Think I already told you I'm enjoying this fic so damn much.
The opening scene with Jonghyun was cute. This made me laugh: It probably should be surprising how easily Jonghyun manages to pull off the horny-beyond-belief-and-willing-to-pay-a-hooker role he’s given. I always put him in horny-beyond-belief roles, so with this line I was like 'eh maybe not so surprising' lol.
It’s so typical of him, to cover up any of his actual emotions with excessive gestures and expressions. I like that you place emphasis on habits and descriptions of all the characters like this. As though by describing how well they know each other, you simultaneously bring the reader closer to the character, making them more invested in the characters' fates and the story.
Ngl, the Minkey actions in this fic drive me bananas. You infuse tenderness and sentiment into your scenes that makes them so cute. And there is such a lack of MinKey in the fandom rn it makes me sad - so thank gooshness for this. :)
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The opening scene with Jonghyun was cute. This made me laugh: It probably should be surprising how easily Jonghyun manages to pull off the horny-beyond-belief-and-willing-to-pay-a-hooker role he’s given. I always put him in horny-beyond-belief roles, so with this line I was like 'eh maybe not so surprising' lol.
It’s so typical of him, to cover up any of his actual emotions with excessive gestures and expressions. I like that you place emphasis on habits and descriptions of all the characters like this. As though by describing how well they know each other, you simultaneously bring the reader closer to the character, making them more invested in the characters' fates and the story.
Ngl, the Minkey actions in this fic drive me bananas. You infuse tenderness and sentiment into your scenes that makes them so cute. And there is such a lack of MinKey in the fandom rn it makes me sad - so thank gooshness for this. :)