http://squickz.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] squickz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2012-04-23 07:11 pm (UTC)

Where do I even start. How about this:
“You’ll be on stage and they’ll all be looking at you. They’ll be looking at you, cheering and screaming your name, while you–” He pauses and Key can feel the grin against his neck. “–you will still feel me inside of you."
And this:
“And you will struggle to keep up with the steps. I’ll fuck you so good you’ll feel it every time you so as much as shift.”
(O____________o)
You make me love TaeKey more than I already did.
Srsly, I had to stop while reading both of these statements and read them at least five times before I could go on with the fic - talk about a mindfuck. The dirty talk you write up is splendid. Oh and the whole "you're the one wearing the skirt" bit was cute, too.
But yeah ... those two statements above have to be two of the best dirty talk quotes I've read.

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