Well that wasn't blathering nonsense at all, cause I 100% concur with that assessment. :) And yes you managed to integrate some of the "stereotypical" facets of his personality without it ever getting annoying. It was a more realistic portrayal.

And awwwww please, bb, I don't care where you post it. The positive reinforcement helps a lot since this is my first "real" fic. I did post the warning on chapter 8 - bolded and underlined hahaha so hopefully no one else will get caught off guard. And as far as the sequel, I actually have about 3000 or so words already written so hopefully I'll get that up soon and you'll still be willing to read it when I do. O.o