rabenhorst: (minkey; you are mine and I am yours)
rabenhorst ([personal profile] rabenhorst) wrote2012-12-28 11:03 pm

[fic] Minho/Key – SHINee – Drowning in this Rush

Title: Drowning in this Rush
Author: [livejournal.com profile] fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Pairing: girl!Minho/Key (Minjung/Gwiboon)
Warnings: none? girl on girl? first time writing this?
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: The deeper Minjung falls, the more she finds herself focused on numerous details about Gwiboon. It’s p0rn.
Comments: Urrrghhh so. For Nee. I hope it’s acceptable. In the Girlgroup-verse.


If Minjung had been asked about things she finds attractive, she wouldn’t have listed hair even among the top ten.

Not before their first comeback. That is when Gwiboon proves her otherwise. Gwiboon’s hair was long to begin with, but she gets extensions until the longest part reaches the curve of her waist, while the other side of her head is nearly shaven off. The cut is angular and extravagant, underlining her sharp features. Something none of the others could pull off quite like she does.

And it makes Minjung fall a little bit in love. Granted, she’s been well on her way for longer now, but somehow this feels like a milestone on the road of her growing attraction. It’s not like Taeyeon’s chocolate brown curls do anything to her. She doesn’t feel the urge to run her fingers through Eunsook’s bob cut, or to spend hours unknotting the thick mess of Junghee’s hair in the mornings.

No, it’s only Gwiboon.

Gwiboon with her ridiculously flashy hair. Or, Gwiboon with her ridiculously flashy everything, considering her fashion sense. Ever since the two of them began to grow closer, bond over their shared dance practices, Minjung has started to notice little things she finds more than a bit intriguing about the other girl, and this seems to be one of them.

Especially when things evolve even further, when the friendships shifts into something more. After that first kiss backstage there’s the second one, this time in the secrecy of their own kitchen before any of the others have woken up. There’s the third, the fourth, until they both stop counting. There are kisses in the morning, kisses in the evening, in bright daylight and sometimes even in the middle of the night.

And the deeper Minjung falls, the more she finds herself focused on numerous details about Gwiboon. The hair included.

The worst – or the best – part of it is that Gwiboon knows. She’s fully aware of the way she affects Minjung and she’s fighting tooth and nail to be allowed to keep her hair as it is until their next official album release. The initial shock value has worn off, but no one can deny she’s rocking the style in a way that demands some more time for it.

That’s how Gwiboon now, four months after their comeback, is still winning in the big hair drama.

She’s even managed to drive one of their stylists on the brink of a nervous breakdown, shooting down all of the suggestions to change it. So they’ve settled on a compromise: Gwiboon gets to keep the cut, but for every performance they set it up differently. There have been braids, princess Leia inspired styles, gigantic ornaments set in the midst of imaginative whirls and buns, sometimes only little bells and pearls twined into the long strands.

Much to Minjung’s dismay, it looks amazing almost every time. Then again she is fairly sure Gwiboon would look gorgeous no matter what, so there is no winning for her. Or losing, depending on how you look at things. At the very least she’s glad she’s not a guy; otherwise there’d be a lot of random awkward boners in inappropriate situations. Like this, she only gets to enjoy the pros, the stolen kisses and moments they manage to steal together out of prying eyes.

What Minjung loves the most is when she gets to be the one to mess up the perfection that is Gwiboon. She loves to run her fingers through the long strands of hair, loves unbraiding, unhooking and unravelling the buns and twirls, loves detaching the numerous decorations. The most stunning she’s ever seen Gwiboon is with her cheeks flushed, her lips reddened from the kisses and her hair tousled.

It’s way too rare for them to catch a moment alone properly, so when their sleeping arrangements change and they get assigned a room together it’s like Christmas come early for them. A room means a lockable door, and that means more privacy than they ever even dared to hope for.

And that is how things escalate.

Minjung has been spending a slow night in, and she knows there’s a crass contrast between the two of them; her comfy sweats and loose shirt compared to Gwiboon’s tiny skirt and cute top. She’s freshly showered, her hair still damp, while Gwiboon looks like she materialized straight from a make up commercial with the way she looks perfectly touched up.

Or looked. Minjung has been doing a pretty good job in destroying that perfection. For once Gwiboon doesn’t care how her lip gloss is smeared, her shirt hanging off one shoulder, and her perfect curls looking less printed by now.

She nearly purrs as Minjung runs her fingers along one of the pink highlights, contrasting against the natural pitch black. This time there’s one electric blue one as well, and Minjung has hard time believing anyone else would pull it off as well as Gwiboon does. Then again, she might be ever so slightly biased in her opinion.

Minjung lets her fingers slide down slowly, until she can wrap the long part of Gwiboon’s hair around her wrist in one quick movement. Although she makes sure it doesn’t hurt, her grip is firm as she pulls Gwiboon’s head back, angling her to gain better access to the column of her neck. Minjung mouths at the pale skin as she follows the sharp line of Gwiboon’s jaw, trails down to her collarbone.

It’s intoxicating how Gwiboon is shivering underneath her, arching her back to press them closer together. Minjung slips her free hand underneath the stretched shirt, her palm sliding up Gwiboon’s flat stomach until she reaches the clasp of her bra. It’s not the first time she’s gotten her hands on Gwiboon like this, but it still feels new, feels like she’s won the lottery for being allowed to have all this.

That must be written all over her features as the next thing she knows Gwiboon pushes her shoulder playfully, grinning up at her. “Stop looking like that.”

“Like what?” Minjung asks, blinking innocently. Almost too easily she unhooks the lacy bra and lets it fall to the sides, following the movement over a round breast. She’s already figured out how Gwiboon likes it, and true enough gains a helpless shudder with little to no effort at all.

“Like that,” Gwiboon grits out helpfully through clenched teeth. She tries her hardest to appear unaffected but there’s a telltale blush on her skin, visible even through the layer of make up. Her eyes slip shut as Minjung leans down, pushing the shirt out of her way as she replaces her hand with her mouth. She has to hold Gwiboon down then, with a hand on her ribs, teasing breathless gasps from her. It’s been a fun journey, finding out what makes each other tick, and they both know they’ve only taken the first steps of the way.

Easily Gwiboon’s thighs fall open for Minjung, who takes the given opportunity to push up the skirt. It’d require way too much coordination and effort to strip it off properly right now but this is good enough. Gently, Minjung rakes her blunt fingernails up Gwiboon’s inner thigh, rubbing slow circles into her hipbone. The touches are just enough to push Gwiboon to the point of nearly begging for more, asking for direct stimulation.

The kiss that follows is almost filthy, intense in a way that short-circuits Minjung’s brains and makes her limbs buckle, dangerous to her balance. It feels like her whole body is thrumming with the excess energy, her skin crawling with the need to touch, to be touched.

In a sudden movement Gwiboon rolls them over, shoving Minjung into the pillows with surprising force. She’s grinning as she hovers above Minjung, her eyes bright. “You do know I can’t keep the same hairdo forever?” She asks conversationally, but there’s nothing casual in the way she slowly moves her hips to grind against Minjung’s thigh. Instinctively Minjung lifts her leg, bends it at the knee, to provide better resistance and thus more friction.

“I know,” she breathes out, reaching up to twine her fingers into said hair now that she still can, seizing the opportunity. “But I have a feeling I’ll love the next version of it, too.” She’s not even saying it to be nice, or to sweet-talk, she’s honestly convinced of that. Gwiboon knows that, knows that Minjung is a crap liar and wouldn’t be able to appear even halfway believable if she didn’t mean it.

There is no answer, not with words anyway. Instead Gwiboon rocks her hips again, a breathy little moan escaping her parted lips as she finds the exact right way to rut against Minjung’s leg. Her skirt is still bunched up around her waist, her shirt in such a stage of disarray it might be stretched beyond salvation by now. Maybe that’s what finally helps Minjung decide it can go altogether.

Easily, Minjung slips her palms underneath Gwiboon’s shirt to push it upwards and expose more skin to touch. It’s more difficult to get Gwiboon to lift her arms for long enough that the garment can be properly discarded to the side. It’s easy enough to get Minjung out of her loose shirt and she again congratulates herself for the habit of not wearing a bra when she knows she’s spending the evening confined within the walls of their apartment. Her sweats aren’t much more difficult, sliding down her hips so she can kick them off.

Gwiboon is still rubbing against her, sliding lower now until their bodies are flush against one another. It sends sparks of pleasure through Minjung and she can’t stop herself from bucking up, trying to gain more of it. She has a feeling she could already reach her limits from the way Gwiboon looks on top of her, all flushed skin and reddened lips, strands of hair sticking to the sweat on her shoulders, her arms, her chest.

The only barrier between them is the thin material of their underwear but neither of them cares, too focused on the building sensations to bother with taking them off. Gwiboon is moving her hips in small circles, and Minjung could swear she adds bits and pieces of their most recent choreography into that. Whenever she gets more used to the way their bodies slide together Gwiboon changes the angle slightly, alters the pace, keeps Minjung on her toes expecting what comes next.

It’s addictive on its own already, but Minjung feels like she’s going out of her mind if she doesn’t gain release soon enough. She slides her palms down the curve of Gwiboon’s back to her butt, grabbing her hips tight to pull her down with more force. She’s rewarded with a surprised moan, high-pitched enough to turn into a whimper when she repeats the motion. She hooks one of her arms around the back of Gwiboon’s thigh, reaching between her legs to get her fingers on the soggy fabric.

That does the trick and within seconds Minjung has Gwiboon reduced to a gasping, shuddering mess. Not that she’s much better off, not when everything seems like a sensory overload, sending her hanging on a thin thread.

Gwiboon is the one who snaps first. She throws her head back, the sound getting stuck in her throat as her breath hitches, tremors shaking her from head to toe. It only lasts for a few heartbeats before she goes pliant in Minjung’s hands, easily following the guidance as Minjung shamelessly uses her to get what she needs. Minjung arches her back, lifts her pelvis to press against Gwiboon in the exact right way that finally sends her careening over the edge.

Instinctively Minjung twines her arms around Gwiboon’s waist and pulls her close, until it’s inch after inch of skin on skin, their heartbeats slowly calming back down to the regular pace. Sweat is cooling on their skin and they know now would be a perfect moment to clean up, but neither of them really feels like moving.

So instead, Gwiboon presses her face into Minjung’s neck, mouthing at a patch of skin below her ear. “You do know you need to shower again now?” she asks, her voice a low, content purr. She’s warm and languid against Minjung’s side, her soft curves slotting perfectly against the longer planes of Minjung’s body.

“Yeah,” Minjung chuckles, “I know.” She can’t help but toy with the long strands of multicoloured hair again, relaxing as she makes twirls around her fingers.

The silence stretches on until Gwiboon finally breaks it, mumbling sleepily right against Minjung’s shoulder. “I was thinking of bright red next. Shoulder length and a few longer parts. Or maybe blond? Like, so light it’s almost white. But that would need a really short cut.”

Minjung doesn’t answer. Instead, she takes a hold of the back of Gwiboon’s knee, hitching the leg up over her hip. It presses them even closer together, a faint shiver running down Gwiboon’s spine. It only takes a tilt of their heads to slide into yet another kiss, one that begins slow but rapidly gains more heat.

Soon enough Gwiboon shifts until she’s straddling Minjung’s waist, smirking down at her as her fingers dance up Minjung’s chest. “Maybe we can negotiate,” she coos, “I’m sure I can convince you to see it my way.” She scrapes her pink fingernails along the sensitive skin, her laughter echoing off the walls as Minjung reacts exactly the way she anticipated.

Truthfully, Minjung knows it’s a battle she’s already lost before it even began.

Not that she minds.





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please don’t kill me ;_____;

and yes it's named after the Poisonblack song just because the vid does have two girls get all up in each other's personal space lmao. plus I love the song. but it rly has nothing to do with the fic. nothing.

[identity profile] neezoy.livejournal.com 2012-12-28 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, for me? <333 THANK YOU DARLING ;__;

After that first kiss backstage there’s the second one, this time in the secrecy of their own kitchen before any of the others have woken up. There’s the third, the fourth, until they both stop counting. There are kisses in the morning, kisses in the evening, in bright daylight and sometimes even in the middle of the night.
*flails around*

At the very least she’s glad she’s not a guy; otherwise there’d be a lot of random awkward boners in inappropriate situations.
lmao. Oh the perks of being a girl... XD

she knows there’s a crass contrast between the two of them; her comfy sweats and loose shirt compared to Gwiboon’s tiny skirt and cute top. She’s freshly showered, her hair still damp, while Gwiboon looks like she materialized straight from a make up commercial with the way she looks perfectly touched up.
I love this description. So right.

There have been braids, princess Leia inspired styles, gigantic ornaments set in the midst of imaginative whirls and buns, sometimes only little bells and pearls twined into the long strands
Wow so much hair porn in this. I think you're giving me a new fetish. Gwiboon hair. I love it ;A;

Minjung slips her free hand underneath the stretched shirt, her palm sliding up Gwiboon’s flat stomach until she reaches the clasp of her bra. It’s not the first time she’s gotten her hands on Gwiboon like this, but it still feels new, feels like she’s won the lottery for being allowed to have all this.
fslsnökdgnrlögknesldlkdgmdlsflglnrlenelgnegelngekg Minjung is so damn lucky and she knows it.

She has a feeling she could already reach her limits from the way Gwiboon looks on top of her, all flushed skin and reddened lips, strands of hair sticking to the sweat on her shoulders, her arms, her chest.
I can SO picture this. And it is beautiful.

and Minjung could swear she adds bits and pieces of their most recent choreography into that
lmao, I loved this bit! Oh Gwiboon so would XD angelknglekngenlenge


Wow. You have no idea how much this turned me on. Like whoa. It was perfect. AKNGELNGEneöslng. My brain can't even function right now, I'm serious. ALKGNelkgneognalengÖEOPGIN. I think I go need to cool down somewhere. Go outside and stick my head in the snow or something. Yes, I'mma do that.

Thanks, I just really fucking loved this. I don't know what you were worried about. Clearly you have a gift for this. I'm not off your back about lesbian minkey yet, no way! (Mwuahahahaha)

<3333

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2012-12-28 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
you're the one who wanted it! :D ♥

TBH YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVED IMAGINING THE KISSES. I know they're just mentioned but I LOVED THE IMAGES.

lmao yes sometimes it's so good to be a girl XD often, actually. I just had to mention it 8)

tbh I have such a fetish on Key's hair to begin with, it's no wonder I am now transforming it into Gwibon hair -fetish too :| IF ONLY I COULD DRAW I would so be drawing all the hairdos she had in this one and more, where do I get that kind of talent ;_;

and idk I just. am SO RELIEVED you liked it, I was legit scared I'd screw it up beyond repair. now I can sleep soundly and stop worrying, haha. I mean, I did like it while writing it but then I was done and wasn't so sure about it anymore. but WHEW :D your comment totally made me grin like a loon!♥

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[identity profile] neezoy.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
I love reading about them kissing! I could read a whole fic about mingboon just kissing ;A; Can I have that? Can you write about the second, third and fourth kiss or something? The ones before this. I want it ;A; Please? *bats eyelashes*

They're so goddamn cute ;A;

(And I love all mentions of Gwiboons boobs and thighs... I just. Can I have her? Can I?)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
I... could try? I at least love the thought ;____;♥

Only if you share! Since I want her too >:| ..........and speaking of her boobs is it weird I could describe hers but I didn't even think of Minjung's lmao...

[identity profile] neezoy.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
Lmao. With Minjung it's more legs I guess. For me, anyway? Legs and back and arms. I'm sure she has really gorgeous long legs... Mmmm. And a pretty back and athletic arms... Mmmmmmmmm.

Wait, where was I? *clears throat* But yes, kissing would be awesome! The first "real" kiss after that other one that involved vomit XD That'd be sweet.

And of course I'd share! Eventually...

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
OH GOD LEGS. minjung and her endless legs oh man why did you say it now I so won't be able to sleep *____* back, also, yes. mmmmmmmmmmmmmh.

I'll have to keep it in mind and see what comes of it XD but if inspiration strikes I'll be sure to remember the verse~ am growing quite fond of it.

......doesn't sound too promising :/

BUT YES SLEEP NOW. and thank you so much your comment really was so nice ;__;♥

[identity profile] stolenflower.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
okay, key's lucifer hair in girl form is just love and you make me want it now /cries cause i know i would look like a mess in it
the other girls' hairdos are fantastic as well (not to mention realistic)

The worst – or the best – part of it is that Gwiboon knows.
i know right? ugh, s/he knows the effects s/he has on me minho

There have been braids, princess Leia inspired styles, gigantic ornaments set in the midst of imaginative whirls and buns, sometimes only little bells and pearls twined into the long strands.
wow, can i just say this painted a beautiful picture in my head

At the very least she’s glad she’s not a guy; otherwise there’d be a lot of random awkward boners in inappropriate situations.
AND OMG THIS MADE ME SMILE I AINT EVEN KNOW WHY IT MUST BE BECAUSE THIS IS SHINEE'S REALITY HAHAHA

their sexy-sexy scene was very well written for your first time (lies you must have written girlxgirl smut before :o)
and their KISSES!!! tbh, i think i enjoy reading about perfect kisses more than perfect sexy times. lmao.

skdjfksfjansurt OMG THEY'RE SO PERFECT AND SO SWEET AND I WANT SM TO DRESS THEM UP AS GIRLS AGAIN OR SOMETHING

and yes, baby, this is very acceptable. although, you know what would be even more acceptable? het!minkey. oh, that sounds so delicious. lmao. you know what this means right? *hinthint*
a manry minho with a fantastic diva gwiboon, oh yeah. but that's just me talking :x

thank you for sharing this, baby! i'm not sure if you paving the way to GIRLee for me is a good thing or a bad thing...
Edited 2012-12-29 00:27 (UTC)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
aw but maybe you should try it? it might look better than you think 8) ahah I do know I'd love to see it on a girl version of Key XD

I totally loved imagining all the hairrr! it was the best part of writing it I think XD or one of the best, haha.

kisses are wonderful ;--;

AND YES THEY SHOULD DRESS UP AS GIRLS AGAIN but I'm afraid they think they're too manly now ;_; sad. they should take after suju and crossdress easily, haha.

oh my DO NOT TEMPT ME I am imagining the perfect beautiful Gwiboon who has enough attitude to last for a lifetime and Minho with his strong arms and height difference and balancing each other and anjskdfgnbhkjn I might have a thing for minkey in all forms

thank youuuuu :D ahah take it as a good thing!! ♥

[identity profile] stolenflower.livejournal.com 2013-01-10 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
i've seen it on other women (anya from project runway) and they look so pretty in it. if only i had one wish, i would wish for shinee to become girlee for one day and document it or something. i want very very bad ;_;

beautiful hair makes me cry because my hair is nasty and it's alright when i dont have anywhere to go but when i am going somewhere and want it to be nice, it is so ugly i want to chop it off

SLOWLY MY CHILD, SLOWLY, THEY ARE PROGRESSING TO SUJU LEVEL. PATIENCE IS THE KEY, BB
(i mean they're already half-naked and getting it on onstage, pretty soon they'll be crossing-dressing--with tight little mini skirts with NO LEGGINGS--and kissing and omfg, SEX ON STAGE :O

you would write perfect het!minkey tbqh omg, i'm imagining short gwiboon in killer heels still tiptoeing to give minho a kiss oajsdbfaosudfjsdfjlsf im dieeee

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-10 08:23 am (UTC)(link)
you made me do it your fault! lmao and I'm at work

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"I hate you." There's a scowl on Gwiboon's face that's easy to interpret, especially after all those years Minho has known her. It's the I-am-severely-annoyed-but-can't-even-hate-you-and-it-pisses-me-off frown. She's struggling with the zipper of her dress, unable to reach back far enough to close it, while Minho sits on the couch and watches.

Yes. Watches. He knows a gentleman should offer to help, but some part of him enjoys teasing her and her inability to ever ask for it. Besides, the view is magnificent. Any man would prefer watching the smooth expanse of her back, bare all the way to the slope of her waist. Especially when the resulting angry flush on her cheeks is nothing but attractive.

Smirking, Minho heaves himself up from his seat. He straightens the lapels of his jacket, fixes his bowtie, and takes his time with it until he, finally, steps close to Gwiboon. "No, you wouldn't." He knows he sounds cocky but he has every reason to be. After all, he is the one who gets to wake up next to Gwiboon, gets to spend his evenings with her, gets to touch her like no one else. It'd make anyone smug.

Gwiboon huffs, short and impatient, but the next second she's releasing all air from her lungs in a content sigh. Minho runs his large palms down her shoulder blades, ghosts his fingertips over her spine, as he leans down to breathe a soft kiss on the nape of her neck. Her hair is tied up, little diamonds woven into the bun, sparkling against the dark mahogany colour. Easily, he slides up the zipper, closing the dress properly.

Minho's hands find their way on Gwiboon's waist as she turns around, even in her high heels considerably shorter than him. The scowl is gone, replaced by a mischievous smile and a sparkle in her eyes. "So," she drawls, reaching up to loop her arms around his neck. "How long do you think we need to stay in that party?"

Before he can answer, she's tiptoeing to get closer and presses her lips on Minho's. He knows there'll be smudges of lip gloss he'll have to wash off before they leave, but right now he couldn't care less. Instead he pulls Gwiboon closer, arms around her waist, and maybe - just maybe - shamelessly slides one hand down to the curve of her butt.

They're both slightly breathless by the time she pulls back, arching one eyebrow questioningly.

Minho can just laugh. "Not long. Promised."

[identity profile] stolenflower.livejournal.com 2013-01-12 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
DID I JUST GET A STORY DEDICATED TO ME?!
Image (http://stolenflower.livejournal.com/pics/catalog/466/808)

okay, so whew, first of all, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH HOW COULD YOU GIVE ME THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF PERFECTION WHEN I CAN ONLY GIVE YOU CRAPPY COMMENTS?! ;_;

ugh yes minho being a bitch and not helping his woman. how precious omgg

After all, he is the one who gets to wake up next to Gwiboon, gets to spend his evenings with her, gets to touch her like no one else. It'd make anyone smug.
no fair -_-'

her hair omFG must i mention again about how your descriptions are love? CAUSE I WANT THIS KAY I WANT YOU TO BECOME MY HAIR STYLIST OR SOMETHING and then maybe i'll finally look presentable /creys

Minho's hands find their way on Gwiboon's waist as she turns around, even in her high heels considerably shorter than him.
HOW CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE THIS OMFG I HATE YOU STAWP ITTTTTT

Before he can answer, she's tiptoeing to get closer and presses her lips on Minho's. He knows there'll be smudges of lip gloss he'll have to wash off before they leave, but right now he couldn't care less. Instead he pulls Gwiboon closer, arms around her waist, and maybe - just maybe - shamelessly slides one hand down to the curve of her butt.
IM DIE IM DIEEEEEE MIDGET GWIBOON TIPTOEING TO KISS GIANT MINHO IS LOVE OMFG I NEED MORE THIS IN MY LIFE and yes key butt is perfect

they're definitely not gonna stay long because you know whats gon' happen next /eyebrow wiggle wiggle

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE THIS FOR ME BB! I AM SO INCREDIBLY HAPPY I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF!!! YOU ARE A PERFECT HUMAN BEING AND ALL MY LOVE FOR YOU <3333

perfect person you T.T
Edited 2013-01-12 04:37 (UTC)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-13 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU INSPIRED ME see how easy I am :D haha so yes, all for you bb~ though I hope you don't mind I'll post it in the journal as well? :)

and sweeeeetie your comments are always so nice, don't say any bad words about them! they're wonderful and I cherish them ;--;♥

I gotta admit, smug Minho is one of my favourite Minhos 8) HE IS JUST. SO. idek he's smug. tho he has every reason to be. it's not like Key'd pick just anyone 8)

ahaha I would be such a bad hairstylist! I have no patience and I suck with those things. I can imagine styles though, if someone else does them for me then XD

and yeeeeeeees we all know what'll happen next, as soon as they get out of the party they're going to! \o/

ansjkdfgnbh I am so far from perfect you wouldn't even believe, but I am so happy that you liked this! ♥ you're very welcome, sweetie, it was fun to write and killed me a moment of boredom :D

[identity profile] shayvanwinkle.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 06:21 am (UTC)(link)
omg i LOVED the descriptions of hair (especially because i am so into hair?) and girlee always puts me in a good mood. thank you for sharing this was lovely <3

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved imagining all the hair ;_; was the highlight for me, definitely. thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[identity profile] itsjustjodie.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
ssssse-eeeeex-xxxxxyyyyyyy!!
this was soo hot lol
:)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
thank youuuuu~~ ;D

[identity profile] sweetmoontdk.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
This is kind fun to me, cause I never really liked yuri BUT i love so much!
This was hot. Reeally hot. And I love how crazy Minjung is about Gwiboon here, it's cute.

I hope you write more Minboon, pleaaaaaaaaaaase
Thank you for share *-*

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I never really liked it much either but... something happened, haha XD

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear you liked :D aaaand.... there might be more, one day x)

[identity profile] g-odalisque13.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
arg i meant to spot earlier!
spot!
this is me procrastinating from finishing my own fic yay

[identity profile] g-odalisque13.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
sdjkvnjkdngkjfd
you should write more from this universe just saying
gwiboon's hair sounds amazing tbh
and i can imagine her being really stubborn about wanting to keep the hairstyle and the stylists just being really confused as to why she's so adament about it
but ofc she wins. b/c it's gwiboon.

She has a feeling she could already reach her limits from the way Gwiboon looks on top of her, all flushed skin and reddened lips, strands of hair sticking to the sweat on her shoulders, her arms, her chest.
this was just perfect. the imagery is perfect. and also hazardous to my health b/c holy shit fjdkbgskjf

okay so. /stops flailing over gwiboon

this was sweet and it was hot and i loved it so so much.
memming for sure!

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I am enjoying this universe a little too much, tbh! so more might come, when I least expect it, haha.

idk why but I absolutely adore Gwiboon. it's like, she's so much fun to write, to imagine, all of it! might've given myself some lasting images with this, haha.

I'm so glad you liked! :D thank you soooooo much~~♥
Edited 2013-01-05 21:12 (UTC)

[identity profile] koukaiaru.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 10:53 am (UTC)(link)
spotting, cause i promised you a comment but I won't be able to do that until tomorrow. ;A;

[identity profile] koukaiaru.livejournal.com 2012-12-31 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
ok so first of all. THE HAIR. i love the mix between lucifer and a really girly length. simply amazing. if i was minjung i'd certainly develop a liking to it too. And it makes Minjung fall a little bit in love. i love this line a lot. No, it’s only Gwiboon. and this one too. somehow, the way i see it, it really screams minkey to me. like. minjung is making an exception for gwiboon's hair. and you know, since we all think minho could make an exception to his straight for key... yeah, wishful fangirl thinking, but hey. xD i see the connection xD.

princess Leia inspired styles ...LOL xD

the whole paragraph about minjung liking to mess gwiboon's perfection is pure love. and i already told you this, but: It’s easy enough to get Minjung out of her loose shirt and she again congratulates herself for the habit of not wearing a bra when she knows she’s spending the evening confined within the walls of their apartment. haha this is just so minho. if he was a girl i could totally imagine him losing his bra the first thing after returning home, or on the weekends. xD

and you managed to write girl!smut. and successfully too. that - i applaud you for <3.

fgkjdlks
chuu~~

(and i know i'm a couple of hours late and that this was supposed to be here on sunday and technically it's already early monday, but i couldn't do it sooner ;A; forgive me~)

[identity profile] fonulyn.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved imagining all the hair, definitely, it was the way I even got myself writing when I just began babbling about the hair XD

it's exactly like with regular minkey, girl!minkey is such a ...contrast of personalities and it makes it so much fun! :D loving them, frighteningly much.

I'm sorry the reply is so useless but I'm still sick and tired and idk. just. THANK YOU BB ♥