You evil woman! I was just supposed to quickly check my friends page and then get to work (Finally) on my school thing but then I had to read this! AND comment! xD
First of all, I loved it.
Second of all you rock, not many people can make me buy into that Kaoru as bottom thing (as you well know... xD) but this really really worked for me!
I noticed this at the beginning: [...let his actions speak by themselves] I think it should be: for themselves. (but I might be wrong.)
You should write more by yourself. Not that I don't love the fics you write with seinen_no but I dunno, this seemed a lot different from the stories I've read from you.
And now I'll go away from babbling here. This was my last excuse to avoid working... >_
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First of all, I loved it.
Second of all you rock, not many people can make me buy into that Kaoru as bottom thing (as you well know... xD) but this really really worked for me!
I noticed this at the beginning: [...let his actions speak by themselves] I think it should be: for themselves. (but I might be wrong.)
You should write more by yourself. Not that I don't love the fics you write with seinen_no but I dunno, this seemed a lot different from the stories I've read from you.
And now I'll go away from babbling here. This was my last excuse to avoid working... >_