http://koukaiaru.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] koukaiaru.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2013-11-18 01:55 pm (UTC)

okkkk time to get my shit together because omg how lame can i be. kjdfnlksm.

obviously you know how much i love this but, i shall repeat myself (a lot of times) in order to make you believe how awesome you are. this fic, this fic is a masterpiece ok. like, i didn't even realise how much i can enjoy gender bend until you went and wrote this. you wrote thiiiiis. you did it. that's a huge achievement on it's own, i mean, fuck, woman, 47k, 47k, 47k. Not only that, it's 47k of amazing awesome (look how eloquent it makes me). 47k of amazing 3d characters and sweaty hotness that is ho. but ok i'm getting ahead of myself and speaking about the whole thing in general (as privileged as i am) instead of this particular chapter.

ok let's see.
If there’s one thing Minho hates about his job it’s the heat.
if there's one thing i love about minho's job it's the heat 8)

Even if he’s wearing a white tank top
excuse me i can't hear you over the white tank top that he's wearing. hdkjns.

With a sizzling pop the fan closest to Minho decides to give in to the impressive heat.
thank you, fan. i knew you were one of us.

“It’s not that simple. You do know that a car has multiple functioning parts that form a logical whole, right? It’s not like I can wave my magic wand and your car is immediately fixed. It takes time.”
i think i told you already that i love jonghyun, but once again won't hurt anyone, i love jonghyun.

Your magic wand–” She pauses and pointedly throws a long glance at the general direction of Jonghyun’s crotch area. “–however small it may be, does not make you any better than I am.”
Gwiboon <3 this is seriously the best.

“I’m Minho. What seems to be the problem?”
he's not in her yet, that's the problem jhsdfbknsma.

Gwiboon seems to know all of that already, judging by the way she’s nodding at Minho’s explanation, seeming sort of unfocused.
i see you boon, i see you.

“the most action I’ve gotten in months was seeing this super-hot mechanic at the garage where I left my baby the day before yesterday. Mmh.”
boon, honey, it's still more action than i'm getting, stop complaining.

Minho might’ve been hot, but it’s not like she should look forward to seeing him again like a stupid little girl.
nope, you totally should look forward to seeing him again like a stupid little girl. 8)

Objectively, Jonghyun is an attractive man, too, with his platinum blond hair, tanned skin and muscular form, even if he is a little vertically challenged.
i'd volunteer as tribute if taeyeon wasn't in the picture damn.

Minho is wearing the same get up as the first time, a white tank top, the sleeves of his work overalls loosely wrapped low on his hips.
i wouldn't mind if he wore it forever.

He’s obviously been working since there are dark smudges not only on his clothes but also all the way down on his strong arms. Sweat is glistening on every inch of exposed skin, droplets caught in the hollow of his collarbones.
*faps*

srsly tho if i was her i'd already be tongue deep in those collarbones.

This level of obsessive staring isn’t even funny anymore.
on the contrary, it's very funny 8)

The movement draws Minho’s attention, and for a split second he’s staring a little too obviously.
srsly tho why aren't they fucking yet. the attraction s so thick in the air you could cut it with a knife fsgjhdknsa.

Two days later Gwiboon is at the garage again.
girl yo so obvious. *smh*

“It’s pretty big, too,”
*HITS HIM WITH A CHAIR*

“I am attracted to him. Gosh I want to rip his shirt off and pull his zipper down with my teeth, so yes definitely attracted. You wouldn’t believe how many times I’ve been lying in bed thinking of hi–”
me and boon are one, i swear.

“The point is, I like him a lot, I lust after him a lot, but I don’t want to marry the guy.
excuse me while i laugh hysterically.

hrbfdjnkiknfvhknjfd. ok so. idk if i can make it even more obvious how much i love this. i'm sorry this comment is so late, but yeah i'm the lamest orz. but it's finally here dsvjkn. i hope you don't completely hate it <33 ilu bb

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