truth to be told I wouldn't mind, haha. I need all the help I can get since GDI NO IDEAS STILL. I went through some ~inspiring~ titles last night but there's only ever still vague feelings :(
the thing is, if it's kind of subtly included in the fic it can be really hot, too! but if people use wordings like massive erection (c'mon...) and use paragraphs to describe how humongous the thing it, it starts to sound just awkward and painful. and that's how people often do it. all OMG LOOK AT DAT HUGE THING IT'S SO HUGE IN ITS HUGENESS. like. overdoing it. lmao and my onkeys are both so short they're not even proper stories.
OH MY GOD that is so bad. synonyms is good but... only in moderation. almost everyone seems to use the "dancer" and "singer" and "rapper" and "older" and so forth at first but I think it's good to get rid of them mostly. like, sometimes if you say just "the singer" when it comes to SHINee it's kind of... vague? like, it could be at least Jjong or Onew, maybe even someone else XD
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the thing is, if it's kind of subtly included in the fic it can be really hot, too! but if people use wordings like massive erection (c'mon...) and use paragraphs to describe how humongous the thing it, it starts to sound just awkward and painful. and that's how people often do it. all OMG LOOK AT DAT HUGE THING IT'S SO HUGE IN ITS HUGENESS. like. overdoing it.
lmao and my onkeys are both so short they're not even proper stories.
OH MY GOD that is so bad. synonyms is good but... only in moderation. almost everyone seems to use the "dancer" and "singer" and "rapper" and "older" and so forth at first but I think it's good to get rid of them mostly. like, sometimes if you say just "the singer" when it comes to SHINee it's kind of... vague? like, it could be at least Jjong or Onew, maybe even someone else XD
I love Hyukkie's expressions ;-;