ext_60995 ([identity profile] putana.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2007-07-05 11:03 am (UTC)

I think "staid" should be stayed. Also I'm a little curious why Kaoru would use the bed he works with as the bed he'd sleep in. Wasn't there a mention of his private rooms? Just seems a little...gross otherwise :D

Other than that, I like! :)

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