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[fic] Minho/Key – SHINee – Shot down in flames – oneshot

Title: Shot down in flames
Author:

fonulyn
Rating: NC17
Warnings: pwp
Pairing: Minho/Key
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.
Summary: Minho knows it’s wrong but it doesn’t stop him from giving in to the temptation.
Comments: ok I have no excuse I just wanted to write minkey get it on. idk. someone punch me in the face so that I finish the longer fic-projects instead of always writing new short ones in between, lmao.

Minho knows it’s wrong but right now he couldn’t give two shits about that. His fingers are carded into soft strands of hair as he pulls on them, forcibly turns the kiss rougher and deeper. Not that there’s much resistance, not when his companion is as willing as he is to get down and dirty together right now, right here.

Right now is during an official dinner party Minho’s boss has organized for his business advocates. The party Minho is – as the boss’s right hand man – supposed to be watching over so that everything works smoothly, so that every filthy rich guest gets what they want be it a new martini or some coated truffles that each cost more than a month’s salary for Minho. He is supposed to be out there smiling, bowing, being the invisible person that guards over everything, so that the party can be a success and he can earn that raise he’s been looking forward to for months.

Right here is in the coatroom, surrounded by the most expensive of coats and mink furs, carefully hung on the rails running from wall to wall. It’s dim, the only light coming from the small gap underneath the door. Out there it’s loud, people chattering and music playing, but inside the small room every single sound is slightly muffled until it feels like the sounds belong to another life, another universe.

The noisy party might be muted down by the thick oak of the door but it doesn’t mean that the delicious moans spilling from those kiss bruised lips are any quieter. Minho takes a moment to appreciate his handiwork, tracking a finger down the side of that pale face, over the protruding cheekbone and down to the reddened mouth. There’s a smirk as a response and Minho’s thumb is pulled into said mouth by a slick tongue, teased in a way that makes Minho feel like he might just burst in his pants from the images it creates in his mind.

There is nothing Minho wants more right now than to bend Kibum over and make him scream his name. He wants to grip Kibum’s hips and slam into his body time and time again, wants to take him raw and make him bleed for him until there’s no one else. He wants to mark him as his own, wants to come inside of him until he’s unbearably full, wants to etch dark bruises on that white skin.

The strangest thing is that he wants all that, yet he has no claim on Kibum whatsoever. Kibum is the unattainable prize, something he can never have for himself but keeps wanting until it burns him alive from the inside. He’s wanted Kibum from the first moment when he saw him in his boss’s study, on his knees and a dick down his throat, from when he quickly closed the door and fled the scenery to try to pretend he didn’t see anything, and still jacked off three times to the visual in one night.

Ever since that day he hasn’t been able to look at Kibum without thinking back to that day and to how badly he wants to be in his boss’s shoes. If he didn’t know how rich the man is he would wonder what Kibum sees in a man more than twice his age, but it’s obvious there is no emotional factor to that relationship. Kibum has never tried to cover it up, unashamedly and unabashedly flaunting the fact that he’s basically a paid toy for one of the wealthiest men in the country.

It should be infuriating and completely off-putting, but it just makes Minho want him more. He pushes his thumb deeper into Kibum’s reddened mouth, earning himself a low moan with it. He presses down until it makes Kibum drop his jaw, something so sinfully seductive in that single action that it makes something snap.

Within seconds Minho is pushing Kibum down on the floor, coevally making quick work on his belt to get it open. Kibum’s hands are slightly shaky when he brings them up to help Minho shed his pants out of the way and somehow it makes Minho think that he’s not the only one who wants this with that all-consuming passion.

Nothing could’ve prepared Minho for what it feels like when Kibum closes his mouth around his erection and sucks him hard. It’s like a thousand fireworks behind his eyelids and he bites on his lower lip to keep himself from coming embarrassingly fast. Yet he can’t look away, his eyes glued to the sight of Kibum’s lips stretching thin around the girth of his cock when he takes him deeper into his mouth.

Soon Minho is fucking Kibum’s throat in short, helpless jerks of his hips, unable to control himself in the slightest. Kibum makes a protesting sound and grabs Minho’s wrist to push his hand off his hair, instead placing it on his shoulder as if to tell him to stay put. He doesn’t even try to pull back, though, instead focuses on breathing through his nose when Minho’s cock hits the back of his throat repeatedly.

If Minho thought he was in control of the situation he’s proven otherwise when suddenly the sensations are bereaved of him and Kibum pulls back completely and sits on his heels. He’s breathing harshly as he looks up at Minho from deep, dark eyes clouded with lust and something dies within Minho at that. “Fuck me.” Is the only thing Kibum mutters but it could as well be a gunshot in silence by the way it affects Minho.

Fuck me.

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The slide of their bodies makes them both hold their breath as Minho finally pushes inside of Kibum in one smooth, continuous thrust. If he was jealous of the thought that someone else gets to have those incredible lips, that talented mouth, on a regular basis nothing could’ve prepared him for the gush of unadulterated envy that shoots through his veins when his hips slap against Kibum’s ass and he’s sheathed fully inside. Minho never knew himself as this violently possessive person he seems to be morphing into at this very moment.

So Minho stops thinking altogether, stops telling himself how this is wrong and this is dangerous and this is something he shouldn’t be doing in the first place. Instead he pretends that they’re not in a coatroom, fucking on the mink of some businessman’s wife like it belongs to them. He grabs Kibum’s thigh and hikes it up his waist, changes the angle and lets his hips snap forward with such unrelenting precision he has Kibum howling.

He can only hope that the music is so loud no one pays them any mind since God be his witness, Minho will not stop now to hush Kibum and make sure he’s quiet. Instead he tries to draw more of those sounds from Kibum, tries to make him come undone underneath him in a way he’ll remember months to come.

Even through his dress shirt Minho can feel Kibum’s nails on his back, dragging down in a way that would break the skin had there not been the layer of fabric in between. It makes Minho shudder and he surges down to claim Kibum’s mouths with his own, in a kiss that is far from perfect and bound to leave their lips bruised and swollen.

It’s rough and lacks finesse but Kibum is unravelling beneath Minho helplessly, coming undone without a single touch on his achingly hard cock. He whines high in his throat, a sound that Minho swallows right up, and bucks his pelvis upwards to show how badly he needs this, how much he wants to feel every single inch Minho has to give.

So Minho gives him everything. He fucks him hard, fast, unrelenting, and makes sure to hit home with each slam of his hips. Within that, he leaves behind a part of himself he never intended to let slip away.

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Minho finds it hard to focus on the words that flow by him, but he keeps on smiling politely and nodding at all the right times. His suit is impeccable, his hair groomed back to perfection, and the only indication to his impromptu rendezvous mere minutes ago is the way his lips are reddened, the way his skin has a certain glow to it.

When he looks across the room he sees Kibum slip his hand in the crook of the boss’s arm and lean closer to him to whisper something in his ear. It sends a shiver of jealousy down Minho’s spine and he clenches his fist, lets his fingernails dig into his palm painfully. He watches as the old man possessively pulls Kibum to him and roughly squeezes his ass, right there in front of all the guests.

Kibum looks up and when his dark eyes catch Minho’s, he smirks.

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(1491 words)

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lmao do you remember someone saying “I promise the next thing I post will have a plot. like, it will be long and coherent and have actual happenings instead of just banging.”? YES THAT WAS ME. and here I am posting yet another pwp \o/

in my defense I’ve been writing the long fics too and I’ve made so much progress with them, but they still lack some scenes before I can actually post them. but I have a nearly finished taekey ficcie and a nearly finished minkey fic (that is gigantic, by my standards)! so I’m trying hard to get them posted soonish. gonna be out of the country for two weeks soon though.

ALSO HEY GAIZ GO HERE .

and. um. yes.

I shall just leave this here.

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SPOT PEEING

I wonder if it's top or bottom Kibum...

SHUT UP DON'T MOCK ME ;_________________;

omfg that was SO HOT GHJDALSGJLKA;JGDSA
AND SO PERFECT
your writing is so amazing and the flow and wow omfg this is just so fantastic and brilliant ily ok

You

WHY ARE YOU SO NICE TO ME I don't deserve you ok ;--; thank you~

this was literally one of these "OMG NEED TO WRITE PORN" fics ahaha I couldn't have held back even if I'd wanted to.

me 8D

You are a fart :3

READ THIS OMG AGAIN THIS SCREAMS OUT FOR PLOT AND A HAPPY ENDING. KEY CAN ONLY BE MINHO'S SLUT
/clears throat/ excuse the crap comment bb it's midnight and I'm reading smut of my favorite pairing hehe
Have fun on your trip! /hangs around your profile to wait for fics and throws you a santa Claus bag of t o y s

/makes a fist and then unclenches it/

I can't punch you! I just can't! Not when you write shit like this!! Ugh, I want to be in a coatroom...with them both...thanks for corrupting my innocent mind!

but I am your fart~♥

my face thanks you for not punching it, hahaha!

and you are most welcome ;D this moment just completely randomly popped into my mind and demanded to be written so, what could I do~ and thank you for reading and commenting!

lmao don't worry your comment is wonderful! and I know this screams for a plot, everything I do scream for plots or sequels or prequels or whatever and I am in a vicious circle that never ends!

I do agree though, this is definitely not the ending to their story since how could Key resist someone like Minho? hopefully the BOSS won't find out though~

and thank you! for commenting and for reading and for the wishes :D the trip only begins on 27th though so there's still a bit before that~ maybe I can post something small as a farewell 8D

oh god. key's too freaken gorgeous for anybody to refuse.

UNFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

just UNFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

if i could, i would spend all of my ~~nonexistent~~ life savings (and my siblings') to have him. :3

ohhoho, is that taekey i see in the a/n? i feel like every time you post something with the word 'taekey' ANYWHERE, i spazz and die a little. :D

no wait, I KNOW THAT EVERY TIME YOU POST SOMETHING I SPAZZ AND DIE A LOT!!!

...if one day you see a story in the newspaper about a girl found dead at her laptop with blood coming out of her nose and a fonulyn fic up, you'll know that's me. :3

"Within that, he leaves behind a part of himself he never intended to let slip away."
you can never just let it be pwp, can you? lol

PS. Kibum's a biatch

NOW GET BACK TO THE LONG ONES

no. I am completely incapable of that lmao. my pwps tend to have bigger universes and stories around them in my head than any other stories XD BUT IS THAT SUCH A SIN!?

yes, yes he is. a total biatch. but he's still fabulous 8D

AYE MA'AM I am working on the taekey one actually and it only needs the smutty ending to it to be done! \o/

he is absolutely perfect, that's the only way to describe him! ♥

YES I am working on that taekey right now! :D it's not exactly a super-long fic but it's got a definite plot and /checks/ right now it's at 5000 words :D

aww bb you're too nice to me, really! ♥ but thank you so much! lmao don't die though, that wouldn't be fun at all! XD

only for forever~ <3

Oh and btw, this was hawt ;3

You're so awesome at writing sexy stuff and well, all the stuff... and I liked this even though I'm not exactly a fan of the pairing~

Well done to you~ You may have a sticker.

But you are still a fart. Because you don't write me Hanchul :(

thank you my darling little sister~♥ you know that your opinion always means a lot to me! I'm all :DDDDD now ahaha.

ooooh and a sticker too! that is so amazing (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ thank you~

I know I am :( I should write you some.

I think I just hit the jackpot
how did I survive without knowing this was here
how
How.
How?

I just I'll be over here, teaching myself how to leave a coherent comment that is more than just a keysmash. Because MINKEY SEX. I JUST
EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL
Can I just stay here forever ;^;

//sets up a camp with you// you're very welcome to stay here for as long as you'd like! :D

awh and I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading it! hahaha I certainly had fun writing it, it was like... an explosion of inspiration XD thank you! ♥

There is nothing Minho wants more right now than to bend Kibum over and make him scream his name. He wants to grip Kibum’s hips and slam into his body time and time again, wants to take him raw and make him bleed for him until there’s no one else. He wants to mark him as his own, wants to come inside of him until he’s unbearably full, wants to etch dark bruises on that white skin. This was some really nice build-up to the whole 'actually no he can't have him' thing. Very nice.

Within that, he leaves behind a part of himself he never intended to let slip away. I love this line.

Kibum looks up and when his dark eyes catch Minho’s, he smirks. Oh this bitch. /throws hands up So srsly, this seems like it could a really nice set-up to something more. Any chance you might extend this into a longer verse or two?

So I'm quite enamored with this.

if your pwp is this stellar then I will greedily and gladly take seconds, please. Your writing is really beautiful, the flow of the sentences and your word choice makes it read very richly :3 I love how Minho tries to play it off as a no strings attached one time tryst but fails. I love how Kibum seemingly doesn't mind being sexed up everywhere and has fun making Minho's life hard (hurr hurr) and miserable. You work that mink coat bb.

"it could as well be a gunshot in silence by the way it affects Minho."
this line is so pretty! thank you for this, i enjoyed it immensely ♥

Edited 2012-06-20 03:15 (UTC)

Dear lord!!
Kibum you sexy bitch
I love you

wow, this is hot. too bad they're stolen moments. poor jealous Minho. and that smirk in the end? whew, cruel Kibum. but i still love yah.

Awh darling you have no idea how much I smiled when I sad you had commented! :D

That's pretty much what I was going for, and what kind of sparked this all. This... Minho wants Kibum, incredibly much, to the point of obsession, and he just can't have him. Although I really want him to have him too, haha.

I'm glad you do ;---; It holds so much more meaning and idk, it kinda wrote itself, but I was worried that it'd be too much. If that now makes sense.

I COULDN'T RESIST! I love Kibum but gdi he has the potential to be such a bitch if he wants to XD Plus it's hot. Very hot. Nnnnngh. /shuts up

Honestly, I don't think that this was an one-time thing for Minho and Kibum, but when it goes further than that I don't yet know how their story works out. I ...am tempted to write more of it, haha. But right now I don't have any plans on how their story should progress/end. KNOWING ME I WANNA JUST MAKE THEM MUSHY IN THE END but idk.

...I'm a little tiny bit drunk so I'm sorry if the comment makes no sense but thank you bb~♥♥♥

OH MY GOD THAT GIF ;____; oh my oh my.

Thank you so much! I'm... speechless, really. You're being too kind to me :D ahah and you're right, Minho completely fails at that and I'm certain the two of them will be going at it for a lot more in the future. There's no chance it's just an one time thing!

Ahhh I'm so glad you liked it! :D ♥

He is the sexiest bitch of them all 8D /loves him

Thank you for reading and commenting~ ♥

thank you! :D and weeeell even stolen moments can sometimes turn into something more~ who knowsss. and Kibum only does it because he knows it drives Minho insane XD

this was hot :)

thank you!

o maii.. minkey should be together in your next one..
XD

they.........kind of are together here too? lmao at least they will be in the future~

but trust me, the next piece I'm working on is going to end things happier for them ;)

LMAOOOO, KEY..... =))

all hail to minkey having sex anywhere anytime. ALL HAIL PEOPLE!

i love how this is so painful and angsty and emotional and everything amazing.you manage to make it so much more than the 1491wc.and i love how it flows so smoothly even with little descriptions and you pictured their crave and want and lust for each other so perfectly vivid.

There is nothing Minho wants more right now than to bend Kibum over and make him scream his name. He wants to grip Kibum’s hips and slam into his body time and time again, wants to take him raw and make him bleed for him until there’s no one else. He wants to mark him as his own, wants to come inside of him until he’s unbearably full, wants to etch dark bruises on that white skin.

The strangest thing is that he wants all that, yet he has no claim on Kibum whatsoever. Kibum is the unattainable prize, something he can never have for himself but keeps wanting until it burns him alive from the inside.

those lines are so powerful ide ;___;

and the end, omo, kibumiee waeee~ QAQ

so yeah,regarding to your a/n, /punches you in face because you asked for it/ now get to work on your long fic projects :D did i do it correctly?kekeke XD XD XD

and the gift and the end,fufufufu, i legit stared at it for hours with my jaw on the floor even it's not my first time seeing it.kim kibum just so gonna be the cause of my death. not complaining though.thanks for shining minkey's fandom when it's getting darker these days. :)

he is quite something, right? XD

thanks for reading!

minkey should have sex in all the places we can think of! and more 8D

aww bb thank you so so much! I'm so happy to hear that you liked it and that the emotions came across in it :D it's kind of this whole... forbidden fruit thing that makes the thought so hot, haha.

poor Minho is being royally mindfucked in the end 8D but Kibum wants him as much in turn, even if he tries not to show it.

haha you did, unfortunately I'm not really able to work on them much since I'm going on a trip! :/ but I'll get to them asap! .......and I'm ashamed to say I'm actually kind of writing a short sequel-ish thing for this....

I KNOOOOWWW that gif is absolutely stunning and hypnotizing and ansdjkfignbhkjn ;_________; oh Kibummie~♥

you're so very welcome! :D thank you for reading and commenting, sweetie!

...you really got to stop me I started writing a short sequel-ish thing for this :|

this news pleases me.
dooooooooooooooooo it. /cackles

I'm not sure if it's going to be any good tbh. BUT I HAVE IDEAS. I just need to figure out a few angles still~ maybe this'll be a collection of short tiny oneshots. maybe.

Andwae. No maybe. DO IT. I DEMAND IT.
Pls? :>
But really just the tension you created in this one-shot was intense, and I just thought it would be really interesting to see how you could develop the dynamic further, considering how fab the set-up was.

I'm kind of scared that if I go on I'll ruin it all and somehow manage to drag the whole set up down ;--; But I have at least one follow-up for this coming!

oho.. it will? ho yeaaaah!!! *happy dance*
XD

ps: thanks a gazillion!!! *hugs*

I'm planning on a sequel-ish thing for this but to be honest, it's not yet very happy XD they have to go a long way.

aw no, thank you! *hugs back*

correct me if I'm wrong but did you just go away for TWO WHOLE WEEKS (not acceptable tbh) without finishing this??? It must be some ending~

....yess ;---;

tbh it's not the ending really, it's just that there was a sudden plotling and the fic turned from 1k ficlet to a 7k story. it's not even good it's just silly and stupid but I had so much fun writing it so. yeah.

Awwwww I'm sure we'll have just as much fun reading it <33333 ~~if you ever get to posting /merong~~

this was excessively gorgeous despite the rawness of the content, minho's desperation really grabbed me. and i enjoyed kibum's character so much; how he takes anything he wants with little to no regard for the other people involved, displaying no remorse at any point, and yet does it in a way that just makes you want to gain his favour too. the way you wrote him made me want to find out more about him, and where he (because i do believe you when you said kibum is the one in charge) would take his relationships from here.

Within that, he leaves behind a part of himself he never intended to let slip away.
foolishness!

(such a late reply I'm sorry ;--;)

so, first of all, thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed reading this! it was one of those things that just jumped from nowhere and didn't let me rest before I wrote it. I do have some plans for a couple of short ficlets in the same verse but somehow I haven't managed to yet figure them out. plus I was out of the country for two weeks, then out of town for a week, so I haven't had much time for writing in general, haha. but one day, maybe! :D

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