Selfishly, I didn't answer this comment for a while because I enjoyed having that gif in my inbox so much ;_;
Anyway! I wasn't very clear, was I. I meant the latter, where you want to own people you feed. That's really interesting. Huh. I love learning about body language.
Oh, I hadn't considered that—your writing is usually so fluid that I forget, ahah. I didn't think it's an excuse, but it is a valid point. Good luck with it! I'm glad my notes can be useful to you. And I totally understand you; I never get concrit on my fics and I really wish I would. There's still so much I have to learn as an editor and I try to teach myself, but it's difficult to see my own mistakes. If you're interested in learning more about grammar, etc., Grammar Girl is one of my favorite sites. I've learned so much from her. I really want her book.
Your comments make me really giggly, too. .///. Let's be giggly comment buddies, ahah!
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Anyway! I wasn't very clear, was I. I meant the latter, where you want to own people you feed. That's really interesting. Huh. I love learning about body language.
Oh, I hadn't considered that—your writing is usually so fluid that I forget, ahah. I didn't think it's an excuse, but it is a valid point. Good luck with it! I'm glad my notes can be useful to you. And I totally understand you; I never get concrit on my fics and I really wish I would. There's still so much I have to learn as an editor and I try to teach myself, but it's difficult to see my own mistakes. If you're interested in learning more about grammar, etc., Grammar Girl is one of my favorite sites. I've learned so much from her. I really want her book.
Your comments make me really giggly, too. .///. Let's be giggly comment buddies, ahah!