http://otonashi-alice.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] otonashi-alice.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2008-02-05 02:48 am (UTC)

Wow! And, hey! I was right about Koji slipping up and it getting around. xD YESS!!

This is reminding me even more of Notes on a Scandal now. Except, Kaoru is not played by Cate Blanchette and there is now creepy old woman stalking him. <3

I thought your characterization was well thought out, throughout the part with the principle. Just how Die and Kaoru reacted to the situation; Kaoru with calmness and Die with loudness. It shows their personalities well. And the bit with Die's family gave us readers a chance to see their personalities as well, which was really interesting.

Nice ending, btw. Hope to see more from you.^^

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