There were all these moments throughout the fic where "Aww!"d out loud. Really high-pitched. ;_; And then I realized I was doing it and thought "Okay no seriously stop, self" and then another cute thing would happen and I'd be like "Aww--DAMNIT."
In the very last scene you've got some typos, but besides that this was just a fun piece of silly, lighthearted fluff. I think I'm in love with QMi + random other people.
Where else, Zhou Mi wanted to ask, it wasn’t like he spent much time elsewhere than on Kyuhyun’s bed ... He didn’t get the chance, though, not before Kyuhyun cut in from the floor where he was hunched with a controller, staring at the screen as he didn’t even pause his game. “Where else?” ....A-awwww ;_;
It was a perfectly peaceful morning. ...Somehow the idea of QMi talking dirty at like eleven AM with spectators is sort of...idk, jarring? THE SUN IS RISING, BIRDS ARE SINGING, QMI IS TALKING DIRTY IN CHINESE WITH AN AUDIENCE Then again I'm reading this at 10AM so what does that say about my life ._.
This bit piqued even Kyuhyun’s interest and he tore away from his game, abandoning the controller on the floor as he scrambled up, tugging his jogging pants so they wouldn’t slide down too far, only exposing a slice of skin momentarily. icwydt XD
I have to go to class now so I'll end this rambly comment here, but I did enjoy this a lot and it was a lovely way to get my day started :D I should read more of your fics! One day, one day. Thank you for this!
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In the very last scene you've got some typos, but besides that this was just a fun piece of silly, lighthearted fluff. I think I'm in love with QMi + random other people.
Where else, Zhou Mi wanted to ask, it wasn’t like he spent much time elsewhere than on Kyuhyun’s bed ... He didn’t get the chance, though, not before Kyuhyun cut in from the floor where he was hunched with a controller, staring at the screen as he didn’t even pause his game. “Where else?”
....A-awwww ;_;
It was a perfectly peaceful morning.
...Somehow the idea of QMi talking dirty at like eleven AM with spectators is sort of...idk, jarring? THE SUN IS RISING, BIRDS ARE SINGING, QMI IS TALKING DIRTY IN CHINESE WITH AN AUDIENCE
Then again I'm reading this at 10AM so what does that say about my life ._.
This bit piqued even Kyuhyun’s interest and he tore away from his game, abandoning the controller on the floor as he scrambled up, tugging his jogging pants so they wouldn’t slide down too far, only exposing a slice of skin momentarily.
icwydt XD
I have to go to class now so I'll end this rambly comment here, but I did enjoy this a lot and it was a lovely way to get my day started :D I should read more of your fics! One day, one day. Thank you for this!