Oh you're an ass... A great and awesome one. I envy you for being able to write awesomely monstrous fic like this one. The flow you've built to show how minho's journey from being crushed to find a great bunch of good friends (a lovely bf included) is just mind blowing. I don't think there are any useless conversations in this fic as you said tho, I see them as your way to smooth the flow, otherwise it would be jumpy. I'm not a professional and sometimes (often lol) avoid making unnecessary comments in someone's work. But I can't help it this time, because of this badass fic.

Anyway... Why you separate the smut scene? =))