ok i've found some time to comment sooner than i expected ;a; I L O V E this. so much. and i'm so proud of you for finding a title and thinking up the summary so soon. i seriously didn't expect you to post it yesterday, but just as i was taking another break from buddhism there it was ;a;. and i was like:
i actually really like the title, it fits so good job <3 and omg i might or might not have blushed (a lot) fvadjknslmfjn. you dedicated it to me ;a; whaaaaa. /hugs you and doesn't let go ever
(...) leader of the pack steps forward, snarling at him as if he’s seen something foul. “Are you with that!?” --> makes me wonder if key is some sort of a self-proclaimed super hero lol. i'm exaggerating of course but it kind of implies he's helped people before... interesting 8)
That isbeautiful. --> gfhkjdghfsdlsgh of course it is ;a; i mean onyx strands --> dark haired key ksjfndlfnjkd <3
Minho doesn’t know what kind of a creature this is but he’s sure it’s not human. Not with fingers elongated into claws long enough to slash through a grown man. --> so minho of course goes and falls for it. hahaha XD you already know it but i dig the non-human factor of this so much... so much ;a; /gurgles and dies
It’s probably his reporter’s curiosity. --> probably. that or the fact that "That is beautiful. lol. more like it. 8)
He reaches out and it gains him a warning snap of teeth. --> i love how animalistic key is in the beginning. all the crouching, screeching, growling, teeth snapping... fgkjdlsa. the more of a 'creature' he is the more forbidden what i know is to come later becomes and my twisted mind makes it soo so hot *A*. even though you do make him more human later but still 8)
ok it's too long to quote but the whole scene about the food kibum eats. i laughed so much xD. it's perfect. but um yeah key can't really blame him for thinking he feasts on entrails lol xD.
He hands Kibum the bowl and takes a seat on his side of the couch. His side. They even have their own spots to sit in. Somehow the thought doesn’t shock him as much as it probably should. --> i love how you write something like this which is seemingly not that much but it turns me into a complete mush and i'm here almost fanning myself because oh shit they're getting closer and closer and closer and it's just so cute and hfbjdksashgkjfd.
Kibum spends all of the days inside, usually in Minho’s bed, his injuries still not completely healed. --> where does minho sleep btw? did he just gave up his bed or do they sleep together? i doubt they do just asking... i know later they will /wink wink
NEXT PART PLEASEEEEEEE ;a; ilu ok <3. thank you for posting this so soon. it made my day infinitely better. <3<3
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i actually really like the title, it fits so good job <3 and omg i might or might not have blushed (
a lot) fvadjknslmfjn. you dedicated it to me ;a; whaaaaa. /hugs you and doesn't let go ever(...) leader of the pack steps forward, snarling at him as if he’s seen something foul. “Are you with that!?” -->
makes me wonder if key is some sort of a self-proclaimed super hero lol. i'm exaggerating of course but it kind of implies he's helped people before... interesting 8)
That isbeautiful. --> gfhkjdghfsdlsgh of course it is ;a; i mean onyx strands --> dark haired key ksjfndlfnjkd <3
Minho doesn’t know what kind of a creature this is but he’s sure it’s not human. Not with fingers elongated into claws long enough to slash through a grown man. --> so minho of course goes and falls for it. hahaha XD you already know it but i dig the non-human factor of this so much... so much ;a; /gurgles and dies
It’s probably his reporter’s curiosity. --> probably. that or the fact that "That is beautiful. lol. more like it. 8)
He reaches out and it gains him a warning snap of teeth. --> i love how animalistic key is in the beginning. all the crouching, screeching, growling, teeth snapping... fgkjdlsa. the more of a 'creature' he is the more forbidden what i know is to come later becomes and my twisted mind makes it soo so hot *A*.
even though you do make him more human later but still 8)ok it's too long to quote but the whole scene about the food kibum eats. i laughed so much xD. it's perfect. but um yeah key can't really blame him for thinking he feasts on entrails lol xD.
He hands Kibum the bowl and takes a seat on his side of the couch. His side. They even have their own spots to sit in. Somehow the thought doesn’t shock him as much as it probably should. --> i love how you write something like this which is seemingly not that much but it turns me into a complete mush and i'm here almost fanning myself because oh shit they're getting closer and closer and closer and it's just so cute and hfbjdksashgkjfd.
Kibum spends all of the days inside, usually in Minho’s bed, his injuries still not completely healed. --> where does minho sleep btw? did he just gave up his bed or do they sleep together? i doubt they do just asking... i know later they will /wink wink
NEXT PART PLEASEEEEEEE ;a; ilu ok <3. thank you for posting this so soon. it made my day infinitely better. <3<3