http://smileyone91.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] smileyone91.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rabenhorst 2013-06-09 06:06 pm (UTC)

UGH this got me right in the feels. I loved this so much! It made me love my OTP even more, and didn't even know that was possible!!!
I just adored the preciousness and love and cuddling and cuteness... It was perfect!
I loved how you made them be so easy-going with one another and that's why they click and work together so well. I thought this line summed it up really well:
The first times they slept together it was amazing, it was mind blowing, it was all the superlatives either of them could think of, even if it might sound exaggerated. This time, it feels like something has clicked in place and it’s a notch more intimate, more personal, an undercurrent of intensity in every single move.
They were made for each other!! I loved how their relationship has developed.
I also love how you made Key so romantic, in terms of just wanting to spend time with Minho, and just wanting to be in a good relationship, because that's how I feel he would be in real life. ;;;
I know there's probably a storm up ahead (were you foreshadowing with the rain during their weekend together??) and I can't to see what happens, but this fluff and cuddles was great! Looking toward to the next part.

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