http://mhn77.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mhn77.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2012-05-23 04:51 pm (UTC)

Seriously. SERIOUSLY. Can you just marry some rich dude or win the lottery or whatever it takes, so you can write full time cos I am on my hand and knees here, woman.

This was just all sorts of perfection. The places your words and my imagination goes I ship them, the way you make thing so detailed yet it never becomes boring or too much and how you manage to make porn drabbles into so much more is just making me into a puddle of very unpleasant frustration. Please, don't stop xD

First one: Omg this one was amazing! I love the whole scene, and even though it's a quickie on the middle of the night there's just so much emotion and comfortable..ness orz and love, and I so wanna be in the middle of their little cuddlewich :3 Okay, I officially lost not only my way with words but also my mind. Ignore me.
But, yeah, love how there's a sense of them knowing each other so well, yet there's the excitement of learning more. I love how they don't have to face each other, they just..know <3

Oh I almost forgot, TOP!KIBUM 8D You know me, I don't care about that with these two so I didn't even think about it, but you gave me a very nice top! xDD SEE, THAT WASN'T SO HARD DIFFICULT NOW WAS IT? You get extra smooches for this one <333

Second one: I'm amazed at how you can write two drabbles like this with the same thing happening yet they have completely different feels.
This one seemed much more intense, but maybe that's cos they're not together like in the first one?
And you know I just love it when they won't shut up so all that dialogue *u*
"“You talk too much,” Taemin scolds gently" That's right, you tell him, baby! >D
"“I do not talk too much,” Kibum huffs although it lacks the usual spark" That's right, you tell him, baby! >D
"Taemin sinks his teeth into Kibum’s neck, speaking against the bruising spot. “I want to fuck you.”" I could only squeal 8D
"It’s not his fault that Taemin is sort of addictive" Well~^^


Third one: This must be very dirty MinKey shippers dream come true, I mean, I even thought it was hot!! xD And even thought the most pwp-ish, to me anyway, you still got those emotions right up in there without making it gooey or breaking up the flow of things.

I SHALL CONTINUE TO SPAM YOU WITH YUMMY STUFF COS <3333333

NOW COME HERE (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

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