an attempt to make me feel better. Pity me ;__;



The kiss was far from perfect. It had too much teeth, too much tongue, too much everything and it was a miracle they didn’t end up biting pieces off each other. Zhou Mi could’ve sworn he tasted blood in his mouth and judging by the way his lower lip stung he had just pierced it with his teeth. Not that he minded, though, his whole world swirling down to the ravenous kiss and there was no way in hell he would ever let go of it. What they lacked in composure they made up in eagerness, passion taking over as they nearly devoured each other.

Air? They needed none. Except if the air they sucked from each other’s lungs counted.

It was like time had stopped, frozen around them. In a sudden movement Zhou Mi pinned Kyuhyun against the nearest wall, his fingers tangled in the fabric of the dark blue shirt as he tugged on it, desperate to get it off, to touch bare skin. Kyuhyun moaned somewhere deep in his throat, the sound vibrating through them both until it was drowned out between eager mouths. His hands were on the taller man’s shoulder blades, clutching on to him so tight his knuckles were turning white. It almost felt like his life depended on it, the contact between them, the way they were pressing against each other and trying to gain more of the sweet friction.

Until there was a creak of the key turning in the lock, the door opening.

Neither of them knew how they managed to tear apart from each other fast enough not to scar everyone else for life when they walked in. Suddenly they were both standing on their own, a good two feet between them although just a second ago they had more resembled a mutated Siamese twin. It took a second for Kyuhyun to realize he was supposed to stand on his own two feet as he’d been clinging on to his beanpole of a Chinese, and Zhou Mi performed some kind of an awkward dance as he tried to figure out where to put his hands. Finally he settled for his pockets, trying to push out the fabric enough to hide the quite impressive bulge in his pants.

“Uhm, hi guys,” Zhou Mi began tentatively, flashing their friends a smile although it lacked in the usual brightness and had something close to embarrassment laced within. Although Kyuhyun was certain that the inviting blush on his cheeks had nothing to do with embarrassment. It was impossible to miss the way their lips were bruised by the kiss, reddened and glistening, ready for more.

Everyone noticed it, certainly, but it was Heechul who spoke up first. “Close your mouth, Kyuhyun, you look dumb. Now, scramble off! You can continue elsewhere.” He waved his hand dismissively, and after a second of processing the words the two hurriedly nodded and only mumbled something incomprehensible as they turned to leave. They were already about to vanish from the room when Heechul spoke up again. “And Seasoning?” Zhou Mi turned to look at him over his shoulder.

“I want a full, detailed report later on!”




At first they had thought about sneaking into Kyuhyun’s room but at the last moment remembered that it wasn’t exactly only his, and that it was currently occupied. And they couldn’t start throwing their friends out with something like ‘we’re horny, get out’, now could they? In the corridor they went through a short moment of hesitation, their gazes flickering from crumpled clothing to flushed cheeks to the ceiling and the walls in avoidance. It felt so awkward that in mere seconds it made them both chuckle, the humour of the situation striking them.

It was Zhou Mi who stepped closer first, bringing his palms to the other man’s hips as he grinned at him, bringing their hips together teasingly. “Shower, now.” It wasn’t a question but Zhou Mi knew to expect the reply. He could see it in the slight glimmer in Kyuhyun’s eyes, in the way he tilted his head barely noticeably and inhaled softly.

A smirk appeared on Kyuhyun’s full lips, his deep eyes sparkling and he knew fully well he looked like a gigantic brat. “Together?”

Zhou Mi arched an eyebrow. Of course together. What else? He chose not to reply that, though, and instead went for the alternate response, sighing theatrically. “So you can drop the soap and make me bend over to pick it up?”

Kyuhyun did not answer. Not with words anyway, but if one knew how to look the mischievous glint in his eyes spoke books of what was going on in his mind.

It barely took them two minutes in the bathroom before Kyuhyun grabbed the soap and waited until Zhou Mi looked straight at him. He held out his hand, a smug grin stretching his lips as he unceremoniously dropped the soap on the tiled floor.




Kyuhyun didn’t even realize that he was still wearing his pants, while Zhou Mi was still wearing his shirt, and they were standing underneath the warm spray of water anyway. He quite enjoyed the way the white button-up was sticking to the other man’s form, like a second skin on him. The rest of their clothes were scattered somewhere around the room and neither of them knew where, or even cared, really. He knew that he should be more concerned about Zhou Mi’s designer jeans, they weren’t exactly suited for being soaked in water but he couldn’t bring himself to find out where they had thrown them.

He ran his nose along the line of Zhou Mi’s, breathing hotly against his lips. The rivulets of water were running between their mouths and when he darted out his tongue he could taste a sweet mixture of water and something that was purely Zhou Mi. There was a soft gasp when he roamed his hands down the plane of that flat chest, down to the other man’s waist and his hips. Kyuhyun would’ve loved to be strong enough to just rip off the shirt and send buttons flying, but he knew better (he had tried more than once, to no avail) and with an annoyed groan tried to fumble the buttons open instead.

Somehow, together, they managed to get the shirt open and off, joining the rest of their clothing somewhere, and now there was nothing to keep Kyuhyun from attacking the pale skin presented just for him. His fingers traced random patterns on Zhou Mi’s chest, on his sides and his stomach, drawing symbols he wasn’t even aware of. It was almost like he wanted to brand the words on his lover’s body, burn them deep within with his fingertips.

The line of kisses was only broken when they simply needed more, when the feverish touches and shameless grinding against each other wasn’t enough anymore. Zhou Mi’s eyes were black with lust, sheer liquid need dwelling in the depths. He darted out his tongue to lick his lips, unaware of just how much it affected Kyuhyun right now, how it made his heart bounce, pound against his ribcage hard enough to nearly break out.

Still, nothing made Kyuhyun feel like exploding like the following words did.

Fuck me.” It was only a breathy whisper, and still it carried so much sheer lust it made Kyuhyun shudder. Now that was exactly what he was going to do. And he was going to make it damn good. His eyes fell shut on their own and to play for time, he buried his face into Zhou Mi’s neck, scraping his teeth over the sensitive spot close to his collarbone. It had the tall man shivering in his arms and he tightened the hold of him instinctively.

The words were still ringing in his ears when he stole one more deep kiss, teeth clashing before he settled on sucking the plump lower lip in his mouth. With a groan he broke off, his hands on Zhou Mi’s hips to throw him around, face first against the wall.




By the time he had worked two fingers inside, Zhou Mi was panting and leaning heavily against the wall in front of him for support, trying hard to stay upright even when his knees felt like they were made of jelly. There was no way to channel the intense wave of need that coursed through him every single time Kyuhyun moved those long, talented fingers, made him see stars and his breath catch in his throat.

Curse Zhou Mi and his abnormally long legs, was Kyuhyun’s first thought when he realized he’d have slight …troubles reaching. It wasn’t his fault he was sized like a normal human being and his boyfriend happened to be a friggin’ giant. This is why I like it more on the bed, was the second one, everyone is the same height horizontally.

Then again there was its own appeal in the way Zhou Mi was bent over in front of him, leaning on the cool tiles and trying not to slip, the slope of his back so inviting that Kyuhyun simply had to sink his teeth into smooth skin right underneath the rivulets of water. He could see every single breath Zhou Mi took, the shapes of his shoulder blades, the angles of his shoulders. Oh yes, this was why he enjoyed it in the shower. Even despite the slight height-disadvantage. And when Zhou Mi spread his legs further he was just on the perfect height. Problem solved.

Kyuhyun didn’t even notice he had gotten lost in his own world, in the adoration and admiration, not before he was shaken back to this world by an urgent “If you won’t fuck me now I’ll do it myself!” He didn’t react instantly. Instead he curled his fingers and smirked as he was rewarded with a strangled “Kyuhyun!” It sounded like the sound got stuck in Zhou Mi’s throat, ripped free on its own seconds after, hoarse and strained.

Laughter might’ve seemed inappropriate but he couldn’t help when it rumbled deep in his chest, getting lost within the flowing water as he pressed his face between Zhou Mi’s shoulder blades. For a second he resisted, waiting for the next frustrated sound. It was a sign. Sign for him to finally retreat his fingers and replace them with the real deal.

They were both holding their breath when Kyuhyun let his hips move forward, the slow slide joining their bodies in the most intense of ways. Inch by inch. Slow enough to make Zhou Mi whimper and push back against him, yet fast enough to make Kyuhyun bite the insides of his cheeks not to explode right then and there. There weren’t many things in this world as hot as having Zhou Mi shift his hips greedily, adjust to take even more of him inside, and all the while begging for it. Not always with words, but he didn’t even need to. Kyuhyun could read it in his posture, in his movements, in the way he bent his back in a silent oh my god please give me more.

And who was Kyuhyun to deny him what he asked for? Especially when it was exactly what he wanted as well. He pulled back agonizingly slow, only to let his hips move forward again and again and again, building a steady rhythm. Slow and agonizing. His fingers were clutching on the other man’s hips at first but the enticing slope of the long back was still like hypnotizing him, and soon he brought his fingers up to trace Zhou Mi’s spine in a feathery light touch. His hand only stopped at his shoulder, grabbing it to half-push Zhou Mi into the wall and half-pull him back against himself.

Desperately, Zhou Mi was trying to find something to grasp, something to get a hold of to support himself but all his fingers met was the tiled, slippery wall right in front of him. Then the next thrust followed, pushing him against the wall with such insistent fervour that it made him release a sharp outcry. He could feel every single inch of the other man inside of him, every millimetre of him stretching him further. It was bordering on painful but the pleasure was so intense it rode out everything else, made him bite his hurt lower lip so the sting would remind him this wasn’t just a dream.

Kyuhyun was still wearing his jeans, forgotten in the heat of passion, and whenever the rough fabric brushed against the bare skin on the back of Zhou Mi’s thighs he shivered involuntarily. He could feel Kyuhyun’s lips on his skin, on his spine and at the back of his neck, finally on his shoulder and the next second hot breath ghosted over his ear. “C’mon, Mi.” The urgency was written all over the softly spoken words, Kyuhyun’s voice tight and barely controlled, the undercurrents of sheer need ready to be unleashed. “C’mon.”

It didn’t take more than that to send Zhou Mi flying. That and a perfectly aimed thrust that made him see stars, flashing white in front of his wide open eyes. He choked out a breathless o-oh my god Kui Xian and the next thing he knew was that he’d been pushed over the edge, free-falling through the forceful climax. Kyuhyun followed straight after, as well with the other man’s name on his lips.




They shared slow, languid kisses until the air around them was getting steamy from the moisture, the shower still running, and distantly they could hear someone banging on the door. They ignored it. Kyuhyun ran his long fingers up along the other man’s side, around him to his shoulder blade, to pull him closer against himself. He felt Zhou Mi’s arms wrapping around him, hugging him tight for a second.

“I’d carry you into bed but I think your gangly limbs would get stuck in the doorway.” Kyuhyun couldn’t help but to smile against the other man’s neck while speaking, though, and he was certain that the tone of his voice reflected what was going on inside of him. Instead of teasing, it came out increasingly sugary and it almost sounded like I love you.

He was certain Zhou Mi heard it too, since the first reply he got was breathless, happy laughter and a kiss on his jaw line. “I’ll walk. But only if you let me use you as a pillow.”

Kyuhyun smiled against Zhou Mi’s skin. “Don’t I always?”






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2418 words.

I should be better at writing smut, seriously. But I guess it’s semi-decent anyway? XD It was hotter in my mind *pah* But I like parts of it! \8D/ …I’m just going to run off now.

And someone teach me to write proper summaries and come up with good titles ;___; I hate it. Okay, someone teach me to write, period XD

*runs around in circles* Why am I so hyperactive today?


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[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
And I'm leaving a spot for [livejournal.com profile] imxaxreader because she wanted one ♥ I hope you like it bb ;__; ♥

[identity profile] imxaxreader.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)


...i can't find the right words to express how fhkahfkas brilliant this is and how much this little piece of hot perfection made my day (or night, seeing as it's already 8PM here), but please know you are insanely awesome and i adore your writing sfm unnie. SERIOUSLY.

“Close your mouth, Kyuhyun, you look dumb. Now, scramble off! You can continue elsewhere.” NINJA!ALL-KNOWING AND PERVERT HEECHUL FTW. WHY ARE YOU MAKING ME LOVE YOU EVEN MORE CHUL. WAEEEEE.

SO. UM. WHY ARE YOU EVEN HYPERACTIVE TODAY I DON'T UNDERSTAND. AREN'T YOU SICK. PLEASE GET SOME REST AND I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON UNNIE~

i probably need to start working on my fail!story now, seeing as you already finished one of your 64827492 unfinished fics. orz

P.S. I SEE YOU SEXONLEGS!MIMI ICON JDHASFAWHFKADGJHFAK *A*

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
EEEEEE *jumps around* You have no idea how giggly I NOW am! 8D I think I just giggled out loud. Oh yes I'm sick >___>;

But I DO know that I am so so happy that you liked it! I was kind of nervous who am I kidding I was dying of nervousness and I'm smiling like an idiot now! I am!

I love the perverted Heechul making his appearances ;__; He is just so good. And the image of Kyuhyun with his mouth open, drooling after Mimi, is more than nice 8D

haha yes I am sick and I think the sickness finally reached my brains 8D I'm going to go away for the weekend though (starting like, now) so I won't be online and can try to rest x)

OH YES. You need to work on your story and never call it fail again! hee now I only have like 64827491 fics to finish 8D

OH YES, SEXONLEGS!MIMI JUST FOR YOU 8D

[identity profile] imxaxreader.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
ROFL. I THINK I JUST GIGGLED OUT LOUD WHEN I SAW YOUR REPLY. YOU ARE SO BOUNCY TODAY I CAN'T EVEN. I'M GLAD YOU'RE STILL AS GIGGLY AS EVER EVEN THOUGH YOU'RE SICK UNNIE. ♥

oh~ go enjoy your weekend! i hope you feel better soon~ AND YES, PLEASE DO TRY TO REST. STOP BEING HYPERACTIVE FOR AT LEAST TWO DAYS OKAY. YOU NEED TO GET BETTER! <3

working on it now (and still failing WHY IS THIS MY LIFE AGAIN). i hope i can accomplish a lot today. fighting~! lol at you, unnie. i'll be waiting for you to finish that 64827491 fics! orz

SEXONLEGS!MIMI BACK AT YOU! 8DD SERIOUSLY WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
haha as long as I'm tired I'm hyperactive and it happens ...a lot XD But it's good as long as it's the good kind of hyperactiveness 8D ♥

I at least slept a lot. That's good, right? XD And I don't wanna go to school tomorrow ;___; I wanna stay home and fangirl and have fun and write and read and baaaww.

GO GO! You can finish it! *cheers* We have to make a deal, so that you'll finish a fic every time I finish a couple of mine XD

OH MIMI♥ Me? Oh shush, you're making me blush XD

[identity profile] imxaxreader.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
lol. i don't think i can be tired and hyperactive at the same time. XDD

yeah! i'm happy you got to sleep a lot. you're on your way to becoming better and cold-free! orz HFKASHFKS I HAVE MY HOSPITAL DUTY TODAY AND I DON'T FEEL LIKE LEAVING THE HOUSE BECAUSE THAT MEANS 8 HOURS OF BEING AWAY FROM MY LAPTOP, 8 HOURS OF BEING AWAY FROM OUR BOYS AND I WON'T GET TO SEE THE FULL PERFECTION MV UNTIL I GET HOME LATERRRR. >:|

THE LEGS. KILL ME WITH THE LEGS. ♥♥ orz but it's the truth! =))))

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
I always am hyper when I get tired XD Until I drop.

It takes so much sleep though, last night I slept like nine hours and I'm still tired. But I think it's slowly easing up :) 8 hours? That's too much D: I only have to be away 5-6 hours and that already fels like too much! BUT I JUST WATCHED THE VIDEO and am gonna be late for class, hehe, I should already be on my way AND OMG MIMI IS SUCH A KILLER. HE IS GORGEOUS AND HE IS STUNNING AND HIS VOICE AHSKOLHJDFBJKGN AND KYUHYUN LOOKS LIKE A HOT AS HELL DARK AND BROODY MOB-BOSS OR SOMETHING AND HE IS SO GODDAMN HOT AND I AM REPEATING MYSELF AND GOSH. Seriously, it's awesome.

LEEEEGS. (there's more legs in the new mv 8D) MIMILEGS is probably my favorite thing to wake up to in the morning. ILU♥

[identity profile] imxaxreader.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
lol. i sleep like the dead when i'm tired. XDD

KJHZSKJFS I ENVY YOU. AT LEAST YOU CAN STILL GET 9 HOURS OF SLEEP I CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER THE LAST TIME I SLEPT THAT LONG. ;_______; yeaaah, but i think time flies even faster when i'm doing hospital duty than being stuck inside the classroom, listening to professors droning on and on about something i'm really not interested about. XDD BDKSHFKSD I JUST FINISHED WATCHING THE MUSIC VIDEO AND I THINK I CAN JUST ABOUT DIE WITH HAPPINESS RN. i was thinking of skipping hospital duty earlier just so i can watch the mv really HE IS, OHMYGOD I DON'T KNOW HOW SUCH A LOVELY CREATURE LIKE HIM EXISTS REALLY. I MEAN THOSE LEGS AND THAT VOICE AND THAT BEAUTIFUL FACE HE IS STUNNING YES I TOTALLY AGREE. AND KYUHYUN YOU SHALL BE NAMED KYULINER FROM NOW ON HOW CAN YOU BE SO BLOODY HOT I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO COMPREHEND. AND HYUK YOU HAVE SUCH LONG SEXY LEGS TOO LIKE MIMI WAE GIVE ME ANOTHER REASON TO LOVE YOU EVEN MORE. ♥ these boys, they're seriously going to kill us with their loveliness sooner or later.

YES, I CAN SEE THOSE LONG, LONG LEGS PERFECTLY WELL. orz, that is understandable; no one can resist mimilegs okay. ILU2♥

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh me too, when I'm tired enough to actually sleep! XD

AWW POOR BB ;____; What keeps you up then? You should sleep enough! You're right though, listening to lectures and boring lessons is always worse than having something to do. I enjoyed my teaching practical periods way more than the theoretical parts.

BUT YES THE MUSIC VIDEO! I just posted about it but I tried to refrain myself and actually sound like a sane person instead of a spazzy fangirl XD BUT GODDAMNIT. MIMI IS SO PERFECT ;__; HIS VOICE AND HIS LEGS. Already that is enough to make my brains go byebye. He is too beautiful to be true ;__;♥ AND KYUHYUN IS SO HOT. You know, Kyuhyun so totally adapted to the dark and hot look since he needs to show people he can defend his property. Aka Mimi. Zhou Mi is so stunning that Kyuhyun had to go all tough to both match his boyfriend in gorgeousness AND to fend off all the too eager fans 8D

No one. Especially not Kyuhyun 8D SEE I AM GETTING REPETITIVE. But I love the two of them and Mimi's legs combined with Kyuhyun! ♥

[identity profile] imxaxreader.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
lol you need all that hyperactive energy sucked straight right out of you before you can actually get to bed and sleep. XDDD

YES PITY ME UNNIE. ;_______; school, kyuhyun, school, mimi, school, eunhyuk, school, donghae, school, sungmin, school, leeteuk, school, ryeowook, school, heechul, school, leeteuk, school, shindong, school, siwon, school, henry, school, yesung, school, kangin, school, hankyung, school. SO BASICALLY SCHOOL AND SUPER JUNIOR. XDD;;;; but, meh, it's mostly school stuff that keeps me up. >.< i very much enjoy being in the hospital and interacting with lots of different people. it's infinitely better than being stuck inside the classroom. XD

I KNOW. I READ YOUR SPAZZY POST AND JFKAJFKSF MIMI LOOKS SO LOVELY I DON'T THINK I CAN HANDLE TOO MUCH LOVELINESS IN ONE NIGHT. *A* and kyu gets hotter and hotter with each album, i can't even comprehend how that boy does it so effortlessly. one smoldering look at the camera, and i die. lol! that totally explains the sudden hotness and seductive transformation. yes, kyu should defend and protect what's his, ain't that right? 8DD

lol mimilegs + kyuhyun = perfection. ♥♥ oh tai wanmei~ otl see i'm totally addicted to this song now omg

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Something like that XD I'm bad. Sometimes I sleep one hour a night and sometimes I sleep twelve and it's so totally inconsistent XD

I DO ;__; AND I SEND YOU POSITIVE THOUGHTS! ♥ haha sounds like my life, basically, school and fangirling. No time for other things XD I'm so lazy with school I barely do anything I'm supposed to. I can believe though that it's nice to be in the hospital! I feel the same way about teaching, it's way nicer to be there with the kids than to sit in a dark classroom!

MIIMIII ♥ He is absolutely perfect, I swear. And with Kyuhyun they're just the hottest couple in the whole kpop scene 8D haha and hey, I bet Kyuhyun is possessive! He'll shoot those dark looks at anyone who looks at Mimi too long 8D he'd so kill me, haha, I'd stare way too long XD

The song is going through my head on repeat now! Seriously, addictive! Just like QMi! ♥

[identity profile] criticalchi.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure I should be commenting when there's a spot (even now, it's still confusing v.v), but...
THAT. WAS. BFVEUIHCYEUDGDSUIFYHDSUIDHVJSKDF. YEAH, THAT.

WANT ME TO SAY IT AGAIN? FUHFJFRHEFGYTUJKEUFIHNJSHYGUHDJEURFHDU.

YEAH. I'M GONNA RE-READ IT AGAIN.

HOPE I DON'T DIE (*advance revival, please? :3*)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
OF COURSE YOU SHOULD! Don't worry, the whole spot-thing confuses the hell out of me too but I was asked so I did one XD

AND THANK YOUUUUU~ Seriously I was so iffy about this since it's been LONG since I last wrote something like this but yeah. I'm glad you liked it! I am so relieved now heheheheee 8D

*revives*

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 11:23 am (UTC)(link)
I AM NEVER GOING TO HAVE A SHOWER WITHOUT THINKING OF QMI SEX NOW. THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU. ALL HAIL SHOWER!SEX. 8)


(I love ninja!pervert Heechul)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
That makes the two of us! 8D Seriously, showering alone is so boring. AND THANK YOUUU~ I'm glad you liked it! 8D

I love him too. And he keeps on forcing his way into my fics whether I want him there or not XD

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
dude, my mum just asked me to go have a shower and I looked at her like 'OMG YES I WANT TO SHOWER TODAY' and then my mom looked creeped out like my daughter is acting waaay to happy just for a shower. QMi does shit to my head♥ Showering alone is boring. 8DDDDD


what's not there to love about pervert Heechul?? 8D Heechul is addicting >:)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* You have no idea how much I now laughed at that XD BUT YES. QMi does that to me too.

True, he is XD And he makes such a good character in fics.

[identity profile] maxism12.livejournal.com 2011-02-21 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, well the legs on the Mi and the snark on the Kyu make me a crazy fangirl. >.>

[identity profile] lil-aqua-chic.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
LJ also needs like buttons cuz I need to press it a million + 1 times! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 also loving the chul cameo XD

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww thank you! I'm happy to hear that! haha it's so much fun to add short Chul appearances XD

[identity profile] choitoplove.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
HNGGGG Qmi shower sex. Definitely a good way to start my day

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! 8D I'm glad you think so ;D

[identity profile] krystallissa.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
SEXY SPOT FOR LATER~ <3

[identity profile] krystallissa.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
OKAY. JUST. DAHFVBKja|HDVCLK\JAHDFCVLa\jhvLJ\ESHDV\XLJFE\SVHFKLJDS

*Incoherent*

How you can even think to believe that you are rusty is unfathomable for me~!

I died whilst reading it.

Heechul being all-knowing, and wanting a report later was LOL, just like him!

And I love it when Zhou Mi bottoms, I seriously don't see enough of this, therefore you are AWESOME :D

And the smut itself... ;) Just TOO HOT

and then the so completely sugary love confession at the end from Kyu and Mi~ <33333333333333333333333

*Goes to read again, dies happy*

Thanks for such an awesome fic in your time of sickness XD <3

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I think I quite like that level of incoherency! 8D Thank you! heh I dunno, somehow it didn't feel like it flowed as well as it could have, and I am rusty XD It's been so long!

I love Heechul making small appearances like that XD He always does that and sneaks into my fics. Oh and I agree, there's not enough of bottom!Mi 8) The world could use much more of it!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ;D I'm glad you liked!

[identity profile] gothicdragon752.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my~
So hot *¬*

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] sjfighting39.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
This was so......amazing. The wording is so perfect!

I'd quote, but then I'd just copy the whole story into his comment...

<3

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] x-lain-x.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
qmi smut! world needs more of that /o/

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes you're so right!

[identity profile] repackagedx.livejournal.com 2011-02-19 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
sldkh;laskdjf

well wasn't this extremely hot asldhkgfj


SHOWER PORNNNNNNNNNN /SOBBING. I HAVEN'T READ THIS IN FOREVER AND EVER. OH MY GOSH. Q_________Q I KIND OF REALLY LOVE YOU FOR IT ♥

THIS WAS AMAZING DEAR~

OH HUSH YOU. YOU WRITE WONDERFULLY. ♥

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank youuuuuuuu~! 8D I'm happy you liked it!

I kind of have a thing for shower!porn, I admit *laughs* This thing wouldn't leave me alone before it was written x)

Aw thankies ♥

[identity profile] jirluvien.livejournal.com 2011-02-19 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn, this was so hot *whimpers*
...yeah, not the best fic to read first thing in the morning (since I'll be running around all horny the whole day), but who cares XD

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! haha but at least it woke you up in the morning, eh? XD

[identity profile] vintagentleman.livejournal.com 2011-02-19 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
LA FFFUUUUDGE.

I have a soft spot for bottom!Mi. >__> That just made this fic 309325 times even better, and just. kekek Heechul would. ~

More, yes yes more please? * A *

This was brain-meltingly hot and sogfkldfhirth.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-20 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too! There's just not enough of bottom!Mi around or then I just missed all the fics with it... could be either XD

More? Oh I can't promise it'll be anytime soon, but I can promise that there will be more once XD As soon as I'll find the time for writing properly!

Thank you so much ♥ I'm happy you liked it :)

[identity profile] shining-star15.livejournal.com 2011-02-25 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
basically, very very hot.
:D

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-02-25 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] acornmama.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
You do porn well too. Not bad at all, a nicely visual shower scene. Love it.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-05-30 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] uchouten.livejournal.com 2011-10-08 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
well

I think it was too early in the morning for this *___*

you're fantastic lol <3 thank you

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2011-10-13 11:32 am (UTC)(link)
ahaha is it ever too early for smut? XD

Thank you! :D I'm glad you like!