Okays... I've read this in one go just now, just because you've said it'll be dark, and I needed that today. (death to those moodswings, seriously.. -_-)
Anyways, you did a great job on this one. You've plesantly surprised me. And I forgive you the death of Toshiya and Shinya, it fit the story too well. Like you said, it was nessecary.
*opens archive to choose the next fic she'll read tomorrow*
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Okays... I've read this in one go just now, just because you've said it'll be dark, and I needed that today. (death to those moodswings, seriously.. -_-)
First of all, Who the hell wrote this and where are fonulyn and seinen_no???
This is so diffrent... absolutely not what I've expected from you.
But I enjoyed reading it, cause it felt so real.. (I'm talking about the kind of relationship Die and Kao have in this story)
It was nice to imagine an easy going Kao that doesn't make a fit about Die having a bit fun with someone else because he knows where he stands for a change. THAT is what I call trust, not the 'I'll be faithfull to you forever and ever' bullshit (No offense, you know I love your stories that go like that too).
And it was kind of amusing to see how naive Toshiya could be. I was thinking the whole time about how much will it take for him to realise the big mistake he's making? Apparently he never realised, nooo, you needed to kill him XD (I thought Shinya could've done a better job, actually..)
But well, I guess it's more fun this way for a vampire, manipulating your victime untill the end.
And,.. (please don't shoot me)I absolutely LOVED the last part. Toshiya felt véry crushed after he realised I guess. There you could feel the love between Die an Kao. Die was grinning for god's sake! If someone only had 1, unreadable expression around me, and I see that person laughing and grinning with another, I'd know it already..
Anyways, you did a great job on this one. You've plesantly surprised me.
And I forgive you the death of Toshiya and Shinya, it fit the story too well. Like you said, it was nessecary.
*opens archive to choose the next fic she'll read tomorrow*