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rabenhorst ([personal profile] rabenhorst) wrote2008-04-03 11:53 am

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So, this is now the last one of the Christmas request fics to be posted from us for now^^ It took far longer than expected, apologies for that, but somehow we both seemed to develop a busy schedule all of a sudden and couldn’t keep on posting them as quickly as we would’ve wanted to! Anyways, I hope you enjoyed the presents, and stay tuned for more fics that will hopefully follow rather sooner than later ;)

Oh, and [livejournal.com profile] xxdahlia, dear, I’m so sorry that we still didn’t manage to write your request! It WILL come, I promise, I just can’t know yet when. Your request was very inspiring and we have a ready plot and all, but since you wanted a sad fic it’s somehow so hard for us to begin writing it x) We’ll try though, promised, and feel free to kick our butts when it’s taken too long well it already has but anyways.

So now, on with the fic.

Title: Birthday Surprise
Author: [livejournal.com profile] seinen_no and [livejournal.com profile] fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: DiexKaoruxToshiya
Disclaimer: We own no one, only our dirty imaginations.
Summary: It’s Kaoru’s birthday and he receives a surprise present from his lover and one of his best friends. A PWP ensues 8D
Comments:
[livejournal.com profile] seinen_no: Damn, I shouldn't proof-read fics like this at work. It's not good for my social status as my colleagues think I've gone crazy 'cause of the moronic grin on my lips. And I don't want to think what would happen if somebody ever managed to sneak a peek at the text I'm reading here XD Luckily, most of their English isn't good. Anyhow, I only wanted to tell you to read and fucking enjoy this!
I think you can even read it if you're a DiexKao lover and don't like other pairings, because the main focus is on them. Anyhow, please enjoy. And yeah, we know men can't go this often in a short time usually, but it's fun to write x)

[livejournal.com profile] fonulyn: Well, it’s pretty much mere porn so don’t expect 110% accuracy or famous plots from it XD Also, we haven’t really written threesomes before so you have to be gentle on us, alright? ;) Still I enjoyed re-reading it now, and I hope you will like it as much as I do :D Besides, having Die and Kaoru together with a little or a bit more Toshiya thrown into the mix is just something I would love to see more of XD

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Plus, the archive.



Written for: [livejournal.com profile] silverdemon88
Original request:
- pairing: hmm...DiexKao most def. I wouldnt mind seeing a DiexKyo or DiexToshiya though. Just to try it :P
- genre: AU, band. I dont mind :D
- rating: o0....do I have to answer that? ;) *is a perv*
- what I would like: hmm...I would like Diru wrapped up and sent to me, but for the fic just your general sweetness/fluff and smut ^^ *cough* and maybe a bit of threesome action.*cough* Seinen_no knows what I'm talking about :D (I think)
- what I don't want: EVILNESS! unhappy stuffs. I like happy :D I dont mind a bit of drama not too much.



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Birthday Surprise



Glad that finally all the guests had left, Kaoru brought the used glasses and bottles back into the kitchen. It had been a stressful week and at first, he had wanted to just skip his birthday and not throw a party at all. Only Die, his partner and lover, had convinced him that this was a good way to forget work and relax a bit. But where was the redhead now when it was time to clean up? In bed already, of course. Kaoru didn't plan to really clean up everything, only put the glasses into the dishwasher and then head to bed himself, being a bit ditsy and tired.

After a short stop in the bathroom where he only brushed his teeth and got rid of his jeans and shirt, he headed for the bedroom, hoping that Die wouldn't be sprawled out in the middle of the bed, holding the blanket hostage as usual. But when the older guitarist stepped through the door and his glance fell upon the bed, he froze in the movement. There was Die, but he wasn't alone. He was with Toshiya and both men turned to look at him with a weird expression. Tilting his head, Kaoru arched a questioning eyebrow like asking what that was supposed to mean.

The only answer he got was a smirk from the younger guitarist though, the bassist's expression almost a matching grin. Slowly, making sure that Kaoru was watching every single movement Die turned his head, only to engage the man beside him in a deep kiss. He could feel Kaoru's gaze practically burning, intense and definitely drinking in the sight, and that was enough to confirm that he had indeed predicted his lover's reaction right. They had even talked about something along these lines once, Kaoru confessing that he had been thinking how it would be, and as Die definitely wasn't opposing the idea he had decided to make it a nice birthday surprise for the bandleader.

For a few heartbeats, Kaoru was like rooted to the ground, unable to move as he was just held captive by the sight of his lover making out heavily with their bassist, exchanging feverish kisses and longing touches. He knew that the show was just for him and it caused his heart to jump into his throat where it began to beat frantically. Slowly, he inched closer to the bed as well and finally knelt down on the edge.

The stress of the past week was like melting away, channelled through the stirring erection in his boxers. It was so unreal and yet, when he reached out his hand, he felt the heat of Die's body as he ran his fingertips along the soft side of his lean frame. The barely palpable touch was enough to make the redhead shiver a bit, and he gestured with his hand for the older man to come closer. When he was handily in reach, Die took a hold of his shoulder and pulled him against himself. The line of heated kisses broke, and again there was a smirk on Die's features. "We've been waiting for you." His voice was merely a low whisper, still somehow audible in the otherwise silent room.

"Doesn't look like it," Kaoru replied boldly, but couldn't prevent a shudder form running down his spine at the tone of his lover's voice. Toshiya simply smiled, leaned forward and breathed a few soft kisses on the older guitarist's sensitive neck. "Die said you are so tense lately." While speaking, he slid his hand down, straight between the other man's legs where he cupped his arousal through the thin fabric of his boxers. "And I see he's right."

Instantly a shudder went through Kaoru's body but he didn't have the chance to reply anything since he was cut off by his lover's lips on his, demandingly initiating a deep, breathtaking kiss. Die managed to distract him with it so that he didn't even notice before he was lying on his back, now between the two taller men. After the kiss broke, simply another one was initiated and since Toshiya didn't want to be left out, his hands were boldly travelling along the older guitarist's body.

Finally, he took a firm hold of his boxers, demandingly tugging them down. At first, Kaoru wanted to protest, a bit embarrassed to be exposed in front of his longtime friend. But Die didn't allow him to move much, pressed him against the mattress with gentle force and kissed him so hard and fierce that it took the other man’s breath away and made his head spin, caused his thoughts to become undone.

Smiling, the bassist brought his face close to the two kissing guitarists and poked out his tongue, running it across the corner of Die's mouth as if he wanted to ask to be invited as well. Die pulled back slightly from the kiss so that the third man could participate as well. It was somewhat awkward, three people trying to be included in the same kiss, but they all liked it nevertheless, the moment holding a strange sensuality.

Kaoru had just the time to feel Die's hand slide downwards along his lower abdomen before he laced his fingers around the hardness that was already begging for some attention. Toshiya's hands were busy too, following the same trail, his long fingers seeming to be all over the lead guitarist's upper body. These two seemed to be determined to drive Kaoru out of his mind, but all this was only the mere beginning. Still, it was enough to elicit a raw, needy, moan from Kaoru. His chest was already heaving from ragged breaths, his expression speaking of pleasure and want.

When he looked down, he only saw his two companions exchange a small glance before Toshiya bowed his head, attending the sensitive area around his navel with licks and small bites. That, and the touch on his quivering length, was almost too much already and a forceful shudder shook the older guitarist's fragile form. "I think we have to take it slow," the bassist drawled, peeking at Die from the corner of his eyes. "Not to let it end too soon."

"You're right." The redhead smirked, only sparing his lover a sideways glance. Teasingly he moved his thumb across the sensitive tip of the arousal before withdrawing his hand completely. Reaching up Die placed a short but nevertheless deep kiss on his lover's mouth, then moved down to his neck, scraping his teeth over the soft skin. Toshiya took care of Kaoru's other side and in between the two taller men exchanged short, heated kisses as well.

They could feel the lead-guitarist's heart beat madly in his chest, heard the rising desperation in his voice with every sigh and moan that escaped him. "He's so hard," Toshiya whispered when felt the older man's arousal press against his hip as Kaoru tried to turn a bit to gain some of the needed friction.

Die moved his hand down the older guitarist's stomach, like tentatively running his palm along the hard flesh as he reached it. It made him purr contently as he noticed how much the whole moment had already affected his lover, and he rewarded the other man with a small kiss on his chest. Wordlessly he slid lower until his face was at the same level as Kaoru's hips, and slowly ran his tongue along the arousal all the way. The outcry the action caused was drowned out by the deep kiss Toshiya had initiated.

Instinctively, Kaoru's hips moved up, his body clearly showing that he needed more already although he was inwardly still fighting for control. It couldn’t be that he was affected this easily, after all he was no teenager anymore. After the kiss had ended, Toshiya followed Die, moving down until he was able to let his tongue circle the already wet crown of the arousal.

They truly were doing their best to make the proud lead guitarist squirm, their mission to make him beg as that was almost impossible. They seemed to be on their way there though, as when they simultaneously used their tongues on the turgid flesh, even scraping their teeth over it, the shudders that were shaking Kaoru seemed to become more frequent, more forceful.

At one point, Die took the head of the arousal between his lips and instantly moved his head down, deepthroating it. Meanwhile, the bassist was busy nibbling the soft skin of the older guitarist's thighs, gently urging him to part his legs a bit further and give them more room to work. Feeling his hardness brush along the back of his lover's throat made Kaoru cry out surprised and he had to surrender to the waves of pleasure that were collapsing over him. His back arching off the mattress, he instinctively grabbed a few strands of red hair, urging Die down even further.

Although they knew each other for such a long time already, this was definitely out of the usual, and Toshiya's bites and licks on the inside of his thighs were adding its own spice to it. Besides, Die didn't even try to resist, allowed his lover to move his hips upwards, trying to comply to his wishes and take all of the thick flesh into his mouth. He knew Kaoru's body like his own, and used the knowledge shamelessly to elicit every single possible reaction from the other man. It was surprisingly easy even, Toshiya's advances adding up to his, making Kaoru go through such sensations he had never experienced before.

All shame was forgotten, his pride gone like it had never existed before when Kaoru felt himself near the needed release bit by bit. Every single sensation, all his senses, seemed to melt down to one tiny spot until all that was left behind was blinding pleasure. His panting breath showed his lover how close he really was and when the orgasm finally hit him with full force, he pressed Die's head down again while his back arched off the mattress as he came hard, accompanied by an almost relieved groan.

Die desperately tried not to choke as his head was forced down, but he managed, relaxing his throat as best as he could. Only when Kaoru's body was relaxing slightly, he pulled back. The older guitarist seemed to be totally lost in some other realm for the time being, and Die wanted to give him a moment to linger in the pleasant feelings still. He simply grabbed Toshiya's head, pulling his friend into a rough kiss to channel some of the heat that had gathered inside of him.

The bassist was a willing victim. The whole moment hadn't left him unaffected either and while Kaoru was still busy trying to process what had just happened, was still floating somewhere in the blissful aftermath, he allowed his long fingers to travel down Die's chest, brushing over the silky hairs of his lower stomach until he reached his arousal. Obviously delighted and equally determined, the bassist laced his fingers around it and began to stroke him gently.

A long, incoherent groan escaped the redhead but the sound was muffled by the deep kiss as he wasn't willing to let go of it. Tilting his head he tried to deepen the contact even more, and it resulted in them falling down on the mattress, the guitarist practically lying on top of the other man. With both hands, Toshiya grabbed Die's butt and yanked him close to grind against him, needing the friction himself.

Meanwhile, the older guitarist had landed back to reality at least partly and rolled on his side, looking at the two curiously. The sight alone served to cause a flash of heat to shoot through him, made him sigh deeply. Guided purely by instinct, the redhead grinded against the other man firmly, wanting and needing the contact as the just experienced had simply left its marks on him. From the corner of his eyes he tried to see Kaoru though, to find out if he had already landed back to reality and how he would react now.

The older guitarist was on his hands and knees, crawling closer to the two, allowing his hand to travel down the redhead's spine, his index-finger sliding along the cleft between his butt-cheeks. Instantly, he was turned-on again, the heat back as if it hadn't been gone in the first place. Slowly, he brought his face close to Die's, dropping his voice to a teasing purr. "Do you want to fuck him?" He made sure that the bassist could hear those words as well, wanting to see his reaction to it.

Toshiya closed his eyes, a clear shudder going through him at hearing the mere words, and like to show that he at least agreed he bucked up slightly against the redhead. It made Die groan lowly, and he locked his gaze with his lover's. Slowly he nodded, not trusting his voice completely as he had the feeling it might fail him if he tried. He received a deep kiss from the older guitarist before Kaoru turned his attention towards Toshiya, kissing him as well. To be honest, he had no idea if the bassist was experienced with men or not, but he trusted that he would say if something was off or not to his likes.

Die had only exchanged a few words about it with his friend beforehand, but he knew that Toshiya wasn't exactly inexperienced at least so one didn't have to be that easy on him. Still, he reached out and dug out a tube of lubricant they had placed beside the bed head, knowing it'd be needed later on. Using a generous amount of the substance, he brought his hand to the bassist's butt, sliding two fingers inside to stretch him.

Instantly he aimed for the good spot, wanting to see if he could make the other man cry out in pleasure. He didn't have to wait long. Being tantalized by such able fingers made Toshiya bang his head against the cushion, his back arching slightly off the mattress as he groaned sexily. Shifting a bit, he slid lower, spread his legs further and with it pushed the digits deeper into himself. Kaoru didn't feel like only watching and first stretched his neck to give his lover a short kiss before he bowed his head, took Toshiya's arousal in his palm and circled its head with his tongue before taking a bit of it into his mouth, sucking slightly.

The bassist was writhing and squirming on the sheets, his mouth open as he tried to gasp for breath desperately. Die used the moment to roll a condom over his arousal, before steadying his friend's hips and invading him in a short thrust. The tightness was overwhelming and he couldn't hold back a raw outcry, closing his eyes. He stilled for a moment to gain control over himself. It took too long for Toshiya's liking and he nudged his hips, already greedy for more, more of those sensations that made his head spin, caused him to forget how to breathe. Kaoru had withdrawn from his arousal again, only lazily stroking him for the time being and instead nibbled the beautiful long neck of his friend, tasting the salt from rising sweat there.

Everything had the touch of doing something forbidden, but it felt all too good to waste another thought about that. Urged on by the bassist's movements, the redhead soon picked up a steady pace of long, deep thrusts. The moment felt somehow strange, having his lover watch while he practically nailed their friend into the mattress, trying to gain more of the addicting sensations. Feeling Kaoru's gaze on them made it all somehow even more intense and he couldn't help that he shuddered forcefully.

Suddenly, he felt a warm presence behind himself, hadn’t seen it because the pleasure had forced him to close his eyes. Able fingers were sliding down his back, softly touching his sides, finally forcing him to still his movements. "You two are sexy together." His lover's low voice resonated in his ear and the next second, he was filled in the most intimate of ways.

A long, incoherent groan forced its way from Die's throat and for a short moment, he felt he would just burst with all the feelings that were collapsing on him at once. Only when he felt Kaoru begin to move, to practically slam into him, he followed the example, trying to resume the steady pace from before. Toshiya was already impatiently squirming, wanting more and showing it with several frustrated whimpers.

It was the closest three humans could get and their simultaneous moans showed that they all were enjoying it equally much. Kaoru was the one who dictated the rhythm from that moment on, forced himself deep into his lover and passed the power of his thrusts on to Toshiya who greedily took everything he got. At one point, he couldn't bear the pressure any longer, wanted to help himself to find release by bringing his hand to his arousal, stroking it in time with the hard thrusts that pushed him deep into the mattress, let him feel the weight of both men above him.

It only took a few more of those hard thrusts and he was almost there, already teetering on the edge. It was Die who got pushed over the edge first though, the combined feelings simply too much to bear. The tight heat already made him feel like his head was spinning, but feeling simultaneously how his lover was slamming deep into him made it all just too much to take. He screamed out loud, his whole being tensing forcefully as he thrust into the willing body before him a couple of times more until the orgasm washed his consciousness away.

It was enough for Toshiya though and his being tensed. At the same moment when he was taken away by a wave of bliss, he heard Kaoru growl almost dangerously, knowing he had reached his limits as well. It was a mixture of feeling, seeing, tasting and something else one could only describe to someone who has ever experienced a mind-blowing orgasm before.

Completely exhausted and sweaty, Kaoru pulled away from his lover and dropped to the side, staring at the ceiling from wide open eyes that still saw nothing. Like in a dream Die pulled back, slipping away from the bassist and discarded the used condom to the bedside heedlessly. He didn't have the strength to do anything else though and practically collapsed beside Toshiya, both men gasping for breath desperately.

It was Kaoru who spoke up first, his words interrupted by heavy breaths. "You do realize that I," he inhaled deeply to be able to go on, "am old and have a weak heart?" The next second, he chuckled a bit. "Damn!"

"Really?" The younger guitarist lifted his head, grinning brightly at the other one. "I thought you're still this young rock-god. I'm sorry, my mistake."

"Bastard!" That earned him a weak kick against his leg.

Finally, Toshiya was able to move again and rolled on his side, looking at the two lovers. "Don't whine, I've just been fucked by the both of you and I don't complain either about my heart..."

"You're young!" Came the reply from both of the guitarists simultaneously and it made them all laugh. "You're supposed to be still totally fit." Die went on, winking.

"I'm still fit enough for you," the bassist stated ginning. "At least I don't have to dye my hair to cover the first grey strands," he mocked, knowing it wasn't the truth.

"Hey!" Anyways Die tried to aim a kick at the younger man's butt. "That was a low blow. Way below the belt!"

"I haven't gone below the belt yet really," Toshiya retorted, trying to dodge the hit. Kaoru eyed the scene amused, thinking it would be better to stay out of this fight as he knew how easily those two combined forces against him.

"You bastard." The redhead pursed his lips, trying to frown but he couldn't hold back a few chuckles. Quickly he rolled closer to his lover, wrapping one arm around him. "And why aren't you defending me?"

"Because I'm spent?" The older guitarist suggested smirking. "And I still can't believe all this...?"

"You should ALWAYS defend me anyways." Die reached up, engaging them in a deep, slow kiss, taking his time with it. Kaoru allowed himself to get lost in the sensations for the time being, even wrapped his arms around his lover's neck to hold him close. As the kiss dragged on, he blindly reached out his hand though, not wanting to leave Toshiya out and make him feel awkward.

Instantly, the bassist crawled closer to them, loosely wrapping his arms around Die's waist. The redhead relaxed slightly into the embrace, and as the kiss broke he turned a bit, just enough to steal a shorter kiss from Toshiya as he simply couldn't resist the temptation.

It was a relaxed moment because all of them were a bit exhausted, needing some time to recover from the just experienced physically and mentally. It wasn't anything of the usual for any of them and especially not for the two guitarists who were having a steady relationship for years already.

The silence lasted for some time, before the redhead spoke up, breaking it. "So, anyone up for another round?" He was practically beaming, looking even a bit funny with his hair sticking into every possible direction.

Kaoru rolled his eyes theatrically. "You are insatiable, baby." He didn't manage to hide his small grin though and one could tell by the sparkle in his eyes that he was far from being reluctant.

Toshiya on his side began to nibble the redhead's ear, tracing the shell with the tip of his tongue. "Have anything special in mind?" he asked whispering, allowing his breath to strike the wet skin.

Die shivered, closing his eyes and enjoyed the feelings and even tilted his head to offer the bassist more skin to work with. "Hmm, anything special?" He grinned, and looked up again to take a long glance at his lover. "I wonder… what our birthday-hero would want?"

Before Kaoru could answer to the question, Toshiya had wrapped his arms securely around the redhead, rolling on his back until the other man was resting against his chest. "I think," he whispered, his gaze fixed on the older guitarist, "he would love to have another present." With having said those words, he took a hold of the hollows of Die's knees and made him part his legs wide, like inviting the older guitarist to take what he wanted.

Die couldn't hold back the shudder that ran through his being at the mere thought, and a small breathy gasp even slipped his throat. He couldn't move really, being held down by the bassist, offered as a present to the older guitarist to use as he wished. And that already turned him on to no end, to feel Kaoru's gaze roam over his being, every single inch.

Slowly, like hesitating, the older guitarist came closer, his gaze never leaving his lover. Outwardly, he seemed to be totally calm while on the inside, his blood was boiling. "The present misses a bow," he remarked almost casually and stretched his neck. But instead of kissing Die, he initiated a deep, passionate kiss with the bassist, like accidentally pressing his thigh against his lover's groin.

That was enough to make the younger guitarist try and buck up, wanting to press himself closer and get more of the slight friction. It was of no use though, as when Toshiya noticed him moving he tightened his hold instantly, practically immobilizing the redhead. The kiss was long, neither willing to break it soon, and Die found himself just staring at the scene, totally hypnotized. Although it lacked the familiarity the kisses had which he shared with his lover, or maybe just because of that, it managed to make Kaoru's heart beat quicker, made his breathing grow more shallow already.

When they parted, he threw a compassionate glance at the redhead from the corners of his eyes and simply shifted a bit to create some more teasing friction for him while one of his hands found their way between his own legs as he wasn’t fully ready again yet. A small whimper escaped the younger guitarist, as the friction was simply enough to tease, but not to bring him further the way he would've wanted it to. Toshiya had tilted his head, nibbling on the redhead's neck, using his teeth as well, and that already made another shudder go through him.

Again, Kaoru moved without haste when he got between the redhead's legs, shamelessly letting his gaze roam all over his body. It was enticing how Toshiya practically presented him, offered him as a present. Smiling smugly, the older guitarist wet his index-finger by sucking on it and then ran it along the redhead's arousal, further between his legs until he was teasingly pressing against his entrance without doing anything yet. Toshiya could feel the shudder shake the body he was holding, and it was devolving on him, turned him on. "You never told me that he likes to tease," he whispered, kissing the sensitive spot beneath Die's ear where he smelled so good.

The initial answer was a low moan, but Die's lips had curved into a small grin and he nodded. "More than you'd even imagine." His voice was breathless, but he had to get it out. It was true, when Kaoru happened to be in a certain kind of mood he could set out to only tease for ages until they both felt like dying from frustration.

"Don't give away my secrets," the older guitarist admonished before he sealed his lover's lips with a passionate kiss that grew rougher with each passing second. It caused Toshiya's heart to skip a beat, just to watch those two who seemed to be the perfect couple and he couldn't deny that it made him feel special to be allowed to be a part of this for a few moments.

The kiss simply robbed the redhead of the last remaining breath, but still he willingly melted into it, even tried to deepen it further. It was simply addictive, merely kissing Kaoru was something that Die had no words for but he knew he wanted more of it, always. It distracted him so far that he didn't even notice when his lover's finger stopped teasing him and it was his arousal instead, pressing against his entrance and suddenly thrusting deep into him.

They didn't use condoms in a long time anymore and hardly ever used lube, but still Kaoru knew that this would be painful, would make a flash of pleasure and pain explode inside his lover. He couldn't waste many thoughts about it though as he was totally occupied by dealing with the bliss the tightness around him caused, with the intense friction that every thrust brought to him. They knew each other thoroughly, and Kaoru knew how to angle his movements right straight from the beginning to please his lover the most. Already the second thrust made Die cry out loud, the intensity of being filled like this, combined with the slight pain and the enormous flash of pleasure shooting through his mind, enough to let him forget everything else. He would've wanted to meet the thrusts halfway but it was impossible as he was still held tightly by their friend.

The whole moment turned the bassist on seriously too, and Die could feel his arousal press against his back. He was breathing almost as heavily as the two guitarists and had to renew the grip on Die every now and then because his palms were becoming sweaty. Soon, Kaoru didn't hold back in the slightest anymore and just allowed his body to take what it wanted and needed. He had based his palms on the inside of his lover's thighs, urging them apart even further than with Toshiya's help to leave the other man completely open for himself.

Although Die couldn't move at all, or maybe just because of that, the moment felt enormously intense, the heat inside of him almost enough to burst him already. He was begging incoherently, asking for more until the older guitarist was moving as fast and rough as possible. They were both wheezing, only gasping for breath, and all too soon Die could feel himself teeter on the edge. Merely one thrust more and he was sent flying, release washing through him with force.

To see the expression of bliss and pleasure on his face never failed to elicit a forceful reaction from the older guitarist and he couldn't resist but had to lean down and crush their mouths together in a heated kiss. Only a few more thrusts and he was there as well, releasing himself deep inside his lover with closed eyes to imprint every single sensation that was going through him into his memory. Only distantly, he heard Toshiya's needy whimpers when the thrusts had stopped to move Die against his arousal and provide the needed friction, but he couldn't bring himself to care at that moment.

For a long moment the guitarists simply stayed unmoving, still connected and after the kiss broke beginning another one instantly. Only slowly they were landing back to reality, their respiration getting steadier as well. Suddenly Die chuckled, his voice still breathless though. "Tosh's getting impatient." Indeed the bassist was squirming beneath the taller guitarist, fighting for some friction on his arousal.

Kaoru nodded agreeing and finally withdrew from his lover, sitting back on his heels. Only then, Toshiya released Die as well, allowing him to crawl to the side, exposing the bassist's need. "He looks pretty bad," the older man commented and earned a growl from the bassist.

"It's not nice to talk about somebody who is present," he snorted, already bringing his hand between his legs to provide himself the needed friction and finally find release.

The words made Die chuckle, and as he happened to be close enough he reached out his hand to grab Toshiya's wrist and stop his movement. "Hey, don't be selfish." He smirked, nodding towards the older guitarist. "Why don't you share such a nice hard-on with the birthday-boy?"

The tone of his lover's voice caused Kaoru to arch an eyebrow at him, but he willingly shifted so that his back was facing the bassist. "Maybe you are right," Toshiya drawled, not believing that Kaoru was offering himself to him.

Die rolled over, crawling closer to his lover until he was lying right beside him and was able to tilt his head enough to initiate a deep kiss. When they parted he was grinning, pecking the older man's lips again softly. "Enjoy it, baby."

Toshiya had already inched closer to the older guitarist, was now sitting right behind him. He couldn't bear the torment any longer, felt like bursting already and thus gave the other man a shove that sent Kaoru down on the mattress, only steadied by his elbows. He gasped, but couldn't reply anything because of the anticipation that had taken over him.

The younger guitarist smirked, since as Kaoru's hips were up high enough there was just enough space for him to shift so that he could get his head between the mattress and his lover's body. By only lifting his head a bit he was able to run his lips over the other man's length, knowing the teasing touches would make him react sooner or later. Instinctively, Kaoru moved down a bit, but was hindered by Toshiya's hands on his hips.

The bassist held him steady and then suddenly invaded him without further warning. A long, incoherent groan pushed its way past the older guitarist's lips and he let his head fall forward, burying his face in his arms. Being filled this intensely was always special and never failed to make him react right away, made the blood rush through his veins along with pure pleasure.

The sound that pushed past the older guitarist's lips seemed to go straight through the younger one as well. He simply loved to hear his lover voice his pleasure. Toshiya was picking up a steady pace, and soon Die decided that he could as well amuse himself by trying to elicit more reactions from Kaoru. Moving his head upwards again he used his tongue to tantalize the arousal, soon already taking it between his lips and sucking hard.

As if it wasn't enough that the bassist managed to hit his good spot constantly, Die's ministrations made Kaoru's head spin until he felt that the pleasure wasn't of this world anymore, that it wasn't his body that couldn't decide whether to move backwards and force Toshiya in deeper or try to lower himself a bit and get more of the hot wetness around his arousal. He could practically see the delight in Die's eyes to be finally able to tease him as well and he tried to voice his disagreement in form of a deep growl.

That was exactly what Die had been hoping for though, as the deep sounds that escaped the older man were so fucking sexy that he almost wished he could tape them down to listen to them again and again. Knowing how to bring the other guitarist to the edge he ably used his lips and his tongue, only to pull back again teasingly. Eventually he simply wanted his lover to feel as good as possible and set out for the goal, trying to bring him over the edge. Toshiya was doing more than his part too, moving faster and simply taking what he needed, yearned for.

Kaoru's back was arching as one shudder after another went through his whole being and he didn't know where to with all the pleasure that seemed to burn him from the inside. The combined feeling of his lover's mouth around his arousal along with the bassist thrusting deep inside him every time he moved forward, soon became too much to bear. A feral scream tore its way from Kaoru's throat when the orgasm washed over him, almost threatened to knock him out.

Even afterwards, when the first waves of pleasure slowly died away, he remained unmoving, only his heaving chest showing that he was still alive. It only took a couple of thrusts more and the bassist gasped, his body tensing as he released himself forcefully. He felt as if he was flying through space, and he didn't even realize he was moving when he pulled back and collapsed backwards on the mattress.

Die didn't know if his lover would be able to stay in his position for longer and carefully inched away from underneath him, settling to rest beside him for now. Almost instantly, Kaoru dropped to the side as well, pressing his back against his lover, but other than that remained still. It took a few deep breaths before Toshiya got rid of the condom, heedlessly dropping it somewhere on the floor as he didn't have the needed energy to put more effort into it. A moronic smile on both his and the older guitarist's lips showed how good they were feeling, how much they had enjoyed this.

Die was smiling softly as well, as knowing how good his lover was feeling made everything worth it. Wordlessly he sneaked his arms around the smaller guitarist, pulled him into a warm embrace and planted a soft kiss on his neck. He was pretty sure that there wasn't anything he wouldn't do simply to see a smile on Kaoru's lips.

"Thank you!" Kaoru breathed out after a while, addressing both the bassist and his lover. He managed to turn his head enough to press a small kiss somewhere on the redhead's cheek, enjoying how he was held tightly.

The younger guitarist tightened the embrace, chuckling lowly. "Happy birthday."




[identity profile] melissalovedie.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
man i don't think i've ever read DxKxT but it surely was worth trying x]*fans self* (i think this is my second OTP now XDD)
damn i shouldn't have read this just before making a music essay on Felix Mendelssohn XDD
i think it's because Toshiya just fits there, without making the reader shudder out of horror (so please don't try this like with DiexKaoxShinya or anything cause that wouldn't seem natural to me XDD)

errr anyway my brain has just officially left me, so i totally feel stoned now xP

okay to sum this all up: it was hot, very incredibly sexy, and those dialogues were the LOL x)
i'd love it if you'd write something like this sometimes x))))
ps: Present!Die and Uke!Kao made my day :3

oh and btw i've read the other fics too, i just didn't have the time to comment on them yet XD sorry^^; stupid schoolwork >_

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
It's something like a threesome OTP for me too, and I really enjoy the thought of the three of them together XD haha, and I can imagine why it mightn't have been a good idea to read it right before writing the paper, at least things like this always distract me a whole lot when it comes to schoolwork x) I hope you got the essay done at least!
And no worries! With Shinya we would never write anything even nearly sexual XD

It's so nice to hear that you liked it :D I'm smiling like an idiot here and your comment was so nice^^ Thank you! *hugs* And we will see if we write something similar again once. I wouldn't mind at all at least XD

Don't worry, I understand how it is when school gets on the way. Just try to survive there ;)

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[identity profile] k-liope.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 11:51 am (UTC)(link)
definetly I would like such a intereting presente for my birthday xD

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, sorry dear that we couldn't offer you a Tosh, Die and Kao for your b-day^^

[identity profile] oanja.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Uh... what? *_*

I'd like to have my brain back now, please?

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
*hands over brain* Here^^
Glad you enjoyed it x)

[identity profile] olivertical.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 01:58 pm (UTC)(link)
this was too hot. my favourite men all together, yummy ! ♥ MOAR please MOAR.

fantastic job.

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! We're glad that you liked it and even more that those are your fav men too x) Haha, maybe we write something like that again once. It's so enticing to think of them three together.

[identity profile] kristykama.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
this was so hagragaba! I can't find words to describe this~~

it was really good,I loved it, and it even made me forget to breath! the best threesome that I've ever read

this is going right to my memories^^

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:12 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you so much. Your comment now made me grin like a moron.

[identity profile] lotos79.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
yes, this was a good one. :P
I really enjoyed reading it. Toshiya added the right amount of spice.
Unlike to some other threesomes of the same pairing, this was really comfortable to read, and funny sometimes, too! ^^

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It's really nice to know you liked it^^ We were a bit nervous about writing a threesome since we don't have much experience with writing those, so it's a relief it turned out well x)

[identity profile] bishonendreams.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
I love you, yes I do!


And there should be lots more of these three together.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
The feeling is totally mutual ;) Thanks!

That's right, I agree completely. Why is it that people don't write more of these three, especially seeing how well they go together?

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[identity profile] aya-3003.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
hot smut~
thank you
xD

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] wither-ne.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh, loved this one XDDD
Toshiya surely fits in the story, I'm amazed! Kaoru is a really lucky man for having such a great present ;DD

I really had to laugh about this: "You do realize that I," he inhaled deeply to be able to go on, "am old and have a weak heart?" I like the humor XDD

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D It's good to hear that! heh, and I have to admit I never really realized how well Toshiya fits in with these two others before we actually wrote them x)

haha, and that's so nice to hear too! Humor is sometimes hard to get across so it's good to know we succeeded ;)

[identity profile] majesticmedusa.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
That was really hot, I have to say....

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] badnoise.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree with all the comments above; it was super hot, and Toshiya was a perfect third wheel! XD He just fits so well with both Kaoru and Die (both in a threesome and just in pairs.) Usually I'm not that into threesomes (especially when it is KxD) but like you said in the introduction, it worked out very well! :D I would love to read more stories like this, hopefully by you cause I like your stories and perhaps also, a bit longer?! (but not as in MOAR SEX but as in more plot? Even though more plot would lead to moar sex...eeh,yeah! XD)

hehe and when Toshiya said: "Don't whine, I've just been fucked by the both of you and I don't complain either about my heart..."
I though there was going to be some drama because Toshiya tried to tell them that he was in love with (one of)them and be upset because they were playing with his poor heart! XD I wouldn't have minded it though, 'cause love is always nice! ;) ooups, long comment!

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:25 am (UTC)(link)
I have to admit that I like all of the pairings with these three combined differently but somehow I strongly dislike KaoruxToshiya. But when one throws Die into the mix they work perfectly all three of them XD And ToshiyaxDie and KaoruxDie (obviously 8D) I love as well.
haha, and knowing us more plot would lead to more sex too since we just are perverts like that and can't keep ourselves under control XD But maybe we could cook up something! Only that with three persons in a fic it's impossible to end it well for everyone most likely x) But in general I'm not opposing the idea, writing these three would be awesome :D

Aw, and drama in this one would've been kind of logical too, but we just wanted it to be a happy and smutty fic without too much problems XD We had so much to write with the Christmas fics and if we had started developing long plots for this one with all heartaches and such, it would've taken ages x)

Thank you so much for your comment! Long ones are always good, trust me ;) And it's good to hear you liked it!

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[identity profile] yume-kumori.livejournal.com 2008-04-07 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
You've officially killed my brain. So now I wont be able to use it for the remainder of the day...XD

But danm that was really hot..

there should definately be more of those three.

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-08 08:19 am (UTC)(link)
haha, well, should we be sorry or proud? XD I hope you'll regain the brain activity once ;)

Thank you! And agreed 110%, there really should be more of these three!

[identity profile] ainokyo.livejournal.com 2008-04-11 11:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm...dead.
I mean....literally.
I just woke up about an hour ago and started reading this.
And now I'm wide awake.
You- This is amazing.
It's always amazing when you write but this was just mind-blowing.
I think...I'm going to need a new brain, this one I had has been fried due to the smex.
Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us and PLEASE WRITE MORE THREESOMES! *coughs* I mean, erm, please write more >D
You guys should have a pie of love ♥

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-04-12 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thank you dear. Haha, I think it's a huge compliment that we managed to fry your brains. *hands a new one*
Let's see, maybe we will write another threesome once^^

Thank you for writing such a nice comment. You made me smile like a moron. And don't worry, we'll keep on writing!

[identity profile] nightelf-moriel.livejournal.com 2008-04-26 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Really late-ass comment, but hell that was hot 8D When Toshiya spread Die's legs like that my brain went completely bye-bye *fans self*

DiexKaoxTotchi is totally my OT3 but there are way too few fics about them; would be great if you wrote more of them one day <3 <3

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2008-04-26 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
haha, don't worry about the lateness! We're really glad that you took the time to comment now ;) heh, and I have to admit that I liked that scene a hell lot myself as well!

We definitely aren't against the idea, if we would just come up with a decent plot or something :) haha, or then we will end up just writing more porn XD But the three of them would so need more love!

[identity profile] sataviiskyt.livejournal.com 2008-09-25 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god!
I think I just died and went to heaven!
That was really, really hot!
And so long... Waaah.
3-4 rounds, man!
You guys should spread more DxKxT-love, definately.

Oh, and sorry for the late comment. ;>

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2008-09-26 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for the comment dear! It doesn't matter when it comes but always makes us happy.
One round would've been a bit too boring, eh?
I'm glad you like the ultimate threesome pairing x) We are thinking of coming up with more of these, but it's so hard not to make it the same always^^

[identity profile] daidetre.livejournal.com 2009-07-14 10:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, another ultra late comment from me!
And you've made me so incoherent that I typed 'yya' several times instead of yay.
I have no words. My brain is mush. xD
So thank you for that. Bloody hell... it was highly enjoyable.

"It's not nice to talk about somebody who is present," he snorted
That just made me laugh my head off, possibly because I said it in a posh voice.

I must now go and purchase some elastic!

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2009-07-19 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, but hey, incoherency's a good thing here^^

We're so glad that you enjoyed this and you KNOW that we love comments, no matter when they come. Especially when they are as nice as yours!

Purchase elastic? You need to enlighten me XD

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[identity profile] vivid-decadence.livejournal.com 2010-04-23 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
oh.my.fucking.god.

Why didn't I find this earlier...? Right, that was pure hotness.
I'd come up with a better comment than that but... I'm kinda braindead. Very braindead. Wow.

Thank you ever so much for writing this masterpiece *goes straight to memories*

[identity profile] seinen-no.livejournal.com 2010-04-23 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, hey, at least you found it now and you enjoyed what you found :D

Thank you!

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Haha, yeah, HOSHIT x)

Glad you liked, dear^^

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[identity profile] chiironiji.livejournal.com 2012-01-14 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
i'm almost 4 yrs late but HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF JESUS /fans self. THAT WAS INCREDIBLY HOT. AND HOSHIT, THE HOLY TRINITY OF SEX.

i can't even.. these 3 is the perfect combination and god damn, you wrote them well..

It was Kaoru who spoke up first, his words interrupted by heavy breaths. "You do realize that I," he inhaled deeply to be able to go on, "am old and have a weak heart?" The next second, he chuckled a bit. "Damn!"

--> HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LAUGHED IRL WHEN I READ THE OLD AND HAVE A WEAK HEART PART.

this is awesome ;A; why aren't there more ;A;

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2012-01-22 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh but it's never ever too late, trust me 8D

Glad to hear you like it! Those three are definitely amazing together, gotta agree there ;)

Thank you!