I must admit I enjoyed this immensely. The fighting in the beginning and all that couple's-problems phase, their interaction, them being them - and being specifically them with one another, the chemistry. Really mature. Loved the end too and not specifically because it was a sex scene but because you actually added something new to the very-known-well-industry-of-bad-fics-out-there, the thing that Die never did this before to Kyo, and all that Kyo was thinking by the moment was what all this actually meant. It was a blow in the face. It was magnificent.

*added to memories*

I think you guys should write more Die/Kyo. You seem to go along well with the boys and to know their personalities enough to make it work naturally.