again, i LOVE this part so much xD it's probably just cause humor and sexx and fluff are such a good mix(especially when you wite it xD) it's even more hilarious when Totchi comes to rescue them, but actually they don't want to be saved XD(ofcourse not, staying in bed, screwing like permanently horny bunnies is so much more fun XP *perv*) especially Kao who's like "WTF is totchi DOING here?!*grumbles*"
my fave parts(get ready for a whole essay now XD)
Damn! Why did he have the tendency to drool like that when confronted with something delicious? i LOL'd XDDDD the delicious part make it seem like Kao was like candy to him x) which is a good thing ofcourse x)
As he went on, he still hadn't swallowed so he looked like a hamster with the food in his cheeks. "Whud if our cuss is to die hewe?" He tried to look miserable but it was doomed to fail before it even began as he reached for more of the foods. just the image alone XDD the way you guys wrote it made it even funnier cause well, it certainly does look like a thing Die-chan would say with his mouth full XDD that and i can soooo imagine his scared/wide-eyed look, with his cheeks stuffed XD
"This island is fucking cursed!" he ranted. "Why else would I think about screwing with you all the time?" well Kao, that's because you love him duhhhhhhh XD and because you're drooling over him since forever(only you didn't realise it until now xD)oh and Kao please go on thinking about it, it's a good thing, very good eve X)
he generously ignored the fact that he wasn't a teenager anymore since one can ALWAYS blame hormones LOL, i always do that too XD but with Kaoru it's cuter and funnier(cause we know it's just him having a total crush on the redhead ^_~)
"I am NOT girly!" Die protested instantly GO Die, you tell him! oh and while you're at it, tell that to all the people in my town too, cause they don't belive me when I say so XD
To prevent any kind of insecurity from rising inside him, he only acted, straddled his bandmate's, colleague's, fellow guitarist's, friend's or even lover's, if one wanted to name it, hips, doing exactly what he would've never thought possible; he played the girl freewillingly. that was just H-O-T, and very sexxy x) *does the 'YAY Die is topping for once'-dance*
He looked the other man straight in the eye, completely honest. "I think I'm still cursed." AWWW CUTEE~ :3, actually i said the AWW part out loud XD;
i hope you'll write more stories like this, actually i just hope you keep writing cause everything you write is perfect x) *gives cookies*
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it's probably just cause humor and sexx and fluff are such a good mix(especially when you wite it xD)
it's even more hilarious when Totchi comes to rescue them, but actually they don't want to be saved XD(ofcourse not, staying in bed, screwing like permanently horny bunnies is so much more fun XP *perv*) especially Kao who's like "WTF is totchi DOING here?!*grumbles*"
my fave parts(get ready for a whole essay now XD)
Damn! Why did he have the tendency to drool like that when confronted with something delicious?
i LOL'd XDDDD the delicious part make it seem like Kao was like candy to him x) which is a good thing ofcourse x)
As he went on, he still hadn't swallowed so he looked like a hamster with the food in his cheeks. "Whud if our cuss is to die hewe?" He tried to look miserable but it was doomed to fail before it even began as he reached for more of the foods.
just the image alone XDD the way you guys wrote it made it even funnier cause well, it certainly does look like a thing Die-chan would say with his mouth full XDD that and i can soooo imagine his scared/wide-eyed look, with his cheeks stuffed XD
"This island is fucking cursed!" he ranted. "Why else would I think about screwing with you all the time?"
well Kao, that's because you love him duhhhhhhh XD and because you're drooling over him since forever(only you didn't realise it until now xD)oh and Kao please go on thinking about it, it's a good thing, very good eve X)
he generously ignored the fact that he wasn't a teenager anymore since one can ALWAYS blame hormones
LOL, i always do that too XD but with Kaoru it's cuter and funnier(cause we know it's just him having a total crush on the redhead ^_~)
"I am NOT girly!" Die protested instantly
GO Die, you tell him! oh and while you're at it, tell that to all the people in my town too, cause they don't belive me when I say so XD
To prevent any kind of insecurity from rising inside him, he only acted, straddled his bandmate's, colleague's, fellow guitarist's, friend's or even lover's, if one wanted to name it, hips, doing exactly what he would've never thought possible; he played the girl freewillingly.
that was just H-O-T, and very sexxy x) *does the 'YAY Die is topping for once'-dance*
He looked the other man straight in the eye, completely honest. "I think I'm still cursed."
AWWW CUTEE~ :3, actually i said the AWW part out loud XD;
i hope you'll write more stories like this, actually i just hope you keep writing cause everything you write is perfect x) *gives cookies*