hbdfknjvx i already told you a lot of what i thought when i proof read it but this fic deserves all the comments in the world so... excuse my repeating myself xD
i still love the mood, i love how you make me feel for all the characters, how close i can become with them then i read this, and how real this all feels, like reading a story that actually happened. the 'austenish' feel to it makes it seem like reading a diary from a couple of centuries ago idk. it's also written so beautifully, like everything you write ;~;.
“She has your eyes.” Gwiboon’s smile turns a little wider, thoroughly content, as she looks up at Minjung and rests her head in the crook of Minjung’s neck.
The words send a surge of happiness mixed with bitterness through Minjung and she bites her lower lip for a second. “Changho’s eyes,” she corrects finally, barely audibly.
“No,” Gwiboon insists, in that tone of voice that tells she’s dead set on her opinion and nothing will change it. “Your eyes.”
you already know this is my favourite scene. it feels like this is the moment when gwiboon reveals that her feelings for minjung rival those that minjung harbours for her, because before that it was only minjung wondering, minjung feeling, minjung hurting. *sigh*.
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i still love the mood, i love how you make me feel for all the characters, how close i can become with them then i read this, and how real this all feels, like reading a story that actually happened. the 'austenish' feel to it makes it seem like reading a diary from a couple of centuries ago idk. it's also written so beautifully, like everything you write ;~;.
“She has your eyes.” Gwiboon’s smile turns a little wider, thoroughly content, as she looks up at Minjung and rests her head in the crook of Minjung’s neck.
The words send a surge of happiness mixed with bitterness through Minjung and she bites her lower lip for a second. “Changho’s eyes,” she corrects finally, barely audibly.
“No,” Gwiboon insists, in that tone of voice that tells she’s dead set on her opinion and nothing will change it. “Your eyes.”
you already know this is my favourite scene. it feels like this is the moment when gwiboon reveals that her feelings for minjung rival those that minjung harbours for her, because before that it was only minjung wondering, minjung feeling, minjung hurting. *sigh*.
i will love this forever ;~;.